MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!
Reviews For Not From Others

Name: wq123 (Signed) · Date: 04/20/17 5:57 · For: Chapter One: A Warrior Falls

The mass milwaukee bucks jersey protests sacramento kings continued kate spade bags in cheap jerseys South cheap oakley sunglasses Africa, timberland outlet and the Spear of the oakley sunglasses Nation adidas online shop claimed coach bags outlet responsibility eagles jerseys for reebok more than 70 acts oakley sunglasses cheap of sabotage. suns jersey On August prada outlet 4, cavaliers jersey 1962, falcons jerseys Mandela was arrested tory burch sandals by South vans schuhe African true religion outlet police ny jersey and charged browns jerseys with polo outlet store organizing michael kors outlet illegal polo outlet online demonstrations. Once nike air max again he replica watches used his courtroom appearance as soccer shoes an nike.dk opportunity to jets jerseys challenge the legality swarovski crystal of stephen curry shoes South Africa’s jordan retro minority replica watches rule. spurs jerseys His defense was kate spade handbags masterful handbags outlet and eloquent, giuseppe zanotti sneakers but nfl jerseys he was texans jerseys nevertheless burberry sale convicted true religion outlet and sentenced ray ban uk to tommy hilfiger canada five nike huarache years purses and handbags in the north face outlet prison. ray ban wayfarer While ralph lauren outlet online he coach outlet was serving this sentence, the toronto raptors jersey police minnesota timberwolves jersey connected him to Spear cheap jerseys of the hollisterco Nation miami heat and north face jackets charged nike air max him dolphins jerseys with air jordan retro the prada shoes more serious michael jordan crimes of north face backpacks treason michael kors outlet online sale and sabotage. hollister online After washington wizards jersey yet nike blazers another nj jerseys trial, warriors jerseys he juicy couture was sentenced nike roshe run to life in michael kors outlet prison nike air max in hornets jersey June of mbt womens shoes 1964.

Mandela longchamp outlet was true religion sent www.tommyhilfiger.nl to Robben louboutin Island, nike store uk a prison seven nfl jerseys miles off adidas superstar the coast nike running shoes of polo outlet Cape Town. longchamp taschen There he nike running endured years of fendi hard labor quarrying limestone broncos jerseys and harvesting louboutin shoes seaweed, while his wife ed hardy clothing faced almost new balance shoes constant rolex replica police red bottom harassment puma online shop at oakley sunglasses home. In the calvin klein outlet eyes michael kors of polo ralph the veneta South African government, michael kors v?skor Nelson red bottom Mandela had effectively michael kors handbags ceased to exist. ralph lauren factory store Mere nike air max thea discussions of his hoodies store views or questions ralph lauren outlet about his coach black friday health easton bats were illegal, and oakley sunglasses he nike free run was allowed true religion jeans women no contact marc by marc jacobs with the coach bags outlet outside world nike store and few burberry online shop visitors. air max 2014 Mandela never lost vans shoes faith vans outlet in burberry sale his cause, however--and swarovski the black celine outlet people utah jazz jersey of coach factory outlet online South Africa cheap ray ban never michael kors purses forgot cheap jerseys their nfl jerseys fearless michael kors hero. nike shoes As christian louboutin uk his burberry outlet store years dsquared2 of abercrombie imprisonment dragged on, he assumed ralph lauren the asics gel mantle of converse chucks martyrdom and became nike store a toms shoes outlet symbol of a government’s nike air huarache desperate michael kors uhren efforts to maintain minority burberry rule.The mass adidas shoes protests continued coach factory outlet online in South jordans for sale Africa, sunglasses for women and orlando magic jersey the prada Spear longchamp handbags of hollister co the Nation claimed 49ers jerseys responsibility oakley outlet for polo ralph lauren outlet online more prada tracksuits than bears jerseys 70 long champ acts of sabotage. ray ban occhiali On August michael kors outlet online sale 4, roshe run 1962, Mandela hilfiger outlet was bcbg max azria arrested north face by South African police ralph lauren polo and bulls jerseys charged with montre homme organizing pandora charms illegal michael kors purses demonstrations. chi flat iron Once again saints jerseys he lacoste shirts used philipp plein his 76ers jerseys courtroom appearance as cheap jerseys an chi hair opportunity rayban to givenchy shoes outlet challenge cheap nike shoes the ferragamo shoes legality nike air force of michael kors outlet online South Africa’s minority rayban rule. air max thea His soccer shoes outlet defense cheap oakley sunglasses was masterful and eloquent, hilfiger online shop but he toms shoes outlet was cheap oakley sunglasses nevertheless convicted jimmy choo outlet and oakley sunglasses cheap sentenced michael kors to jordan shoes five years oakley sunglasses in prison. burberry handbags outlet While airmax he was michael kors handbags serving this sentence, azcardinals jerseys the police connected ralph lauren black friday him tommy hilfiger online to Spear coach outlet usa of instyler ionic styler the new balance Nation and charged portland trail blazers jersey him michael kors handbags with the pandora canada more serious mcm handbags crimes of swarovski jewelry treason jordan shoes and cheap michael kors sabotage. north face jackets After nike air max yet another trial, adidas zx flux he barbour jackets was longchamp outlet sentenced ray-ban sunglasses to life dre headphones in michael kors prison armani outlet online in June adidas superstar of 1964.

Mandela air jordan shoes was jaguars jerseys sent patriots jerseys to oakley Robben air max Island, coach outlet store a chrome hearts rings prison seven nike factory miles off the longchamp handbags coast of omega watches Cape Town. coach bags outlet There nike roshe run he coach shop endured mizuno running shoes years burberry outlet online of polo ralph lauren outlet hard labor quarrying limestone and harvesting denver nuggets jerseys seaweed, while his ray bans wife new balance faced air max 90 almost los angeles lakers constant tommy hilfiger outlet police harassment valentino outlet at home. In the ravens jerseys eyes chargers jerseys of the South ray ban zonnebril African government, barbour mens jackets Nelson Mandela ipad mini cases had effectively ceased to true religion jeans men exist. michael kors Mere north face canada discussions gafas oakley of ray ban sunglasses his giants jerseys views or questions rolex about wedding dress his toms outlet health were illegal, coach outlet and he was replica rolex allowed no contact tommy hilfiger with cowboys jerseys the timberland boots outside world relojes and few hollister visitors. Mandela nike fu?ballschuhe never lost jimmy choo faith in coach outlet online his red bottom shoes cause, new orleans pelicans jersey however--and tory burch handbags the christian louboutin shoes black people burberry of philipp plein clothing South pandora jewellery australia Africa ralph lauren online shop never polo ralph lauren forgot levis jeans their ray ban sunglasses fearless bills jerseys hero. As mavericks jerseys his cheap michael kors years hermes outlet of nike.se imprisonment dragged oakley sunglasses on, he assumed bottega veneta the ralph lauren mantle of adidas martyrdom mcm handbags and roshes became lunette ray ban a ray bans symbol oakley sunglasses outlet of prada outlet a mcm handbags government’s desperate efforts zapatillas nike to salvatore ferragamo maintain minority rule.The prada handbags mass designer handbags protests nike roshe run continued giuseppe zanotti in South Africa, michael kors outlet and longchamp the true religion jeans outlet Spear of ray ban outlet the oakley sunglasses outlet Nation claimed cheap oakley responsibility for ray ban outlet more marc by marc jacobs than burberry outlet online 70 acts of sabotage. nike roshe run On thomas sabo uk August chiefs jerseys 4, swarovski australia 1962, Mandela was the north face arrested adidas.se by babyliss flat iron South burberry outlet online African police celtics jersey and nike air max charged with organizing adidas yeezy shoes illegal timberland demonstrations. hugo boss outlet online Once polo ralph lauren again he nike free used burberry his coach usa courtroom appearance oakley frogskins as christian louboutin an opportunity to burberry outlet store challenge beats audio the legality kate spade of nike free 5.0 South Africa’s converse outlet minority rule. michael kors uk His packers jerseys defense coach outlet sale was mcm bags masterful and polo ralph lauren eloquent, asics but nike.com he was nevertheless oakley convicted retro jordans and sentenced ralph lauren polo to toms shoes outlet five titans jerseys years buccaneers jerseys in oakley prison. nike mercurial vapor While okc jerseys he raiders jerseys was polo ralph lauren serving this houston rockets sentence, barbour jackets the supra footwear police burberry outlet connected beats by dre headphones him versace outlet to vikings jerseys Spear of ralph lauren the montblanc Nation nike soccer shoes and new balance outlet charged swarovski online shop him with the steelers jerseys more serious crimes nike running shoes of hollister co treason michael kors outlet and sabotage. After fivefingers yet another michael kors bags trial, nba jerseys he was thomas sabo sentenced indiana pacers jersey to p90x3 life dsquared2 outlet in rolex watches prison juicy couture outlet in michael kors June ferragamo of coach factory online 1964.

Mandela purses and handbags was sent nike schoenen to Robben michael kors handbags Island, burberry outlet store a cheap nfl jerseys prison seven pandora miles toms outlet online off eyeglasses stores the michael kors bags coast hogan sito ufficiale of Cape lac jersey Town. There replica watches he womens clothing endured years coach outlet online of pandora charms hard uhren shop labor atlanta hawks jerseys quarrying detroit pistons limestone and adidas sneakers harvesting dre beats seaweed, hermes belt while hogan his tory burch wife toms.com faced barbour womens jackets almost timberland outlet constant michael kors outlet online police celine outlet harassment oakley sunglasses at barbour jacket outlet home. kate spade In the eyes of air max the South African government, toms shoes Nelson toms shoes outlet Mandela nike air max had effectively lions jerseys ceased bengals jerseys to exist. ecco shoes outlet Mere cheap basketball shoes discussions redskins jerseys of pandora bracelet his cheap jerseys views or converse shoes questions panthers jerseys about his ralph lauren outlet online health were seahawks jerseys illegal, swarovski crystal and the north face he woolrich womens jackets was allowed no converse sneakers contact with rams jerseys the mcm backpack outside world and ray ban wayfarer few hermes birkin bag visitors. nike tn Mandela never longchamp lost bcbg max faith in his ray ban outlet cause, however--and easton bats the puma shoes outlet black people ray ban sunglasses outlet of South cheap shoes Africa rayban never forgot north face outlet their michael kors australia fearless hero. As ray ban pas cher his years nike huarache of tory burch sandals imprisonment northface dragged on, iphone 4s cases he assumed the air max mantle of martyrdom and memphis grizzlies jersey became new balance a symbol coach purses outlet of a government’s coach outlet online desperate nba jerseys efforts hollister clothing to maintain colts jerseys minority salomon schuhe rule.

rolex watches

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 18:24 · For: Chapter Thirty Five: An Epilogue
That was a nice ending. It wasn't necessarily happy but it showed a family recovering from its grief. I've enjoyed this story and now I can whole-heartedly read your new story. Thanks for writing this and I'll see you in the reviews of Aurors.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 18:05 · For: Chapter Thirty Four: With Love
I can't imagine how tired Harry must have been. I think I would've just collapsed. He probably has this weird let down feeling too after feeling so bad for so long. He's probably looking around and going "what's next"?

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 17:05 · For: Chapter Thirty Three: Alive
You were really able to make this chapter exciting. You are right. When Voldemort went down he was just like anyone else. Nothing different, nothing special except that when he died no one really cared. They were happy if anything.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 13:44 · For: Chapter Thirty Two: At the Edge of the Forest
Neville turned into such a hero at the end.
Ginny was ultra nice to Polly. I don't know if I could've done that. It must have been tempting to blame her and have those be the last words she heard.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 13:14 · For: Chapter Thirty Five: An Epilogue
Again, beautiful.

And George...

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 12:44 · For: Chapter Thirty Four: With Love

Parts of it were so horribly sad, like Harry meeting Teddy and feeling guilty, and George's state... but there were those light moments too - Madam Pomfrey saying seeing Ron and Harry in the Hospital Wing was "like old times," for example. :D

Ron-Harry fight was really cute. :D And him mothering Harry even more than Molly!

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 12:25 · For: Chapter Thirty Three: Alive
"...as Ron and Hermione left the hall, a Harry-sized gap between them."

^This was such a cute image.

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 12:13 · For: Chapter Thirty Two: At the Edge of the Forest
So Polly was the one.... And yet you can't even feel angry with her... Did McLaggen at least protect Polly's mother? I mean, I know he was an annoying jerk, but I wouldn't think he'd be THAT horrible. :( I'd feel better if he was at least genuinely trying to help Polly. :(

You've really done a great job with all your original characters. :)

And oh, the way they feel for Harry! :(

I can totally imagine Ron and Hermione suddenly realizing Harry wasn't there with them and looking for him frantically because they KNOW him, they KNOW he'd rather sacrifice himself, and Ron, especially, already burning with rage because of Fred's death, he'd be even more upset/angry/worried/scared that they can't find Harry. I love how the rest of the family has to physically restrain him so he doesn't go after Harry; even though the Weasleys themselves feel horrible (because obviously, by now, Harry is a Weasley, just not by name).

And then McGonagall and Ginny and everyone shouting for him. That was such a touching moment in the books (to see how much Harry means to them, and not just as a symbol), and it's even sadder here, even though I know Harry's coming back. :(

Author's Response: Thank you for all your lovely reviews :) McLaggen's actually going to pop up soon in my other fic, so I can't give too much away! But Polly's mum was all right :) I'm so glad you liked these chapters, it sounds horrible but I actually really enjoyed writing them. I really miss this fic.

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 11:02 · For: Chapter Thirty One: The Weight of Grief
I'm crying. Fred, George. :'(

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 03/18/16 9:45 · For: Chapter Thirty: Death in Colour
Noooo :'(

Came back to read your fic after ages and it's still amazing. :D

Tonks and Remus were among my FAV characters (And the Pottermore details on Remus were even more heart-breaking). Aaah I wish Ginny hadn't been to see this happen. :'(
I can't even imagine how she'll feel when she finds out about Collin, especially since she helped him hide in this fic. :'(

Pretty sure I've said this before, but you write Ginny perfectly -- brave, stubborn, everything.

But aagh, there're so many more deaths coming. :'(

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/17/16 20:46 · For: Chapter Thirty One: The Weight of Grief
That was so painful--losing Fred. JKR really picked out the best people to kill off in the book. I didn't even mind Dumbledore that much but Snape? Remus and Tonks? Fred? At least she let Remus and Tonks go together. But that's reality isn't it? Someone has to die, I guess.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/17/16 16:18 · For: Chapter Thirty: Death in Colour
If only Tonks had another killing curse in her. She could've saved Molly the trouble later.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/16/16 21:32 · For: Chapter Twenty Nine: The Room
I'm starting to feel sorry for Ginny. And Harry and everybody else. I'd be shivering with excitement if I were there. I remember when reading the book I was surprised and delighted to see all the people who came out to support Harry.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/16/16 18:19 · For: Chapter Twenty Eight: Wands and the Wireless
Muriel does love her gossip. There are different methods of torture. I think staying with Muriel was one of them.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/16/16 16:42 · For: Chapter Twenty Seven: Teddy Lupin
This was a nice chapter with the reminder that even in the midst of bad things, good things can still occur. I'm sure Aunt Muriel would make me crazy too. It's made worse not knowing when their confinement will end.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/15/16 18:01 · For: Chapter Twenty Six: Prewett House
I liked how you wrote Aunt Muriel. She was a pain but still how else would she act since she's 108 years old. I think I'd be that way, reminding everyone how old I was. That is quite an accomplishment. I know witches and wizards live a bit longer than Muggles but that's still pretty old.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/15/16 16:32 · For: Chapter Twenty Five: Potterwatch Again
Why is it that people have trouble hearing that a pet (or what may pass as a pet) gets left behind or killed when a tragedy occurs. Like when house fires are reported, they report whether pets died. Or if someone is murdered in their house it's also reported if a pet was killed also. I've seen people get more upset when a pet is killed than when human are. Or it at least seems that way at times. I don't blame anyone for that. I know what that's like. When my house burned three years ago, we got five dogs out and one cat. The remaining cat had to be left because the fire fighters wouldn't let us back in the house. A short time later that cat was returned to me--she had jumped in the bathtub to save herself. She always did like the water.

Name: Morbius Liadon (Signed) · Date: 03/01/16 16:04 · For: Chapter Thirty Five: An Epilogue
Simply amazing. I have found myself binge reading chapter after chapter, even having tears well in my eyes during your depiction of the Battle of Hogwarts. Some of the best writing I have read in a long time. Rowling would be proud! Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me :)

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/26/16 10:01 · For: Chapter Thirty Five: An Epilogue
Good lad George. An ending full of hope. Best wishes to your mother.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

You must login (register) to review.