Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 02/19/13 15:27 · For: dull as dirt

This is brilliant. Not my type of thing to read, usually, but I am so pleased I clicked on it today because honestly this is so well written and well characterised. I loved all the details about the pregnancy (I have heard of pica) and thought you captured the details of pregnancy incredibly well, down to the very strange dreams.

This is an amazingly powerful piece and I am now blinking in disbelief that this is the first review. I guess it's the subject matter, but honestly I loved it.

You write very lyrically and with lovely details. Well done! ~Carole~

Author's Response: Hello Carole! Aww...thanks so so much for this absolutely lovely review :D Sorry, I didn't notice it for a few days...I'd already accepted that this story wasn't going to have any reviews and then you surprise me here. Gah! Your compliments! I'm just floored by all the praise - thank you so very much! Yes, I was researching on pica a little :) And I was hoping that someone might pick up on the pregnancy symptoms and all and I'm so glad you thought that they were realistically written. I'm not as active as I should be on the forums; so I don't really know other writers here - which is why I'm always so incredibly grateful whenever someone comes along and leaves a surprise review :D Thank you so much once again! teh