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Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 21:27 · For: Chapter 43
Awww,That was REALLY sad,you did rea;;y good keeping the emotions real and believeable,Great job,PLEASE update again soon,Great story, *~*Sarah*~* P.s Is the way to heal Snape,the one Harry had in mind,Fawks's tears? Or something similar?!!!! Please Update soon so I can find out!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will have more for you soon. : )


Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 20:32 · For: Chapter 43
Absolutely GRRRRREAT as usual love. I just hope that Harry will figure something out... I want everything to be ok.... They need to be okay... especially for Cam and Sev at this point! I hope all is well... and that all goes well... and your muse stops being a poopy-head sometime soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I've fed my muse some anti-depressants, so cross your fingers. : )


Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 18:41 · For: Chapter 43
I'll reread later, but very nicely one. Well, aside from Ginny leaving Harry. ;)

Author's Response: I thought that was the best part. But, I don't like Ginny, so... Thanks again for the review! : )


Name: charlie black (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 18:37 · For: Chapter 43
uh oh, does Harry make it in time?
(Is this potion kinda like the one dumbledore drinks in HBP?)

Author's Response: Maybe... And maybe. You'll find out soon!


Name: kayla452 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:48 · For: Chapter 43
thanx for this great story i like how well u guessed the deaths last chapter. how many more chapters r there left im desperate to see what happens!
Kayla

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! There's a few more chapters to go. : )


Name: Trickie Woo (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:32 · For: Chapter 43

A story doesn't have to be canon compliant to be worth reading. Some of my favorite Snape fanfics are AU and have been from their beginning. Your story is still very much worth reading.

I disagree on one point though, I think it would be much more likely that Narcissa would see Draco being murdered if she had taken the potion. She cared enough about Draco to try to preserve his life by making Snape take the Unbreakable Vowto protect Draco if he could not succeed in his task and kill Dumbledore himself.. I think she's still normal enough in this story to put Draco's life above Bellatrix. She may care in her way about what happens to Belltrix, but she has shown enough maternal instinct to put Draco first.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean about AU stories. I think my favorite fics are all AU. Or became that way at one point... You're probably right about her greatest fear being her son getting hurt. But she said that about Bellatrix because of her anger toward Snape for whatever he did to her.


Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:32 · For: Chapter 43
NO! How could you end a chapter at a place like that!!! OH CAMILLA! SEVERUS!!

Ok, that was a brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! You should be used to me ending chapters with a cliffhanger by now! : D


Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:28 · For: Chapter 43
Oh my, Camilla does know how to get the information she needs doesn’t she? When all else fails, invoke the name of the man who killed Dumbledore.
Knowing he can’t be helped and being steadily pushed out of the room must be hard. But she should stand right there at the door until they allow her back in. Not go running off, and hide from the reality of the situation. The fear and nausea, and the resultant weakness is to be expected in a situation like that, but I repeat, she should stay and wait.
Harry and Ginny are at odds on what to think about Severus, but I agree with Harry. If Severus gave them the chance to do what needed to be done then he should be there. Ginny is feeling the effects of apparently losing Hermione and a brother, and not feeling inclined to be magnanimous. I wonder what Harry thinks he can do to save Severus. Whatever it is I hope he’s in time.
That potion looks familiar. Is it the same one that Dumbledore drank in the cave? If it is I really hope Harry found out the antidote.
Another great chapter and I hope the next update comes soon.


Author's Response: Yeah, Snape's name is pretty powerful right now. He's feared in the Wizarding world. Camilla is rightly freaking out at this point. She feels helpless and is terrified for him. It's almost as if she's having an anxiety attack and she wants to run away so she can breathe. Don't worry; she won't leave him. She'll be there, no matter what. All I can say about the potion is that you are very perceptive...


Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:28 · For: Chapter 43
Oh my, Camilla does know how to get the information she needs doesn’t she? When all else fails, invoke the name of the man who killed Dumbledore.
Knowing he can’t be helped and being steadily pushed out of the room must be hard. But she should stand right there at the door until they allow her back in. Not go running off, and hide from the reality of the situation. The fear and nausea, and the resultant weakness is to be expected in a situation like that, but I repeat, she should stay and wait.
Harry and Ginny are at odds on what to think about Severus, but I agree with Harry. If Severus gave them the chance to do what needed to be done then he should be there. Ginny is feeling the effects of apparently losing Hermione and a brother, and not feeling inclined to be magnanimous. I wonder what Harry thinks he can do to save Severus. Whatever it is I hope he’s in time.
That potion looks familiar. Is it the same one that Dumbledore drank in the cave? If it is I really hope Harry found out the antidote.
Another great chapter and I hope the next update comes soon. I


Name: Love_Sirius55 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:21 · For: Chapter 42
Oh, look, you've got me crying.....

Author's Response: Aw. Sorry! But I'm glad it moved you. : )


Name: kingdombasses (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 16:05 · For: Chapter 43
wow. that was really great! i hardly know what to say- it was so real to me that I feel like talking about it like it's a story is somehow wrong and disrespectful and inconsiderate... you really brought it to life- not just this chapter, but the whole story as well!

can't wait for the next one! thx so much for this!

Author's Response: Wow! That's very sweet of you to say. It's a great compliment to hear that the characters and the story seem real. Couldn't ask for more than that! Thank you very much!


Name: kingdombasses (Signed) · Date: 08/01/07 20:56 · For: Chapter 42
wow- i found this yesterday and i stayed up all night reading it (went to be at 5 in the morning)! it was great- i loved it, even if u were a bit evil sometimes! i guess i love everything about this story... except maybe that camilla seems to be crying almost all the time... i totally understand, though- but it just seems like she's always extremely sad (and i can see why she might be- don't get me wrong!). anyways- i loved it, can't wait for the rest of it! thx so much

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you found my story. Yeah, Camilla does cry a lot. She's emotional and she's got good reason to be upset most of the time. Thank you for reading and reviewing! : )


Name: Svandis (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 9:56 · For: Chapter 42
Oh now we already know how this will end, Camilla will be a widow... I have been enjoying reading this immensely!!!

Author's Response: Well, it's not over yet... Thank you very much! I'm so glad you like it. : )


Name: MarauderGirl18 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 4:16 · For: Chapter 42
This is one of the first fan fics I have read, I I read it all in one go. Please continue your wonderful story. I absolutley love it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. : ) The next chapter is in the queue!


Name: tonks and lupin (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 1:08 · For: Chapter 42
wow this story is sooo awsome I really like and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I have really enjoyed it so far
Gret story!


Name: tonks and lupin (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 1:07 · For: Chapter 42
wow this story is sooo awsome I really like and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I have really enjoyed it so far
Gret story!

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm so glad you like it. : )


Name: MyCatIsAKneazle (Signed) · Date: 07/29/07 12:45 · For: Chapter 42
absouletly fantastic as usual... I just hope it will all be ok!

Author's Response: Thank you, dear! Guess you'll have to wait and see! : D


Name: oddmentandtweak (Signed) · Date: 07/27/07 11:36 · For: Chapter 42
Can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thank you!!


Name: potterfan89 (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 5:51 · For: Chapter 42
Ah, that was sweet. Snape was so caring.

Author's Response: Thank you!


Name: Igo Retla (Signed) · Date: 07/25/07 19:10 · For: Chapter 42
Again, thank you for the journey you have taken us upon.

Author's Response: My pleasure. Thank you for reading!


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