Extraordinarily sweet. :) I don't know if I agree with Remus being in love with Lily (that was what he couldn't say, right?) but it still a well-written, swift and smooth story. My favorite line :



Author's Response: That\'s exactly what he couldn\'t say. And to be quite honest, I don\'t really think Remus loved Lily, but the line from the movie just gave me this idea that wouldn\'t leave me alone. Thanks for reviewing! =)

I'm in stitches from laughing so hard. A great story, well-written through and through. I would have preferred Draco admitting defeat in the end (or at least, not getting the girl) since I'm not much of a Draco/Hermione fan, but... hey, a reader must tolerate. :) Very imaginative, and I especially liked the fact that Malfoy always addresses Hermione as "Granger". :) Once again, kudos to you!

Oh, no. Oh, no, no, no. That was so sad. :( Excellently written. You didn't make it overemotional, and I think that's what makes it so sad. Good job!

Author's Response: Awwww, thanks! That makes me really happy. ;)

Great job! A really good piece of writing, in my opinion (though I know it doesn't count for much :D).

Luna looked at Harry, smiling desperately, waiting for him to say “I heard them too. You’re not the only one, I heard them too.” Was she the only one who could hear them?

Luna was perfectly in character and it was really wonderful to see the bit of her that actually supposes that the people who tease her are right and that she is Loony.

I'm glad you had her begin to overcome her grief. Nice job again!

Author's Response: Thanks heaps, it\'s my first story, so I hope I can get more positive feedback. :D

This is a really amazing story - I can't exactly say why. It was terribly sad - and sweet and happy and cute as well. Andromeda has been portrayed differently than I imagined her and seemed well characterized, so good job on that. One line in particular that I liked:

Andromeda sees Harry giving Ginny that same soft look, the she’ll-be-a-good-mother look, a rarer thing to see, in a man. Oh yes, Andromeda knows where this is going. Molly must already be making guest lists.

That's not one line, but you know what I mean. It was soo sweet and funny and I can just imagine Molly making guest lists before Ginny and harry have even said anything! :D And last but not least, I'm glad Draco was in here - snotty as usual, but at least he made an effort to do something! I hope Andromeda forgives her sister - Narcissa was right, she does have a family if she's willing to take them. Excellent job again!

Author's Response: Thanks, Amel, for those kind words. I had a really clear picture of Andromeda in my head even before DH, and that\'s the character I used here. Who knows whether Molly\'s really making guest lists? The point is that Andromeda thinks she could, thinks that things have already advanced to the point where these two are essentially betrothed. Draco might not be as snotty as you might think; consider who first used the line \"babysit the cubs\" in his presence, and how it was intended at the time. Thanks again, ~Ken

Oh, poor Snape. :( *feels like crying* You shouldn't leave this a one shot - write more! :) 10/10

It's terribly sad that fear of his family is what made Snape choose Slytherin over Gryffindor, here. I can see the fear of anger influencing his decision, but Snape never really liked Gryffindor anyway, did he? I wonder how things would have turned out if he had allowed the Sorting Hat to send him to Slytherin - would there even BE a Harry Potter? Anyway, this is a really nice, thought-provoking (as you've seen from my ramblings) story. I like that it's not too long - short and sweet does the job. A good piece of writing, and perfectly in-character. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks very much, yours is the most detailed review I\'ve gotten on this site so far. Thanks for taking the time. :)

Good start - erm, I don't see why it's in humor though... seemed sort of sad to me. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out...I meant to put it under General, but they\'re right next to each other. It\'ll be kind of all genres, like sometimes funny, sometimes sad, sometimes happy, etc. Thanks for the review too. My first one was a good one. :)

Oh, sad, really sad, but I love Lily and James and I want them to be together - but Severus is so amazing too! Conflicting feelings here, honestly! Wonderful job, really well put-together!

Ha! The ending with the trio was the best part - that was a really great story, really funny. I think she should have washed his hair nine times though. And "jet black and uncontronablly untidy"? Lol, why would he want to look like Harry? :p Yay for you! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that he would appalled to have the same tyoe of hair as Harry and James so I put that in.

Author's Response: *type. (Man, I wish we could edit reviews/respones!)

Author's Response: *responses. (heh,heh)