Wow. I LURVE THAT ONE! You have GOT to do more, [Jane], you HAVE to! Tell them to me first, though. I have to be your beta hearer.
Author's Response: Honey, you "lurve" every one. You're biased. But that's okay =D. You can be biased if it means you like me.
CUUUUUTE!! Continue, please!!
Author's Response: Cute? Well, yeah! I mean, it's James Potter. Of course, it's cute. Don't you just love the way he totally seduces her? Actually, I think the better term is "melted." She's was like a "popicle on the 4th of July."
She does! Oh love it! Please do more!
Author's Response: Teehee. Really liked did ya? That's two reviews from you. Oh, and I like your name. Tonks is "da bomb." Mostly because she ends up with Remus. Remus is "da bombier."
She does! Oh love it! Please do more!
Author's Response: Of course, she does! And if she doesn't, I do! More? Er... well, I'll write more, but not in addition to this story.
brilliant! i loved the way you made lily fall for him in her first year but not want to date him, and i liked the way you showed james mature. the end was so funny and quirky, i loved it! two great stories in a row...i'm adding you to my favourite authors list! =)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I'm a favorite author? YAY! You just made my day. I'm so glad you liked it.
That was great! Is there more, or is it just a one-shot? I loved the end with James' comments. I love James!
Author's Response: This is a one-shot. This story is my favorite, and I won't risk the chance of ruination with a sequel.
i lurve it!
Author's Response: "Lurve"? LOL! You sound like my friend. Thanks. That made me laugh.
Interesting, this is a truly unique story. I love your use of detail. It flows nicely.
Laura
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate that. A nice "flow" is always important to me. Choppy stories are hard to enjoy.
that was a really good story.. i hope there's more to come.
i like the bit with ryan. like how she didn't even remember him but that he was clearly an important name to james because he was so jealous of him.
please do more! x x x
Author's Response: Aww! Shucks. You liked my story so much you reviewed twice. Teehee.
that was a really good story.. i hope there's more to come.
i like the bit with ryan. like how she didn't even remember him but that he was clearly an important name to james because he was so jealous of him.
please do more! x x x
Author's Response: The Ryan Scheme is an idea I've had for a while now. I've been waiting to put it in a story. I'm glad you appreciated it. Thanks for the review!
*sigh* - now im thinking happy thoughts :)
Author's Response: James always makes me think happy thoughts too. Especially, when I pretend to be Lily in a situation like this. =D
Hehe I absolutely had to review this story when I modded. Very very delicious.I really liked the idea of Lily coming after James, especially after he took on responsibility and changed. I'm looking forward, however, to a further explanation as to why he changed. Was it because of something she'd said to him before? Or did he just suddenly realize how stupid he'd been? Also, what did Lily say the second time Dumbledore asked her "why?"
The talk of "Ryan" was very very funny and original. No wonder she didn't remember him!
I also liked how you brought back the old James so slowly and oh-so-beautifully. I'd forgotten why I liked James so much, and your story reminded me why.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! So you think I should right a sequel? I kind of like this one how it is. I hadn't really thought of doing a sequel for it. In this story, James changed because he just needed to mature, not because of something Lily said, but he didn't stop liking Lily. He just took her "back off" message and hid it well.