Name: dreamsnape (Signed) · Date: 07/21/15 22:50 · For: Chapter 1

Nice story. I liked seeing that there might be more to Dudley than we had imagined. In the books we only see him from Harry's point of view. It was good that both Dudley and Cho seemed open to the idea of liking each other.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 07/08/15 14:52 · For: Chapter 1

I smiled at the end.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 07/07/15 18:55 · For: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story! I really liked how you portrayed the Dursley family, especially Petunia and Dudley. It suggests the possibility of change while Vernon sounds like an old fuddy-duddy who is incapable of change even if he needs to. I was left wondering why Petunia was a bit misty eyed and why Dudley suddenly displayed a boldness in approaching Cho. We're used to seeing him as a bully. It was a nice thought to think that maybe Dudley did grow up to appreciate a witch and magic rather than hate what he didn't understand as with Vernon.