OH CMON! Why you have to make it so sad. So happy and sad at the same tame. You are making me feel as if love will always bring pain O.o I love your story even though it's my first review for any chapter (and first one of this chapter ,) ) but i was really really hoping you would give Harry the courage to ask for forgiveness, to talk about it with Ginny but instead... I think i can't take such a cliffhanger. Please post asap :D

Author's Response: I always say at least no one dies in my stories when readers ask me why I make it so sad. I know readers want to see them happily together, but I didn't build 60 some chapters just to end it with a kiss and then a makeup get together fluffy event. I've known that hurting someone you love is not just simply talking and asking for forgiveness. Besides, that opportunity has passed since chapter 19 of story 2. Since then, so many more things he's guilty of has happened. To add on to his torment is his memory gain and Sam leaving. He's bound to be irrational. How can he face Ginny when he sees two of her? Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Huskers, even though I just reviewed your first chapters of this story's prequel I decided to start reviewing from now on (sorry for deciding that until now :P). Anyway, a little global review. I liked the way you showed their magical progress. I mean, you knew how to slowly evolve it, not that they just popped and they could do anything. Second, the plot is just great. I have a question about your plot-planning: Did you plan the whole thing before writting it or you just started writting it all as it came? I love the job you did with Ginny, she's now like main character. I like your idea of the voices and the explanation you gave about it, and also the advantage they take out of them. I'm really looking forward to know what happens next (i can't deny you are a very fast uploader, but i always think it takes ages for new chapter to appera :P). Nice way of creating tension and still not uncovering the whole deal. I know you have like 3 spelling errors, but who doesn't? I think you are a very good writter, you know how to exploit the ideas. Keep up the hard work!

Author's Response: I'm glad your back. And think that I did a good job showing the growth of the trio+Ginny's power, and that it did not just happen overnight.

The plot, I never wrote out an outline or anything like that. But probably 90% of the story was in my mind when I sat down and started typing. All of the major twist and turns that show character development and confrontation, were planned. It is the little things like having them run in the woods as lions, or bungie jumping with dragons, that just happen and mke the book into a story.

I always wanted Ron, Hermione and Ginny to be vital to Harry's fight with Voldemort. Ginny has taken on a life that makes her a main character and in some ways, she has supplanted Harry. I may have given her too much of a role, but that is the story I had in my mind. And she is the character who spoke to me the most as I was writing.

Thanks for taking the time to ask questions, and I hope I gave you the answers you were looking for.

OMG! Huskers, i can only say your chapters keep getting better and better. Your skills to describe with such a clarity all the battlefield and the sense of chaos is just soberb. The fight between Harry and Voldmort is as good as it should be, you didn't let us down :D Incredible way to explain Voldemort's growth in dark arts and how Tom Ryddle is really a victim, a human being. 10000/10. Even though this chapter is amazing, im sad. I think i can recall the sympthons (is the spelling right?) of the course that hit Ron, and, well... im just afraid i'm right. Keep it up Huskers, you are really an excellent writter.

Author's Response: I don't really see Tom Riddle as a victim, maybe only a little, tenny tiny bit. It has to be in his nature for him to have done what he has. Only Ginny's capacity to give love casued him to try and fight and leave the flashes in her mind. And only by Harry continueing to force the memory of Tom in his mother's arms into his mind, allowed Tom to attempt to rise to the surface. A person of real character would overcome his/hers other deamons. Tom was/is weak, and sought validation in the only way he felt he could get it. It was the easy way. Giveing the voices control only made it easier.

Anyways, glad you like the story. Thanks for taking the time to tell me how I did.

Oh my! I don't know why I didn't read this fic before! I don't read humor fics too often because there are some rathe weak ones. However, yours was not only original but well constructed.


I particularly liked the part: ""Here's to clean hallways and empty wastebins!" he said. "To alphabetizing and new books!" They both drank deeply." It really made me laugh, but at deeper thought it is very realistic somehow. Oh, or when he compares her eyes to clean chalkboards! Haha, that was special.


I don't know why I thought it was funny too, when they walk to Filch's office not before talking the bottle along. Oh, and: "And Filch seized a book from his shelf and started to rip pages from it. Madame Pince's eyes grew wide, a vein standing out on her neck." *sniff* beautiful! Giving Madame Prince an allergy to cats was definitely a nice and interesting twist. I was getting scared that they would actually end up together :D


Ahh, very, very good job. You'll never know how much I like your work; your writing style, the choice of words and how you arrange them to create so different moods are things that I will always admire from you :) 10/10 *misses rating system yet again*

Author's Response: I must honestly say that I read humor fics, next to never. They\'re usually short and I like to get hooked into long stories, and if they\'re short I want them to have depth to them. I really just let my imagination run away with this, which ended up being a great thing. Someone earlier mentioned the dangers of overly frustrated people drinking which I guess is a point I unconsciously made. And let\'s face it: few people truly like Filch and Pince. I mean, they\'re great as characters but if you ever were to meet them in real life, you would be terrified. What better couple to have a brief and thoroughly hysterical relationship? Thank you for your praise, it means a lot to me!

I liked it. Very descriptive, and I only see one flaw: It is too short!! Anyway, I'm eager to read more of this fanfic!

Author's Response: Well I'm working on longer chapters for the future on this fanfic, because I'm trying to bring my average of 1000-2000 per chapter up a little. I'm really joyed to know that you liked my story so far though!

Agh, I didn't know you had a fanfic! Just out of curiousity I checked today and I saw it! Well, so far I've only read the first chapter, but I have to same that is very, very original. I think very few people is up to the task, and you certainly did :D As others have said, I like that Crookshanks thinks of Hermione likes "his Witch". I think your writing style also flows very well and so far you have developed the story nicely, although is only the first chapter. I'll keep reading :) 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you for all the support you\'ve given me! Cyns

O_O So Mrs. Norris has Crookshanks abilities (as a cat)? Poor Crookshanks, Mrs. Norris' body will have to do for him ;) New question you have states: how are they going to get back in their respective bodies? How are they even going to warn their masters about the situation? Keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying my story, I hope as much as I have enjoyed your writing. Mrs. Norris has Crookshanks ability because it is in his body. You will just have to wait and see how they figure out how to get back to normal. I don't want to give anything away, but you might be able to figure it out if you think a little on it! :)

It was nice :) It was short but still very good. I liked how you handled the H&G conversation, and that letter of Sirius was so realistic. Very well written. Congrats. PS:Btw, did you know we have a fic with the same title? I came across with yours because of that. Just thought to let you know ^^

Author's Response: thanks! i was so worried, this is my very first fic ::GRIN:: im very, very glad that you liked it!!!

Hey, QueenHal! I bet you were losing your faith on me, right? But no! I said I would review, and review I shall...

I might as well start from the beginning. Well, to be honest, I didn't know which of your stories to review. Each one of them called me for one reason or another, but I had left this one out purposely. Maybe you don't know it, but I'm a H/G shipper :) Yet, curiosity finally got the best of them.

Ah, what can I say? This is, honestly, the first H/Hr story I have ever liked. Believe me, I'm not just saying it; I really like it! The words literally reflect Hermione's pain and her internal and constant struggle with herself. I was impressed by how easily you described the emotions, and yet we had a much more detailed vision of the things.

Let me grab a piece :) :"The color green had faded from the memory of the world, and the laughing hues of the flowers had become only mere myth." Ah, this simple line gives so much insight of the whole atmosphere of the story. It was enought to really get me into it.

"But unlike colors or the lost ability to smile, it had been burned into my memory. I saw it now as I saw the others, jagged, pink, and not unlike a lightning bolt." I can't really tell why this blew me away, but it somehow touched me. Maybe it is because it shows how much they really know each other, or how closely they are bonded.

“I would and I'm saying it now. I love you.” This particular scene was very strong. I liked Hermione's denial and resistance to her own heart, and how Harry pushes and pushes farther and deeper.

“Harry stop!” I broke away, and began to run along the edge of the cliff. I have to be honest with you... I thought this part was somehow... weird. Maybe not weird, but odd (forgive my poor choice of words :P ). The thing is that I found it a tad strange her reaction. I know she probably must have been scared of listening to those words and letting herself lose in it, but I can't shake the feeling it was strange. However, what develops from this action was quite exceptional.

"And when I hit a ledge halfway down the cliff side, bones within me broke, and yet I didn't cry. I was numb." Ahh, I loved this part! The way you portrayed her numbness and the little she cared or noticed the physical pain... it was just incredible. Creepy... and very deep.

The next line could be the most significant one of the whole story (of course, that's my humble opinion :D), “Let me love you.” That line alone expressed the whole conflict within Hermione, the reason of all her distress. I don't know if I'm even being logical (I hope I am, but sometimes it is hard to express what you feel from a story). For me, that line was the peak of the plot, one of those moments where you have to decide something that will change your life forever.

Ah, I think I got pretty excited writing this review :) Anyway, as I said before, I loved this one-shot. It's the first (and maybe the only one) story I've truly enjoyed of H/Hr. And it's not that I plainly dislike any ship that isn't cannon (I shipped H/G before it became cannon; thought I would clear that up :P ), but I don't enjoy them like a H/G or R/Hr fic (although I can't say I enjoy all H/G fics >.

I liked your capture of emotions, also the fact that they were so close and yet so far. The bitterness of it all was very well captured. Great job. 10/10