Awwwww That's one of the most beautiful stories about how they got together that I've ever read, and that means a lot. *squee*
...and here I am AGAIN, having read the story once more, and I still love it. You describe all the scenes so vividly, and I was very touched by Sirius' letter to Remus.
Oh, and to me, the characters seem very canon, too. I'm honestly impressed!
That was the absolutely most wonderful first kiss between Padfoot and Monny I've ever read. *squees* Aaaaaaw.... ...and quite hot ^^
Aww... I honestly love this interpretation! And you just made them seem so... natural a couple - you know what I mean? :-)
Aww... I honestly love this interpretation! And you just made them seem so... natural a couple - you know what I mean? :-)
I see why they accepted it into humour : ) It's written in a very funny way, although the end appeared a bit suddenly to me, too. But well, one can see it as a one-shot telling how Harry fell in love with Draco (well, how he realized he has fallen for him), since most of the fanfics I've read implied that he has done so already.
Okay, I'm just waffling around. Short summary: I think it's funny.
Wow. I really appreciate the manner you're writing.
On to the next chapter, I suppose =)
And I honestly love the way you write. *admires* *runs off to next chapter*
And I honestly love the way you write. *admires* *runs off to next chapter*
Ooh... I love Sirius... *secretly wipes tears away*
I like the way you made Sirius work out his feelings towards Remus.... So slowly, realistic.
Oh my, Sirius-the-dog is too cute to stand (erm, if one can say so)! Thinking of Remus as "Master", loving him so dearly and wanting nothing more than to protect him...
Well, even if you HAD planned continuing the story, I'm quite satisfied with its recent ending since it's nothing to make me unhappy, is it? : )
I really enjoyed reading it. Good work!!!
Author's Response: It might happen, but it probably won\'t. Nevertheless, I do appreciate every review. If I ever continue it, you\'ll know. Thank you!
I wasn't going to review until the very end of this fic, since there already are many who review much more often on this, but here I am... First of all: I wish you would be updating. I know writer's block is very hard, but that's the only thing I can criticize: You never seem to answer reviews. I, at least, haven't seen a single comment of yours about when you aregoing to submit the next chapter, and I'm frankly afraid to have fallen in love with a story that won't be finished.
There's my next point. The story itself, so far. God, it's incredible! Absolutely amazing!!! The, er, second best Harry/Draco story I've ever read, and also the second best HP fanfiction at all - sorry, but NOTHING will EVER reach Eclipse by Phoenixsong, so that's the greatest compliment I could have made you.
I read this story already already three weeks or so ago, but I remember as much: It's so... realistic, as realistic as a slash story between two wizards can be, anyway, very emotional and just... Well... You can write good and long and eloquent reviews when there is at least SOMETHING to criticize, but I can't think of any, so I can't write what I do like, either. Not really. I just liked everything about it, can you imagine? - I guess you can, given each and every reviewer kisses your feet, me included, and you don't even bother to answer. ;-)
Oh, please, please take no offence, I'm just so impatient a person, and WiPs really drive me crazy, but this story is just way too good to abandon. So I keep checking for an update every day or two, okay?
Take your time, it's quality and quality needs time, I know that, just... be so kind to let us know when you're planning on abandoning this fic? Please? (Otherwise, maybe how many chapters are still going to come...?)
Thank you for sharing it!! Oh, and - I don't know whether I've already reviewed some earlier chapter, I feel like I've already written this, so in danger of repeating myself: What I already sincerely loved about this story before I even began reading was the title. It's so sad already, and I'm dreading the ending since there is no way you can let this end good, it might be too unrealistic and you're too good a writer to suddenly let him live so I'm still hoping that a hint towards a good ending might already appear in the following chapters, so you CAN make it a beautifully soppy and corny ending, but you won't, will you? Argh, there, that's why I didn't want to review just now, I'm all on fire now, I can't wait can't wait can't - have to.
I hope you at least READ your reviews...
Lots of love and compliments and roses
NorthernLight
Author's Response: I read and appreciate every review, but I usually don\'t respond because it\'s hard to keep track of them with all the archives I post to. I\'m NOT abandoning this fic; I simply haven\'t had time to write. I do post writing updates on my LiveJournal, so you can check there to see what\'s going on with this fic. And thank you very much for your review!
Wow, I began reading this fic yesterday, and normally, I submit reviews every once a while. This time, I couldn't, I was far too eager to read on to spend time on writing...
But now, I HAVE to write something, finally, and I need a break, too, because I'm laughing histerically since last chapter. All the time.
It's just overwhelmingly great and I fear the story's end, since when I think about it rationally, I can't see a way how Draco could survive and that makes me already sad, even almost kept me from reading the fic in the first place.
The curse you described is an amazing invention of yours, and I truly admire the way you describe things, I rarely have such vivid pictures in my mind while reading fics.
I really love the way you write, and with that clarified, I return to reading.
I found this among my favourite stories... And I haven't reviewed yet? Sorry... So, here I go: It's lovely. Very short but not in any way clichéd - in my humble opinion. And the last sentence deserves a great "awwwww". Good work!
Author's Response: *blushes*\r\nYou\'re so sweet, thanks!
I really like the way you write... I just hope you won't cease updating before the story's end, asso many seem to do!
Author's Response: Don\'t worry-- I\'m sticking with this one to the end! I love writing it, and Sirius/Remus is my OTP, so I can\'t just leave them hanging...
I\'m about halfway through Chapter Four, so expect and update in the next week or so!
This is just great, really, really great. (Quite similar to Ahern's books :-)) *sobs*