Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/19/15 0:29 · For: Cymru

Poor Mundungus--still living his stupid life. I could never figure out why Dumbledore thought he was useful. It seems that all he ever did was steal.

Author's Response: I agree. I think that his only value might be his shady contacts.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/18/15 21:24 · For: Belgravia Mews

Thanks for the translation at the end. I thought I wasn't reading in English. :D I wonder what they'll find out from the Malfoys.

Author's Response: I’m always uncertain as to how “British” to make my stories. Any Brit who watches a UK based cop show whether it’s as daft as “Midsomer Murders” as cheap and cheerful as “Suspects”, or as grim as “Luther” knows all of the standard abbreviations. Terms like DI, MIT, SOCO, and SIO are bandied around all the time (perhaps not in Midsomer). Is it too much?

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/18/15 19:05 · For: The Burrow (Mostly)

That sounds like a fun game--watching other people and making up what they said. That motorbike sounds awesome!

Author's Response: It is. As for Harry’s (or Sirius’) bike, you’ll be seeing a lot more of it.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/18/15 18:07 · For: To the North

I think you did a wonderful job on Daisy's accent, although I don't know anything about that:D. I just sounded good. I loved this chapter. It was good to see Dudley and Harry getting along so well. I really had to laugh that Daisy thinks she's a witch because she learned how at a local "witch store." Dudley looked horrified but Harry did give advice on not telling the elder Dursleys.

Author's Response: Daisy’s accent is mine. Although I try to moderate it, I know from experience that if I taak ower quick (talk too quickly) no one outside can understand me. Years of reading novels helped with my writing, but I sometimes wonder if some northern expressions creep in. You’ll see more of Dud ‘n Daze later.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/18/15 2:12 · For: Easter in Little Whinging

I sent the last message by mistake. I was trying to say that in all the reading I've done, Vernon never changes his attitude toward Harry.

Author's Response: :D

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/18/15 2:09 · For: Easter in Little Whinging

I like stories when Dudley and Harry get together after the War. I don't think Vernon ever turned to the right page, in all the stories i'v

Author's Response: JKR (I’m sure deliberately) made Vernon a stereotypical “Little Englander” bigot. He can never change.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/17/15 23:59 · For: Prologue: A Surrey Start

I live in a small town and my neighbors are often nosy and act just like the Dursleys' neighbors do. I loved it when Ginny took off her helmet and waved.

Author's Response: Possibly it’s because I had a lot of problems uploading it. It didn’t seem to work.

Name: desertsol98 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/15 19:42 · For: Diagon Alley

I was so happy to see this! I must say I love your interpretation of Lavender. I

Author's Response: Thanks, Lavender will be back soon. -N-

Name: minervassister (Signed) · Date: 08/02/15 12:44 · For: Diagon Alley

Wonderful! Lavender great as ever!
Thanks for another great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks.
I’ve been having problems uploading my stories, but that seems to be resolved now.
-N-

Name: minervassister (Signed) · Date: 08/02/15 12:41 · For: City of Westminster

Great! Don't know how I missed this episode but I'm having the joy of reading this one and the next one after another.

Author's Response: Thanks. More soon, I hope. -N-

Name: fi103r (Signed) · Date: 07/31/15 21:17 · For: Diagon Alley

Love it! Lavender is priceless I was the only dude in a office ed class listening to the chicks scortch the paint with their diatribes about boys was priceless good work with Bobbie leading the charge Draco was Draco and Asti fell right into Lavender's web

Author's Response: Thanks.
I spent several months as one of only three men I a store. I know what you mean. I’ll leave you to decide how much of Lavender’s diatribe she really meant.
-N-

Name: Cinderella Angelina (Signed) · Date: 07/31/15 17:19 · For: Diagon Alley

Definitely one of my favorite things about your writing are the little canon details you mention that most people ignore or forget. Like that George is shorter than other Weasleys, or that Neville is blond.

Also, I love your Lavender a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks. Neville is fair-haired, and the Ron was taller than the twins when he was a first-year. Unlike the Phelps twins, they’re short and burly.
Lavender is a pain, but she’s fun to write.
-N-

Name: MagicMirror15256 (Signed) · Date: 07/16/15 23:30 · For: City of Westminster

I'm really excited for the next chapter! I found this series yesterday and have speed-read through it. I'm really liking Bobbie and her perspective of the magic world. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more from you soon! -L

Author's Response: Thank you. This is Bobbie's "origin story" and those folk who have read my "MIT" stories now finally know how she was recruited. -N-

Name: fi103r (Signed) · Date: 06/06/15 20:43 · For: City of Westminster

Yaaah! Another one batted over the fence Harry has a live one here! Got a good one in there frying Kingsly's brain on Muggle police work. Snicker, no one thought about crooks getting married? swish -Streeeeike one
Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and sorry for the delayed reply. Bobbie will be back soon, but next it's Harry and the ganf, and Draco, and Astoria. -N-

Name: Sannah (Signed) · Date: 08/14/14 0:13 · For: Prologue: A Surrey Start

I was thrilled to see this update and really love the way you provide the backstory for your original characters while telling the stories featuring HP characters
One thing I did not get about this chapter ways why did Harry and Hermione not provide more information about magical world since they both lived muggle and had to learn about the magical world.
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter (of FaF or anything else you write)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Hermione didn’t want to say anything, Harry was simply answering Bobbie’s questions. Besides, they have both been in the magical world for ten years.

Name: desertsol98 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/14 13:36 · For: Islington Evening

Yay another update! I think Bobbie is handling it all rather well.

I am happy with the fact that Harry is able call Ginny out on being a bad looser, it keeps in "real" in my mind and not many fanfic writers do that with this couple.

Author's Response:
Bobbie is doing okay. Although she has no idea what she's letting herself in for.
I'm sure that, like all sporting professionals, Ginny doesn't like to lose. It goes with the territory.
-N-

Name: ABowtrucklesNiffler (Signed) · Date: 08/11/14 6:37 · For: Islington Evening

This story just keeps getting better and better. I love seeing both Harry and Ginny and Ron and Hermione's relationships from other people's points of view. Great way to begin the week, thank you so much. Looking forward to more of your stories, hoping for some more of 'Epithalamium' soon?

Author's Response:
Thank you.
It will be some time before Bobbie sees Ginny and Hermione, but she’ll be seeing Harry sooner than she thinks.
Next may be Research and Development or Epithalamium, I’m not sure which will be finished first.
-N-

Name: fi103r (Signed) · Date: 08/10/14 18:53 · For: Islington Evening

Poor Bobbie
fell down the rabbit hole we (US readers) fell into back in 98 She gives Muggleborn a new definition. She did want answers, for some reason she doesn't seem to think much of the info she is getting.
Looks like she is holding up OK
can't wait til she sees Kreacher or better yet Luna
Excellent keep up the good work!

Author's Response:
Thanks.
Next: Harry and Kingsley have a chat; Bobbie gets more information, chooses sides, and gives some useful information; and, Lavender is Lavender.
No Kreacher or Luna, but the Ministry.
-N-

Name: minervassister (Signed) · Date: 08/10/14 12:26 · For: Islington Evening

Wonderful!
Bobbie finally finds out about magic.
Poor Hermione all those broken rules!
What is Kingsley going to say in the morning?

Author's Response:
Thanks
It’s taken a while (years since she first featured in one of my stories).
You’d think she’d be used to it by now.
You’ll find out soon.
-N-

Name: desertsol98 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/14 13:53 · For: Chelsea Girl, Soho Gang

I really like this chapter. I really enjoyed seeing how much work Bobbie put into this and I can see why Harry wanted her for M.I.T.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll be seeing a lot more of Bobbie. -N-

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