Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/26/16 14:46 · For: Chapter Eight: Criminology, Theory and Practice

This is a look at McLaggen that I've never seen before. Come to think of it his character was never set in the books. We knew who he was but that was about it. This story is getting more and more exciting.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's such a lovely thing to say! :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/24/16 17:31 · For: Chapter Seven: Intruder

Oh crap, you left us at a cliffhanger. I sure hope you update soon. Sometimes I think pet owners should listen to their pets more. I'm sure if McLaggen thought about how his bird got shut in the bathroom he'd start to figure out something is wrong. At least Theia is starting to figure out who will be next to die.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Name: Snorkack (Signed) · Date: 04/24/16 17:07 · For: Chapter Seven: Intruder

Wow, what a cliffhanger! Very creepy, please update soon, can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Author's Response: Thank you :) Sorry the updates are going a little slowly atm.

Name: Snorkack (Signed) · Date: 03/30/16 17:33 · For: Chapter Six: The Spy

Great, a new story! I hadn't been on here for a while and now I find this! You are definitely a reason for coming here more often, this story sounds very promising, keep it coming!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/30/16 13:41 · For: Chapter Six: The Spy

I really felt for Theia, getting yelled at like that. I suppose if I were a more experienced Auror I would've been annoyed with her too but at least she was doing a real job. She has to learn somehow. Dawlish was being a dickhead.

Author's Response: She'll prove herself soon enough :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/19/16 21:31 · For: Chapter Five: Talkative Tongues

Another great chapter. You know, I think this is the first story I've read where Pansy Parkinson gets killed off. As much as she figured into the whole story, she was never that important.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/13/16 19:52 · For: Chapter Four: The Death Eater

That was gruesome but I feel that Rookwood deserves everything he gets. Now I'm interested in who has him and where and what will he be used for. I was struck by how whiny Aurors can be. I guess it's like any other government job.

Author's Response: Yep, slackers in any workplace!

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 03/12/16 15:47 · For: Chapter Four: The Death Eater

Got me thinking.

Author's Response: :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/07/16 16:40 · For: Chapter Three: Azkaban

Now I have to wait until the next chapter to find out why Harry pushed Theia out of the cell after he read what was on the parchment. I really love this story. I somehow think that Harry and Theia will become the best of friends.

Author's Response: I promise the next chapter's on the way!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/03/16 18:24 · For: Chapter Two: Belladonna

This is really interesting. Poor Theia. It must be rough looking at your first dead body and then it having been so violently massacred. I wouldn't much care to look at that either. But I wouldn't want to be an Auror. And, I really wouldn't be in the life sciences either. This is a fun story.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/03/16 17:19 · For: Chapter One: The Arrival of Theia Higglesworth

I really liked this first chapter. I know how Harry feels. I've had people come to help when I'm real busy and what I want to say at that point is --stay out of my way, that's how you can help. Other times I don't mind having help from others when I can take time to show them what to do. I haven't forgotten your long story that you finished recently. I've been busy and haven't had as much time to read.

Author's Response: Thank you :) Don't worry, take your time! I know I upload way too quickly :P

Name: Morbius Liadon (Signed) · Date: 03/02/16 1:33 · For: Chapter One: The Arrival of Theia Higglesworth

Right as I finish your last story, a chapter for a new one comes out, boy am I lucky! Great so far, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!