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Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: None

update update UPDATE!!!! ~SM

Forbidden by ophelia721

Rated: Professors •
Summary: A dramatic moment between Hermione and a certain sexy Potions Master. They find they share the same feelings for one another; and yet, their desires remain...forbidden!! (hence the title)

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this story is sooo wonderful! It lives out everything I could have ever hoped for! Please update with a futuristic episode, where Severus and Hermione are older. ~SM

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Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 01/15/06 Title: None

Wonderful story! Have you considered writing others? 10!!

Author's Response: I have two other stories, but they\'re both Hermione/Draco. -gasp- I\'ve been drawn to the dark side-- I adore writing H/D.

It Didn't Start This Way by Marauder by Midnight

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter and Lily Evans weren't exactly buddies at first sight. They began virtually as enemies. Gradually, however, they came to respect each other and like each other at Hogwarts. Somehow, that like turned to an eternal love.

Described through the memories of all who knew them, this is the story that follows them through the seven years in Hogwarts, as their rocky relationship develops into a bond that becomes the envy everyone. This is the story that describes the difficulties that they encounter during the terrible years of You-Know-Who's reign. This is the story of the parents of The Boy who Lived. This is the story of the love between Lily Evans and James Potter.

Chapter Five (Friends?) posted - Lily walks into the world she never knew.

Sorry for the (very long) delay.

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 01/08/06 Title: Chapter 4: A Day in Diagon Alley

Cute story! I like how James and Lily interacted before Hogwarts and how they seemed to hate each other. Makes me wonder when James will realize his undying love for lily ;) I give it a nine.

Too Sweet to Remember by Canadian Confessional

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 03/26/06 Title: Chapter 19: Saving Snape

Haha, Lily the boozer!! Thank GOD she finally admitted feelings for James. It would so great if you could do a Lily POV for her and Brendan's breakup. And then shes like oo James I looooooove you!!! 10/10, as usual. XD

Author's Response: Lily the boozer? LOL! A Lily POV with Brendan's break-up? That is a very interesting idea. Very intriguing indeed. Heheh, I'll try to update soon, and thanks!

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/15/06 Title: Chapter 15: The End of the Beginning

Love where this story is going! But lets see some j/l action soon. I hate how Lily's such a frigid bitch, pardon my French. Maybe you could do her POV so we can understand why she's so mean. I mean, she's like my fav. character and I'm starting to hate her guts. She reminds me of my English teacher, whom I also despise. Update soon!XD ~SM

Author's Response: Your French is excused, lol! Lily's POV, eh? Hmmm, that's a neat idea, heheh... Your English teacher? LOL! I'll try to update soon, and thanks!

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 04/21/06 Title: Chapter 21: Wine Tasting

THANK GOD.

That is all I have to say.

10/10. ~SM

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 05/21/06 Title: Chapter 22: Promise to Remember

what/????? im so confused!!!! I LOVE YOU, LILY AND JAMES!!!!! ~SM

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 04/10/06 Title: Chapter 20: Eternally Bound

Wait; what happened to Lily? I mean, she was having a fight with Brandon, gets drunk, passes out near James, and suddenly wakes up in his bed! If I were her and felt the way she does about James, I would assume the worst. Oh well. 10/10 ~SM

Author's Response: What happened to Lily? Heheh, you'll find out in the next chapter. Now that you point all the details out like that, I can imagine what Lily could be thinking. LOL! I'll update soon, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 06/23/06 Title: Chapter 24: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

Is the story over? Well, if it is, it was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I love how you tied in the ending words to the title. It always made me wonder why it was Too Sweet To Remember, when Lily seemed to hate James so much. Are you going to be writing about their seventh year? Please do! ~SM 10/10

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 03/12/06 Title: Chapter 18: Victory Talk

Poor, poor Sirius! I wanna come into your story and give him a hug. Anyway, I know I sound cliche and everything, but I'm pretty sure Lily was the one who saved him. Actually, considering your story, she probably didn't since she hates him so much, but tis a nice thought. Oh well. 10/10, as usual. ;D ~SM

Author's Response: LOL! I love your comments and reverse psychology about the Lily breaking James's fall. You'll just have to wait to find out what happened I'm afraid. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 03/02/06 Title: Chapter 17: Poetry

Nice chapter! I'm really wondering how Lily will react to James being Seeker. And also really hoping someone will smack her and make her break up with stupid Brandon whats-his-face. XD~SM

Author's Response: Hi there! Smack her and break-up with Brendan? Heheh, I think many people are saying the same thing, lol! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/02/06 Title: Chapter 14: Failing for the First Time

Too bad for James! Brendan is such a little prick. He should go die in a hole. JUST KIDDING (sort of.) Keep up the good work!! I'm hoping to see some L/J soon! ~10~

Author's Response: Sort of, eh? HAHAH! Don't worry, you'll be seeing some J/L real soon... Thanks for reviewing!

She Will Be Loved by unknown_force

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: We see people by what they seem to be on the outside, but can their greatest strengths be the result of their greatest weaknesses? As desire and passion tear through Ron, Hermione, and Harry's friendship, they begin to question whether they have found the right person to love, and at what price will they pay to correct their mistakes?

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 01/15/06 Title: Chapter 10: What is Love?

This is such a good story! Your ideas are original, but no so much that they seem outrageous. Keep up the good work! :) 10!!

Author's Response: This is partially because the interactions between Hermione and Ron come from my romantic fantasies. Haha, I'm weird. Thanks for your review!

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Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/09/06 Title: None

...This is the best story i have ever read. Include some hermione/snape/ron stuffs or similar. Your lines are bluntly humorous and I wish I had your kind of talent except not as creepy. ~SM

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Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: None

zoom up like a decade and have ron and hermione realize theyre perfect for each other and get together already! sheesh! 10/10! ~SM

Forever Yours by harry_potter_star

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
sigh.
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay

For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!

James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 12/18/05 Title: Chapter 9: Second Year: Everything's Changing

Wow! Your story's really, really good too! I like the way that Lily and James start off as friends, but then Lily starts hating him (eventually) Calista will die!! Update soon!!

Author's Response: Hey! thanks for the review!! It's gr8 to know that you liked it! Gee, it's erm, nice and brutal. Calista will die.... lol! um...yeah I really don't have that much more to say. :) keep readin!

It's Witchcraft by Nicole_Riddle

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: When Draco Malfoy finds himself falling for the Gryffindor know-it-all, he convinces himself that it’s merely witchcraft. But when they both finally come to terms with the truth, nothing can stop them from being together. This is a tale of forbidden love and dangerous passion weaved into the Half-Blood Prince, where circumstances beyond their control might tear Draco and Hermione apart forever… Check out the long awaited sequal Fatum Amoris...The Fate of Love about Medea Malfoy and Patrick Potter now appearing in the other pairings section.

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: With One Look

great story! keep writing! i can't wait for the next chapter!

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Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/17/06 Title: None

WIlL MUGGLENET HURRY THEIR LAZY BUMS UP?? It's been far too long that we've all had to wait with your second chapter!!! "Oh Harry! I’m so, so sorry!" Ginny Weasley, you dirty little liar. Tee hee. Keep up the fantastic work. XD ~SM

The Tricks of Fate by Silversen

Rated: •
Summary: As the wizarding world is overrun by the Dark Lord’s power, Hermione is taken captive. Draco immerses himself more and more in the Dark Arts, desperately hoping no one will find out about a decision that changed his life forever. What happens when the most unlikely person discovers the truth? Who will she tell? What will Draco offer for her to keep it a secret?

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Hermione reached up almost involuntarily and traced the silver band branded on Draco’s arm.
“That’s Dumbledore’s mark,” she said softly.

Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 4: Purpose

Keep up the good work and update!! ~SM

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