11/07/04
I've been out of the fandom for a year or so, and I'm starting to have major withdrawals, so please bare with me as I ease myself back in and attempt to finish the sequel to the story I started almost 5 years ago. . . .
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love, and be loved in return
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The Secret thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione describes her Ron troubles in this series of hilarious journal entries, notes passed in class, and lists. And...Mrs Norris is a duck?
NOTE: This was written quite some time ago, in my younger years. It was my first story...which should explain a lot.
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 4: Detention isn't always bad
Wow, that was absolutley hilarious! Congrats on a job well done!
Date: 11/26/04 Title: None
First things first…this plot is overused. But I always end up reading these stories because it really is a great plot in that it is a validated reason to get Draco and Hermione together. Sooo my advice to you is to give YOUR story something abstract about it; give it sparkle, elaboration, and dialog like Fresh Pickled Toad already suggested. The one thing that I as an author constantly try to think about when I write, is that JKR created the world of Harry Potter with an unbelievable amount of detail, and it's the detail that captures the readers. So just remember that when you're writing! This story definitely has potential, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: i honestly havent read too many of the D/Hr fics (though some are on my favorites list- ive just been meaning to read them). im still not sure exactly where im going with the plot, but im going to try to make it more individual- i just hope it works!
Date: 02/11/06 Title: None
Love it! Love it! 'Twas marvelous!! Love your detail/writing style....my only complaint would be that your chapters aren't long enough!! Hope the mods hurry with the next installment! Till then, I'm here and awaiting more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =) I'm a big fan of your fic, 'Born the Day You Kissed Me'!
Date: 02/10/06 Title: None
Ohh, I was wondering where Dr and Hr would come into play! Nice opening, though I'm sure that if someone lost my hotel reservation and I knew I'd made it, I would totally speak to the manager and demand an explanation! I liked the interaction between the two. Another thing, wouldn't they resume their 'alter' appearances before opening the door? Hmmmm, well, I guess they had to find out each others true identity somehow. Intersting start as I already said! 'Twas a good read!
Daddy by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Party
The truth? Not a R/Hr fan at all...but I LOVED this story nonetheless! I think you did a wonderful job with what would have been a rather cliche plot, but you took it to the next level. Kudos to you!:) And for heavens sakes, enough with this ridiculus rupertfan person. We get it! You have no life! Stop writing rude and pointless comments! It is infuriating! I am a Texan so I can say first hand that we do NOT speak like that! Seriously, you make me wonder if you are an elementary dropout....
The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Date: 05/22/07 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35- Break-Times
As much as I love this story, I just need something to happen between them. the suspense is killing me, I feel like I've been reading the same thing for the past 30ish chapters, and I'm not sure how much longer I can take this!
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors
I don't know how many times I've read this story, I just love it!!
I can't say much else that hasn't been expressed by the thousands of other reviewers. . . .you're obviously doing somthing right ;)
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors
Oh my goodness I LOVED the bathroom scene! I couldn't stop myself from grinning. And then of course, "Sexy Beast" had me falling out of my chair. And I liked how sentimental they got at the end :) Well done, I'm glad that you're back!!
Date: 12/18/05 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Valentine’s Day
I just plowed through this whole story for the first time and I absolutely love it!! Though I must say you are doing a great job with keeping them in character...you have also deprived us all of fluff through 24 long chapters! Omfg, when are they gonna kiss!??? I hope it is soon....Anyways great job with the suspense, and I'm looking forward to an update!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading the whole story in one sitting and loving it! Good to hear that the characters are, well, in character. =D Yup, I admit, I have deprived you guys of fluff for 24 whooooole chapters. But, I promise you that I won't deprive you guys for the whole story. I'm not THAT evil! =P Thanks for the review, hope you like the rest of the story!
Date: 01/30/05 Title: None
You portrayed Hermione very well in the first chapter; that is exactly the type of reaction I would imagine her having. Your descriptions are good, but as I always advise, the more detail the better. You're off to an excellent start, so keep it up!
Breaking The Barrier by Angel Of Darkness
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione has just broken up with Ron. He had cheated on her and so she is heart broken and devastated.
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 5: So This Is Love?
I really enjoyed this. I thought it was very simple and eloquent, great job!
Date: 06/14/06 Title: None
I just read all of your chapters so far and I hope they validate the next chapter soon! I really like it!
Date: 10/18/05 Title: None
First of all, I think this was written very well. Great descriptions. Love the detail. Some suggestions though: the summary is a little long. Make it short and sweet. Don't tell the entire story, only hint at what's to come so you can get more people to read it. Another thing, use more dialogue. It starts to lose interest when the only thing you have are big long paragraphs. Dialogue makes it way more interesting. But again, I think this has great potntial and I think you're off to a fabulous start:)
Author's Response: Yes, thanks. For establishing any story, I find description over dialogue is best, and keeps things moving slowly. The character interactions pick up as I introduce them, this story is very drawn out... 36 chapters. I know the beginning is a bit boring... it was my first try at writing, so I didn't know what I was doing. Thank you for the review, your suggestions are exactly what I did work towards later on in my story... when its all posted, you'll see what I mean ^_^
Date: 10/18/05 Title: None
Great job, I really liked it! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: ^_^ Thanks, I will
Date: 01/02/06 Title: None
Good start, like some others have said it does stand out. I think it would be wise to get a Beta however, for simple things like the capitalization and especially in the summary...also you are using i, not I. NEVER use an uncapitalized I, it is always in caps!!! Like another said, the summary needs to be proofed, and I'm sure you'll find that a lot more people will read your story if your summary is inticing. Anyways, great job for a first fanfic, you're off to a great start!!
Author's Response: Hey thanx alot....I've gotten a beta for the third chapter....I've just realised about the summary. I for got all about it. Thanx for reminding me...lol thanx for your review.
Forever and Always by darkwing731
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
The day Draco Malfoy returns to Hogwarts, the student body succumbs to the vicious rumors like starving wolves to a piece of meat. Murders, speculation, and confirmed lies only invigorate the malicious boy who had undergone a disturbing transformation. However, no one premeditated Malfoy's fierce desire to be left alone, nor the rancorous, omnipotent attacks that accompanied it. But what rattled them all was the fact that Hermione Granger, more logical and cunning than the rest, would have the audacity to stand up to him.
Hermione Granger did not expect herself to become a detective; a turbulent relationship with Ron, and the figure of Voldemort hovering over the castle, they are the least of her troubles as Malfoy's fatal depression puts everything on the line. Through the visions of a shattered family and the desperate attempts to keep it together, the epiphany that only she can help Malfoy unlocks a traumatizing, unexpected event that no one could've predicted. Discovering she isn’t the only genius on the planet, the ever-looming horcruxes throw her into a mess that she must fix before her life, and everyone else's... is destroyed.
Note: This starts off with a Ron/Hermione ship that lasts a long time; if you can't stomach that ship, don't read it!
BANNER IN BIO!!!
Date: 02/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: September First
I really enjoyed this opening chapter! Good job with giving lots of descriptions, and like another said, I like how you already have a relationship with Ron established for Hermione. I wouldn't stress too much over the cliche thing--it is good to be unique, but it is also really difficult to write a Hr/Dr without having a few of the classic cliche plot...Head Boy/Head Girl, paired together in potions, hormones and all that...it is pretty rare to come across a fic that doesn't have at least one of those. Anyways, I also would like to applaud your summary, for that is the reason I decided to read this. It drew me in! Anyways, I'm on to the next chapter:) Great job!
Date: 02/05/06 Title: Chapter 2: Here We Are
Good job, I really liked this chapter! Keep the updates coming:)
Letter to Draco by wizard girl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione writes her thoughts and feelings down, and sends them to the one she loves. this is taken from an original poem I wrote, and made HP style.... *note- not meant to rhyme, and this is OOC*
Date: 04/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: This is for you, Draco
Very good, I really liked this. Interesting too...I never thought about Draco and Hermione talking and him not yet knowing that she's a mudblood. Intersting, I like it! It would be cool if you extended this and made it from Draco's POV....
Author's Response: i just realized it was you CLee. OMG you dont know how excited i just got. your like my favorite author. and you paying me a compliment on my work.... im speachless. thank you.
Date: 01/10/06 Title: None
This story is great so far, I cannot believe that I'm the only person who as reviewed, C'mon people!! I really loved all the description you used in this chapter. For some reason I loved the line about Hermione shrinking closer to Draco when they passed the DE. One question, was this chapter written in the past, or the present? Anyways, I hope she uses her ring soon to let Harry and Ron know not to come. And of course I hope Draco helps her escape crazy voldy;) Great chapter, I applaud you! Update soon! 10/10
Date: 01/10/06 Title: None
This story is great so far, I cannot believe that I'm the only person who as reviewed, C'mon people!! I really loved all the description you used in this chapter. For some reason I loved the line about Hermione shrinking closer to Draco when they passed the DE. One question, was this chapter written in the past, or the present? Anyways, I hope she uses her ring soon to let Harry and Ron know not to come. And of course I hope Draco helps her escape crazy voldy;) Great chapter, I applaud you! Update soon! 10/10