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07/28/07

Reviews by Germa

Hermione's birthday by Beci

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's Hermione's 18th birthday, and a bottle of firewhiskey from the twins leads to an evening Harry will never forget...

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione's birthday

That wasn't the best that Iv'e read...

Author's Response: Any constructive criticism is more than welcome!

Getting It Out by longbottomluvr21

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Valentine's ball is planned, which of course stirs up some feelings with Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny six years in the making. But will they be able to get them before the ball, or worse before someone else gets in their way? r/hr, h/g in the trio's sixth year. Wow almost 11,000 reads! Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Ball

Great job for your first fic!

Strictly Ballroom by goldenprincess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione takes a drastic decision to leave the wizarding world behind in favour of her dream of becoming a dancer. Her departure has a drastic effect on Ron's life, and when they are unexpectedly thrown together years later, there's sure to be fireworks once more. Based on the UK TV show 'Strictly Come Dancing'.

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 07/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very good! loved it!

Everything Feels Right by IzzylovesSnape

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was the trio 6th year at Hogwarts. Ron was finally getting the point he had failed to understand for years. But even if he did get the point...can he make it right? Harry realized that he was developing feelings towards Ron's overprotected sister, Ginny. The only problem was, there was someone else.....maybe there'll always be someone else in the way...

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: Confrontation Left Them In Disarray

That was some of the best typing Ive ever read! Quite a few spelling and grammical errers though! :)

Centrifugal Force by Melindaleo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Originally written for the SIYE summer challenge. Hermione invites Harry, Ron, and Ginny to her house to attend a Muggle carnival. What happens when four kids who have been forced to live under adult pressures are suddenly allowed to act like kids?

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Centrifugal Force

Pretty well typed up!
Good job!

When Harry Wasn't There by bratface0201

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: So what was REALLY going on while Harry was being forced to stay at the Dursley’s? How did everyone end up at Headquarters, anyway? Will Ron ever get the courage to tell Hermione how he feels? Here’s the story of what was happening while Harry wasn’t at Number 12, Grimmauld Place that summer before fifth year. Wow! Over 6000 reads!

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

Very nice! Great job, that was great!

The slap by Solika

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ron finds Hermione writing a letter to Viktor. He starts a row with her (again), but this time Hermione is a little more aggresive..

Review, pleaaase!!

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: What's his problem

Good

Night-visits in Slytherin by Solika

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Malfoy finds a piece of parchment that belongs to Hermione and wants to talk with her. After this incident, Hermione starts acting weird. Harry and Ron want to know what's going on..

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Wanna learn Hogwarts’ news?

God! you whent on a bit with parts of it, but the plot was OK.

A Perfect Walk In The Rain by xfallen_angelx

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione Granger thinks that Ron will never love her and it's making her very depressed. Will a walk in the rain help her out?

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Perfect Walk In The Rain

Short and SWEET!!!
Good job with less then 1000 words!
Wow!

The Swing by tonks442

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A neglected swing in the yard of the Burrow is more than it seems in this fluffy R/Hr short short ficlet. Written Pre-HBP.

Over 3000 reads and only a few reviews! Please, please review! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Swing

It wasn't all that good.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry you were disappointed, perhaps a suggestion?

Christmas Break by Tina101

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry is late for Christmas Dinner, making Ginny panic. A romance is budding between Ron and Hermione, but no one notices. Prequel to Hermione's Trials. Keep your eyes out for it within a week or two.

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Its good, but you could have expanded more on the conversaitions and stuff.

Finally Love at Long Last by Alessa

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's Christmas at the Burrow. Ron and Hermione finally admit their true feelings for one another. A/N This is a Christmasy one shot since it is the season.

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Well written, but it should be ing the RON/HERMIONE category, it had nothing to do with harry and ginny togetther in it.

A Fairy Tale by Fairy-Light by Mudblood428

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: There's no better Christmas gift than a first kiss. A special Ron/Hermione Christmas one-shot to keep you warm - no misteltoe required. Special Christmas Update 12/25/05: "Ron's Secret" - a special illustration by yours truly!

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Good job!

Butterbeer And Chocolate Cake by PatronyBologna

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Set in HBP: Hermione and Ginny escape the Great Hall for some solitude. Misery loves company. A bottle of butterbeer, a heafty slice of chocolate cake, and an unexpected visitor put the last few months in perspective. Sometimes funny and often heartfelt, Butterbeer And Chocolate Cake takes the sting out of cupids misplaced arrows.

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

What was that?
You didn't go into much detail.
OMG!!!!!!!!!

A Granger-Weasley Disturbance by HermioneG

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Neville Lonbottom struggles to finish his homework, but that is difficult. And it does not become any easier when Ron and Hermione arrive, bickering...

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Granger-Weasley Disturbance

WOW OMG WOW! That was so good from nevilles perspective!
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!

You Remembered by the_evenstar

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Six years after the defeat of Voldemort, Harry still suffers from major memory loss, and shows no signs of recovery. How will Ginny handle Harry's transformation?

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: You Remembered

holy, that was the wierdest thing Ive ever read! OMG!!!!!!!!!
that was sooooooooo random!@hotmail.com

Author's Response: haha, ummm.... thanks? :P

A Time to Fall by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is one of my Ron/Hermione one shots for SPEW 007 for the prompt 'Blossom'.

Ron and Hermione are at the Burrow, and suddenly Hermione runs outside. When Mrs. Weasley discovers her gone and a storm coming, she sends Ron and Harry to find her. When she is discovered by Ron, revelations and relationships? are made.

NOTE: This was going to be a seven part fiction, yet I now am making it a series of one shots. :)

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Blossom

Well, why did Hermy run out of the house?

Author's Response: Well, I think what I tried to do was incorporate her feelings, so Hermione was trying to tell Ron she loved him, but she got terrified and ran out of the room--- not necesarilly in embarrassment, but out of fury that he\'s so thick that he can\'t understand. I hope you liked it. ~Lindsey :)

A First Kiss by Harry_Ginny_Love

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: First Kiss fanfics usually dissapoint me. They portray Ron as a cocky little Romeo and Hermione as a I-just-got-back-from-holiday-and-now-I-am-so-hot! girl. So I wrote an alternative. The way I think a Ron/Hermione first kiss fanfic should be written.

*One-shot*

Please read and review...all reviews will be responded to!!!!

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 08/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was ok, but the characters didn't seem right, like they just wern't!

Author's Response: Whatever, you are entitled to your opinion.

Your Guardian Angel by PheonixAnimagus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A short songfic inspired by the Red Jumpsuit Apparatus song "Your Guardian Angel". Hermione awakens from a terrifying dream to find Ron there, comforting her. But she still isn't sure if she can trust him not to leave her...

*Post last battle.*

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: I Promise

The only thing that I can say is WOW!

Author's Response: i hope thats a good wow!! XD

Into the Chamber by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Missing moment from chapter thirty-one of Deathly Hallows. After Harry leaves with Luna, Ron gets a brilliant idea involving a dead snake, a girl's bathroom and a certain chamber. R/Hr.

Reviewer: Germa Signed
Date: 10/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Into the Chamber

That was one of the best ones that I have read!