Name: Jadecadence (Signed) · Date: 10/26/14 7:09 · For: Spirited advice

I enjoyed the conversation between Beatrice and her dead relative, Claude. :D But I really think the 'reveal' of her identity could have been done in a more stylish manner.

Name: Jadecadence (Signed) · Date: 10/26/14 7:08 · For: Spirited advice

I hope beatrice gives it to Firenze... :D I'm beginning to get attached to her. Are you gonna kill her off? :( I hope not! :D

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 09/16/13 15:58 · For: Spirited advice

A very thoughtful chapter.

Author's Response: It's the calm before the storm...

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/16/13 14:17 · For: Spirited advice

I swore when I signed up on these fan fiction websites that whatever I read I would leave a review. I like to touch base with the authors and often wish I could do that with published authors when I read one of their books. I write also and although I enjoy it I know it's hard to do and writers deserve some bit of feedback. Anyway, you'd think a ghost would give better advice than Beatrice's relative did. I'm sure the last thing Beatrice wanted to hear was that she could aspire to marry Tom. That poor girl is going to become paranoid carrying that flute around. Well, it was a nice Monday surprise to find a new chapter from you. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm working on it, honest.