Name: aub_1344 (Signed) · Date: 02/16/16 12:07 · For: Chapter 2: The Order

Peter's POV is very well-done. A little resentment, a little justification, a little fear; you really show his motivations for turning traitor without being obvious. And no remorse, I think that's really interesting. He's immediately jumped into his new role with both feet, even feeling smug about his position. I think you're doing a great job of keeping everyone in-character as well. I'm interested to see where this goes and what kind of plotline you're planning.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 07/30/15 18:47 · For: Prologue: Assignment

Like the style.