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09/02/07

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This is NOT About by FelicisQuill

Rated: Professors •
Summary: One of Ron and Hermione's infamous arguments in Gryffindor Tower gets slightly out-of-hand, leading to complication, confusion, and an unexpected apology. But conquering their feelings becomes only the first in a series of battles the two must face.

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 04/20/08 Title: Chapter 4: Let Nothing You Dismay

awesome update!
loved that they did talk about their thoughts/feelings on this matter instead of yelling at each other like they might have done in school

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I would hope that time would mellow out the intense bickering between Ron and Hermione, but of course it\'s always fun to write that in a bit too!

Killer Instincts by Ginny Weasley Potter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.

Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harryâ€™s â€˜schoolboy crushâ€™; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. Whatâ€™s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.

Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?

Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?

Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsessionâ€¦ a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny
Characters: None
Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 37 | Completed: Yes | Words: 130889 | Hits: 267393 | Published: 04/27/07 | Updated: 10/03/10
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Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 08/13/09 Title: Chapter 17: Too Precious to Lose

nice update

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 10/03/10 Title: Chapter 37: Bittersweet Endings

I love it when stories have a happy ending :)

and poor kids of RHr ... it's not fun hearing your parents have fun LOL

Author's Response: Thank you. And yeah... poor Ron and Hermione's kids... :D. Thanks for reading my story! See ya! :)

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 07/02/09 Title: Chapter 15: Poison

oh wow, didn't expect this ending - update soon please

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 07/21/09 Title: Chapter 16: Letters and Parcels

I admit, I am not a big fan of Hermione right now

Author's Response: Hehe, you really have no idea of what she's going through... so don't hate her! :)

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 08/05/10 Title: Chapter 32: Murky Revelations: Part Two

intense update
I hope Ron makes it out of this alive

Author's Response: We'll see. :D Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 29: A Rush of Adrenaline

nice update :)
understandable that Ron is careful, till now, hermione wanted a divorce and now she suddenly wants to try again ...

Author's Response: Hehe. Hermione can be impossible... Poor Ron!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 05/10/09 Title: Chapter 13: Shattered

yeah people, blame it all on Ronald, why don't you

Author's Response: Hehe, this is Teh Wicked Plot of Teh Awesome-ness (me). I want Ron for myself, see? :D Thanks for the review!

The Pursuit by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny are happily married with a baby on the way. When they manipulate Ron and Hermione into both meeting them for lunch, the last thing anyone expected was for Harry and Ginny to be kidnapped.

Suddenly Ron and Hermione are left with nothing more than a note and the realization it’s up to them to follow the clues and rescue the couple they both love and adore. If only the clues weren't nonsense. If only they knew who could possibly have taken Harry and Ginny. If only they didn’t hate each other. If only they hadn’t once loved each other.

Life just got a whole lot more complicated for Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.

*Completed*

"Harry was right: there was no such thing as understanding girls, no matter how old a bloke got."

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: The Tunnel

interesting update

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 7: The Man

awesome update!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Battling Jitters by EmilyJayne

Rated: Professors •
Summary: They have battled evil, fate, destiny, time, even each other. Now Ron and Hermione take an emotional ride to battle something equally as treacherous….nerves.

The third installment in my “Battles” series continues here in a fluffier-than-is-normal-for-this-author tale depicting the Jitters Ron and Hermione experience when popping the big question and the events leading up to it.

If you have just found this story, be sure to read “Internal Battles” and “Battling Boundaries”. This story stands alone, but the other two will help complete the back-story. You should enjoy them too! Let me know what you think!

Disclaimer: JKR started it…I am just playing with the fabulous characters!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 07/20/08 Title: Chapter 10: The Birthday Present

beautiful update!

Author's Response: Thanks beautiful reviewer

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 11: Reflections and Retching

great update

Author's Response: I thought so too Thanks!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 12: At Last

fantastic chapter!
you portrayed Ron's nervousness and frustrations quite well and the proposal was awesome!

Vincit Qui Se Vincit by Celestine de Karamel

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: When war brings grief, loss, and a world to rebuild, who can speak of a winning and a losing side? Eight young wizards deal with love, jobs and family ties, and, amidst the hardships, try to make a better future for themselves. H/G, R/Hr and other pairings.

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 02/21/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

brilliant part :)

You Alone by Arial Felchem

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What kind of a person walks out on his best friend and the girl he loves? Ron is at Shell Cottage, a few days after leaving Harry and Hermione, pondering the consequences of his actions after abandoning his friends.

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 04/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great story

Author's Response: thank you! : )

Who Am I? by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

What happens when you find out your whole life has been a lie? How do you react when the people you trusted, believed in confess to hiding a secret that changes everything you believed about yourself?

Hermione Granger is about to face that situation.

The war is over and life should be simple. She should be planning her future with the man she has loved since she was 11. But now, she doesn’t know who she really is. As she struggles with the grief of lost friends, she also deals with the grief of the loss of everything she believed about herself. Can she open her heart enough to let Ron help her deal with this, or will this secret drive them apart?

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 10/22/08 Title: Chapter 8: More Missing Pieces

great update

Author's Response: Thank you. The newest chapter is posted and the next is about to go into the queue.

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: Letters, Unanswerable Questions and the Truth Told

great update!
I doubt the talks Hermione and Harry will have with Ron will go well ... if Ron is even still there
I'm curious to see if Ginny will take her brother's side for once

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I will be submitting the next chapter later today, so you will know soon how the talks go. Terri

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: The First Step to Acceptance

great update!
I hope Ron/Hermione won't drift too far apart (drift they will, I fear) and that Hermione will still be comfortable around the Grangers later on

Author's Response: All will be revealed in time.... Hermione has a lot of things to deal with before this story is over. Thank you for your review. The next chapter is in the queue. Just a bit of advice, buy a box of tissues for what is coming up... Terri

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 12: A Plan Between Friends

great update!
hm, I sense an insecure Ron explosion coming ... or Ron withdrawing perhaps now that he fears that Hermione&George are getting too close

Hermione meeting up with her parents in Australia should be interesting

Changed by Aevylonya

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Three years have passed since Voldemort fell, but nothing is as it should be. The Order is struggling against a group of dark wizards with an unknown agenda, and no one has seen nor heard from Harry since the battle. Many believe him to be dead, and the Order fears that he has been taken captive. Meanwhile, this new uprising of dark magic poses a greater threat to the wizarding world than the Order could ever imagine...

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Words: 13551 | Hits: 926 | Published: 05/01/08 | Updated: 08/30/08
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Reviewer: Sternbetrachter Signed
Date: 05/27/08 Title: Chapter 3: Different

great update!
Ron reading HaH? OMG! never thought I would see that happening LOL

lets hope the boys' "talk" doesn't get out of hand but on the other hand, maybe a punch in the face would do Harry some good

Author's Response: Yes, I thought the Hogwarts, a History - part was kind of fun... Ron isn\'t exactly the person for large books, is he..? As for the boys\' talk, that should be interesting, I think. I will update very soon, as the chapter has been finished for a long time. I\'m thinking a couple of days. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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