Name: hpreader1 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 19:36 · For: Lost Souls

Too true.

Name: haydensnape (Signed) · Date: 05/23/08 16:43 · For: Lost Souls

wow....short poem. But good!

Name: LoveHarry_93 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 4:31 · For: Lost Souls

One word.
Perfect.
:)

Name: love_letters (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 16:38 · For: Lost Souls

hats edsakly how i wod fill ifi were in azkaban

Name: loony1723 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 4:51 · For: Lost Souls

beautifully written

Name: HPandGP (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 16:26 · For: Lost Souls

wow i love poetry and i think you captured azcaban perfectly, was just wondering can a tanka poem also be called a Haiku ( Cant spell lol)

Great work!

Name: greeneyeseverus (Signed) · Date: 11/18/07 20:13 · For: Lost Souls

This was actually so good, but I had to read it twice to appreciste it.

Name: rrraacchh (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 19:14 · For: Lost Souls

i like the line 'rapt in nothing but sorrow'

Name: Nevilles Girl (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 12:39 · For: Lost Souls

You seem to have a extraordinary gift of being able to say many things in very few words. You've really captured the spirit (or lack thereof) of Azkaban.

Smiles,
Luna

Er . . . It feels kind of strange to sign off that way right after reading this poem. . . .

Name: Gin_PotterGirl (Signed) · Date: 10/26/07 20:09 · For: Lost Souls

Hello!

I really liked your poem, mainly because I love tanka poems:I read them all of the time!

Anyway, I'm glad that your poem really is a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable poem. I shows that you really tried on your poem and you wanted it to be perfect ... I hope, anyway!

This poem, I think, is so perfect I'm running out of things to say, but I just wanted to let you know that I really liked it. I hope you keep writing poetry, as it seems one of your strong points.

~Michelle :)