Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/16 12:28 · For: Home Life

Perhaps you've guessed, based on my recent reviews, but I've been rereading your stories in chronological order. I do hope this one picks up again. I'm not sure if I recognized it the first time I read this, but the last year times, I noticed a rather large clue early on, and I'm anxious to see if I'm right. Your writing is engaging and the world you've created is well thought out and comprehensive. Your Auror cases make think they could make a good procedural show from that premise.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/05/16 15:36 · For: Home Life

That was a fun chapter. Yeah, toasters are easy to operate but I suppose Ron has questions about appliances that use electricity. I'm not sure how much his father really understands Muggle things.

Name: fi103r (Signed) · Date: 02/19/16 20:38 · For: Home Life

The plot thickens Nott wants Draco for what? comic releif? Between Nott and sexi abbie grrr
If that twit Abbi gets someone hurt or Killed she better portmey herself to azkabann for safekeeping keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Draco could be very useful to Theodore, at least the current Master of Pennerley Hall believes he could.
You'll be hearing from Abi in the next chapter (tentatively titled "Cardiff"), too.
-N-

Name: GinevraMinerva (Signed) · Date: 02/18/16 16:13 · For: Home Life

I know I reviewed this a couple of hours ago, but I'm having a horrifying epiphany!! The fugitives plan is for Millie Flynn at the how to be a witch shop in Newcastle to sell Daisy the love/hate dementor essence potion and try to get her and Dudley to kill Harry at Dudley's 21st... Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia are going to be horrified: Harry is ruining stuff with all these freaks again... I really hope I'm wrong. Or that Daphne helps the Aurors stop them before it gets to that.

Author's Response: Hi
Your epiphany deserves a reply of its own. There are some great ideas here, I wish I'd thought of some of them. At least one thing you've said is 100% correct. You don't want me to tell you which one, do you? That would spoil the fun.
-N-

Name: GinevraMinerva (Signed) · Date: 02/18/16 8:34 · For: Home Life

Tension's building!! Loved this update, seeing the different couples in their home life was simultaneously sweet and not-too-fluffy, given the plot development happening at the same time. Your characters are always so detailedly right, it's truly fantastic. Can't wait to hear more, and I really hope Theodore and Pansy haven't prevented Bletchley from picking up tomorrow morning's delivery!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I wanted to show the differences between Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny as couples while also moving the storyline forward. The next chapter will be entirely set in Cardiff, and you'll discover whether they capture Bletchley.
-N-