Name: linmangmu (Signed) · Date: 09/14/17 3:40 · For: Chapter 1

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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/15/15 18:50 · For: Chapter 3

While this story as a whole interests me, I have some comments. Do you expect me to believe that Tom Riddle spent five years looking at Jocelyn whenever she was close enough to look at and she was aware that he was always watching her and she dreamed about him, before he came out and introduced himself and talked to her? I would believe it more if they had talked during first semester of first year. It was interesting that Al and Jocelyn were slated to be married when they grew up. You've made Al sound gay though. It is hard to know, when you arrange marriages at birth, whether the baby is gay or not. :P I like this story and I want to see where it goes but there were a couple of things I couldn't see happening.

Author's Response: I hope I can answer your questions satisfactorily! While at Hogwarts, Jocelyn has always tried to blend in, and be unnoticeable as much as possible. She looks down most of the time, and wills herself to be invisible almost constantly. She really only has 2 friends, and that's mostly because they bonded during the sorting ceremony since they were some of the last to be sorted. Tom Riddle was never concerned with her before the beginning of their sixth year, when he bumps into her on the train. Of course, he's seen her before, but Jocelyn gets her wish when she fades into the background for him. I don't see him as being overly social/reaching out to his classmates. I always picture people coming to him, and him accepting them or rejecting them according to his needs. I see Tom as being concerned with what's in front of him, and his own ambitions, more than a quiet, albeit pretty Ravenclaw classmate. Beauty means nothing to him. To clarify, he has not been watching her for 5 years. He only really noticed her when she touched him briefly on the train, and he felt something odd. It's then that she captures his interest. Hope that makes things clearer for you! I hope you keep reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/11/15 16:15 · For: Chapter 2

This is getting very interesting. And, now there's a timeline. I actually thought this could've happened more recently until you mentioned that Jocelyn was on the train with Tom Riddle. I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/11/15 15:06 · For: Chapter 1

I'm sure Tilda feels like any other mother with an exceptional child. I've always wondered how magical children learned before they turned 11. I guess they could be home schooled.

Name: Kerichi (Signed) · Date: 09/07/15 17:25 · For: Chapter 1

From your summary, I thought you were going for a wizarding world meets A Series of Unfortunate Events type of story. I'm a Lemony Snicket fan, but I'm not disappointed. Tilda is every bit as interesting as Jocelyn. :). The name of the school is the one thing that's bothering me. I'm not sure I believe that any school would name itself "The Supremacy." Thinking about what such a school would be named has given me an idea, though, so thank you for that and the intriguing first chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking time to review! The Supremacy is more of an organization than a school, though they do provide classes/training for wizard children younger than Hogwarts age :) Glad you're enjoying it!

Name: the opaleye (Signed) · Date: 09/05/15 2:23 · For: Chapter 1

This is an intriguing start and I'm looking forward to the next instalment.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 09/02/15 6:36 · For: Chapter 1

Good start but I would have liked it to be a little longer.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It was just a little introduction. Next chapter will be longer! :)