Name: wanglili (Signed) ·
Date: 10/06/17 5:51 ·
For: Chapter 1: A Flickering Flame
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Name: y741178881 (Signed) · Date: 08/28/17 10:04 · For: Chapter 1: A Flickering Flame
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Name: indigo_mouse (Signed) · Date: 02/28/15 21:08 · For: Chapter 1: A Flickering Flame
Very nicely written. You captured the moment of hope extinguished, happiness murdered. JKR doesn't spend a lot of time describing Azkaban, leaving it to our imaginations. You have done a fine job of imagining it and then describing it to us without melodrama. It is dark, but we know that there is hope, even if Sirius does not. And we know that when Sirius does die, he dies beloved once again, so that is a comfort that informs the story you tell. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Name: WillHeroX (Signed) · Date: 01/18/15 9:17 · For: Chapter 1: A Flickering Flame
First off, I like the premise of a story centered around Azkaban and I was looking forward to reading this story. Truth is, my expectations were fulfilled quite well! Sirius Black is depicted as a scraggly, gaunt man whose a shell of his former self. He remembers the glory days with his friends (Peter, James, Remus, etc.) while trying to cope with his stay at Azkaban which is the prime factor in his transformation from energetic youth to hardened prisoner. I especially enjoy reading through the part where the two Aurors taunt Sirius and he doesn't respond; knowing that will only fuel their drive to belittle him. Also, the overall atmosphere and ambiance were very fitting. The Dementor scene was magnificent and I couldn't picture it any better. Overall, the story and writing was as good as it gets. 10/10
~WillHeroX
Author's Response: Thank you, I work really hard on my writing so it makes me really happy to get reviews. I honestly don't upload here much because of that, not many being on here anymore...although I am uploading a Founder's fic, just submitted it. It'll be the first I've put up since this one.