Name: Jutta (Signed) · Date: 12/06/15 18:21 · For: time

I love it! Your description of the conflicting emotions, thoughts and actions of the characters seem truthful and realistic as in some stories those tend to be overly dramatic and unreal to me. I hope you continue writing since I'm already hooked! :) X

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worked with this chapter a lot trying to get the emotions right, so I'm glad you like it. The next chapter is in the queue as we speak so hopefully it will be up soon :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/29/15 13:47 · For: time

I was secretly hoping that George would make the funeral into a party, and then he did. I would love to see a WWW fireworks show. That would be amazing. I think it's best when people celebrate at a funeral.

Author's Response: This chapter was the hardest to write since I struggled between wanting George to come through with a celebration and being so torn up about losing Fred that he's not quite his same self. Definitely teared up a bit while writing about those fireworks. Hope you are enjoying the story so far! :)

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 10/28/15 12:53 · For: time

This is a very well written story with a slightly different take on the characters. I am not sure why there are so few reviews on this web site. Perhaps you post somewhere else as well?

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I tried to come at these well-known characters from a different angle, especially since I think they would be a bit different from their normal selves in this time of grief. I'm currently not posting this story anywhere else, but have thought about it. Perhaps when it's complete. Thanks for the lovely review!