Oh, this is a wonderful start. Very curious to see where you will go with it. Your writing style is very smooth and engaging!
Author's Response:I'm already working on Chapter 15, but MuggleNet FF's validation staff don't seem to be awake at the wheel, as I've posted the next chapter quite a while ago... :P
Well, I'm under the same pen name at FanFiction dot net, so if you want, you can check out the fully up-to-date version there. Same pen name at HPFF, too. :)
Thanks for reviewing!