Eww people! My theory (save for the main ships) was soooo off!!! Hehehehe I'll be the first to admit it! I loved every page of DH though, I hope you did as well! Go Molly Weasley!!!
I'll update this bio soon~ I'll also be updating Adversity with a new chappie! Oh yes, the reviews~ I'll get right on top of answering those! Hope everyone in fandom is doing well! Big shout out to Heather ... Sarah ... and Juli!!! Missed ya girls! Sana you too! Talk to you soon!!!!
Brilliant!!! A definate addition to the favorites list! I love the side comments and the funny stuff about Ron! 10/10 Bravo!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! My first "10", I'm thrilled!
This is hilarious! My favorite is the Weasley sweaters!!! Definately as horrifying as a basilisk to receive one ;) Very well written! 10/10
Author's Response: Cool, thanks for R&Ring! I'm glad you liked it. :-) I decided to use the Weasely sweaters as a gag seeing as how the Weasley's are viewed as "blood traitors", I thought it would be funny to have Voldy receive one from the DE's.
Hmpf...well that's the most interesting take I've ever seen on Malfoy. I have to say...I really liked it! Took me by surprise but you put the quotes in to much affect and the tweleve days were quite clever. I very much enjoyed your first fan fic...keep writing! 10/10
Hi there. Before you get in trouble I thought I'd let you know that banner art is not allowed on MNFF except in your bio. If they catch you they may suspend your account! Hope you get this in time.
Author's Response: you caught me in time. Thanks for the info!
well aren't you just a little ray of sunshine ;) I get it (the poem) the idea of a battle to end all battles is controdictory in and of itself so it doesn't leave you feeling hopeless...i liked it!
Hey there Missy! Finally got the songfic up I see! Well done!!! It's about time you started submitting some writing to this site! Story is sweet! Nice to see Percy isn't as terrible as we all know he really is!!!
Love Always, Your Big Sis!!!Another story that the OWL has now got on her radar! Wow...your words flow just like JKR's! I am so impressed by that!!! This woman must have such an interesting story!!! And she ended up in Ohio (of all places!) I wonder what happened to her to make her so depressed/sad...and she has only one slipper poor thing! 10/10 and I'm off to read the next chappie of course!
Author's Response: Wise Owl!!! Lovely to see you, I must say! Even more lovely to get praise from you! Yes indeed, there is only one slipper here...and it WILL make a comeback (I'd better make it impressive, too, or a lot of people will be dissapointed). I'm so glad you're reading/reveiwing! Thanks!
Ohhhh...how cool! It's just like Harry! We started off in the first book with him not knowing he's a wizard! So than Mark and Susan must be muggles right? Or else Susan would know how her daughter had managed to move that chair! I have to say, Phedra's emotions and feelings are so well-written! I almost feel like I'm her...taking a big sigh and trying to hazard yet another day! Ok I'm ubber impressed you get a 10/10 (as if there was any doubt!) Update soon!
Author's Response: You said uber! YES!!! One of my favorite words (although I'm sure you've noticed). Yeah, Mark and Susan are muggles. I'm glad you think the emotions are good. I try really hard to make it real. EEEEEE!!! I'm so excited people are liking this!!!
I have to say I just love Maeve to bits and pieces! She’s just toooooo cute!!! And she obviously adores her big sis so much! Awwwww!!!!!!!! Ok enough of that mushy gushy stuff!!! I like how you portray Phedra’s emotions and her annoyance with people! So like a preteen to notice what people are wearing and how her family is embarrassing! Most people start their characters in a compartment on the train with a slew of new friends…you are going about this much differently! I can sense that this story is going to be unlike anything I’ve read thus far (in a totally good and refreshing way). It’s nice because guessing what will come it going to be difficult!
Author's Response: Yay, you\'re back! Thank you so much for the compliments. I hope I don\'t let you down now....
I have read the beginings of a lot of fanfics as well, and I know what you mean about everyone just making a bunch of new friends on the train. I remember that I kept thinking to myself...\"What are the odds that a person is going to meet all their best friends before they even get to school?\" Besides...Phedra really isn\'t outgoing enough to look for people her own age and intitiate a friendship right off the bat. Now then, I\'m off to read your other reviews! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How interesting that she is able to hear things without others knowing! I’ve been there!!! My guy friends in particular never realize that they’ve said things that they’d rather not have me hear ;) Also, it sounds to be like these kids are Slytherin’s! BOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I wonder who led the giant into an attack on muggles? How disturbing! Oh and OMG how dare you leave us with a CLIFFIE!!!!????? Have you no shame? Look here missy, you better get that next chapter out lickety split…I’m just glad she’s not in Slytherin!!! I really do love your story and how you portray Phedra’s emotions, A+++++++!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The chapter is with the mods now. All we can do is wait. Wow, that sounded like it should be in a cheesey movie or something. Now...those kids are actually...wait for it...Ravenclaws. Sorry. But you can boo them anyways, they aren\'t partictularly special in any way. Oh wait...sorry...everyone is special in their own way...except for extra characters in notabanana\'s stories. Half of them don\'t even have names. Sorry...I completely derailed there. Back on track...yes...sorry about the cliffie. I meant for this coming chapter to be a lot sooner than it was. Thanks so much for all those beautiful plusses after the A!
I'm forced to ask if the sulky girl that is "horse-faced" is by any chance a dursley relation? Just had to ask!
Author's Response: Not a Dursley relation...yet. She\'s a little too young to be marrying, I\'d say. LOL. I\'m glad you noticed!
I have to say I just love Maeve to bits and pieces! She’s just toooooo cute!!! And she obviously adores her big sis so much! Awwwww!!!!!!!! Ok enough of that mushy gushy stuff!!! I like how you portray Phedra’s emotions and her annoyance with people! So like a preteen to notice what people are wearing and how her family is embarrassing! Most people start their characters in a compartment on the train with a slew of new friends…you are going about this much differently! I can sense that this story is going to be unlike anything I’ve read thus far (in a totally good and refreshing way). It’s nice because guessing what will come it going to be difficult!
Author's Response: Oops, double-post! Not like I\'ve ever done that myself (lol)! Actually, it\'s sort of nice to hear things twice.
Oh and I vote she goes to Gryffindor too! (Didn't realize people were voting!)
Author's Response: *looks mysterious*
Oh and I vote she goes to Gryffindor too! (Didn't realize people were voting!)
Author's Response: *looks mysterious again...since the oppurtunity was there*
Excellent! You've effectively placed her in the marauders era!!! Brilliantly done! I loved the interaction between the sisters (it is so true to life!) One minor mistake I found:
Then envelope was made of an odd sort of material that was rather yellowish, and had no stamp. I believe you mean "The" not "Then". Other than that your writing was flawless. I particuliarly enjoyed the way you described the atmosphere. I suppose her parents must have suspected some thing was up with her, but I felt like they gave in too easy. Than again, she probably is quite extraordinary and has done other things that caught their attention and defied their logic! Poor Maeve is gonna be without her sister! Awww they'll miss each other! Yayyyyy for us though...next stop...Hogwarts! 10/10!!!Hi there! I just got through the first chapter and I must say this really is an excellent start. It's as though we are a couple chapters into the seventh book (which is fine by me!) I LOVE that you have made a deal between Ginny & Harry...At least he won't be so seperated from her (and break my heart)! As for the key, very interesting and sneaky. Now you've left us wondering what it is for! Oh and I am sure there will be consequences to Harry being spotted...depending on WHO spotted him of course ;) I'll be reading the next chappie shortly (I hope) and submitting a review as well (I like to get in early on the good stories and stick it out with the author!)
Author's Response: I\'m really glad you like it, that feels like such a good complimentcoming from you because you\'re an awesome writer. My next chapter is hopefully going to be going up soon, i have altered the plot slightly from what i was planning it to be, so that slowed everything for a long time. Thank you for your review!!!
OMG I hadn't seen this yet! WOW!!! This is really an amazing, twisted, surprising story!!! I am in total awe of you right now! Poor Ginny...how heart broken she must have been even to attempt such a feat! I see that the story with Harry ended...not to my liking! But it lead to this awesome tale from JuliGoose so what can I say? This really was well-written and even more, it was spooky! I am totally impressed!
Author's Response: RANIA! you like my story! I guess that makes two of us... only joking. I\'m sad to say that I have issues with Harry living past the end of 7. I just really think he needs to die, even though it\'ll definitely be completely terrible. also, I\'m horrible at writing Harry, which is why I\'m so fond of killing him... *GIGANTIC EEIF HINT THERE, MATE!* thanks for the review, Rania! the Wise Owl rules!
I'm submitting another review for this poem because...well...how dare everyone else have all the fun!!!!!!! Okey dokey I'm off to read the new poem, oh and HAPPY MUGGLENET ANNIVERSARY MISS SARAH!!! Hugs...kisses...general pandamoneum. AHEM! Right, time to behave ourselves once more ;)
Author's Response: *grins* then i suppose the second review on my story is from you :-)...yay pandemonium!!! *hugs and kisses :-)*
Ahem......that was BRILLIANT!!! Sarah you wrote with such eloquence! I loved the emotion you portrayed (and you TOTALLY got it right)! The poem just flowed so beautifully! Not only that, but you managed to capture Ginny's fighting spirit and her undying hope! You PERFECTLY displayed Harry from her eyes! I am so impressed that you got her perspective even at times when Harry and JK were not concentrating on her in the story (like when she goes with other guys!) You can't imagine how proud of you I am right now...I'm just gushing!!! As soon as I saw that you published something I dropped everything to run and read your poem and I AM SO NOT DISAPPOINTED!!! KEEP WRITING...you are so talented!
Author's Response: *death by happiness*....OH RANIA! *hugs*....i was ecstatic to see u review! u guys are the best, all of u, and im sooooooooooooooooooooooo happy that u think that i wrote with (using ur word:-P) eloquence!...i really love ginny, shes my fav character, so it would be great to see how she feels....and i had an inspiration and was feeling very potter-ish at the moment :-)....and i just scribbled, dotted all my i\'s, and crossed all my t\'s and it began as all of my works do!...it went through a few changes in the process, i was even fine-tuning it after i submitted it...anyway metinks im talking too much and i still hav ur other review to answer! THANKS SO MUCH! love you!
hahahaha ok I just read your bio with all the updated stuff about the whole gang...and me of course! Bless your little heart! You had me giggling and just plain wearin a goofy grin on my silly face!!! I had to let you know that on *YOUR* review pages! I hope you keep writing missy. I remember that you had a story that got rejected...why don't you re-edit and submit that? ***GLARES*** That was not a suggestion! ;) Love your biggest fan ~*~Wise Owl~*~
Author's Response: *cries*...aww ur my biggest fan! *signs an autograph that looks alrmingly lockhartish*....*MY* review page! im not yet used to that term but i will be! yup guys im planning to make others from the POV\'s of the trio! i just love making ui guys happy!....and no, Rania, *glares back...and then breaks into laughing hysterics*..im not gonna submit that story again..it had no real plot, and the one i told u about is only half-finished, in one of my little brother\'s notebooks under my bed...anyway thanks for the 2nd review! as i said b4, u made my day! i really was crying today, having to switch schools...again...and u should see those textbooks *stomach lurches*...i seriously dont know what i would do without u guys! LOVE U SO MUCH!