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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
“I’ll always protect you.”
Date: 11/16/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down
omg, here I was, expecting a fluffy love story-oh my. Hm... maybe the other girl is ...... Andromeda??? I dk.. I'lll keep reading and find out!
Author's Response: There is a lot of fluffiness throughout the story, rest assured! Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/24/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Mr. Masselli
I can't commet on the chapter-0I have to go read the next (emma!!!!) but here are a few typos(if you care to know): why did her like her again? I think it should be why did HE... and then here: he more pulled herself up shoudln't it be he pulled HIMslef up?
Date: 11/25/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Smile and Nod
I've been wondering for a while now-why does lily want to talk to Beverly's parents but not to Teds?
Author's Response: I don't remember what details I've given to you at this point, but everything that happened with Ted is a lot less straightforward than with Beverly, and not as easy to face, if that makes any sense. You'll see. :)
Date: 11/18/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Soap Suds and Back Rubs
I loved it! But so cruel...
did she have her wand with her? How could she conjure anything if she didn't?
Date: 11/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
hey, I was just wondering if I could make a banner for this story for the Beta Boards Dean's Corner November challenge? It doesn't do this story justice, and if you don't want me to submit it, just give me a shout :D Sorry that this isn't really a review...
Author's Response: You're welcome to if you want! I had one ages ago that I made myself, back in the days when Banners were allowed in profiles. But I'm sure you'd make a better one! :)
Date: 11/19/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild
AH! I want to review so badly but I can't I have to read the next chapter! and sorry my last review was awful, too, but I had to get off the compy... anyway, oMG!!!
Date: 11/27/09 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28: What Happens Next
oh, wow. the wound sounds scary.
here is a typo (i hope I am not annoying you with typos... lol.)
>i
Date: 11/27/09 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening
in your chapter notes you say Ted is with them going to see Ted-but I think you meant Sirius, as you didn't mention him. Or did you mean Ted??? *confused*
And a typo, if you are interested. But Ted wasn’t talk to them it should be Ted wasn't talkING to them.
And uuuh, I have to read the next chapter!!!!
Date: 11/20/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: The First Day
OMG, great! and lol, when you said she kissed him i was like O.o and had to stop reading - deep, calming breaths- and then I read on and was like ooooooh. lol. I hope Emma is in the feature chappies a lot-I love her so much!
Date: 11/23/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand
I love this story so much so far-but I'm a bit confused. I thought you said it wasn't just teenagers caught-didn't they find men women, children, seniors... dead? So the Death Eaters only kept teenagers? for better death eaters, or what?
well, I adore you characterization of James. I dont know if I ever read him as good as this. He is so great!
Author's Response: Only teenagers were kept, the rest were killed. Sorry if that's confusing! I'm glad you liked James in this story :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/23/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave
well.. I don't know what to say to this chapter-it was really good, but... harsh. well, here's a typo... (you know after reading the contence of this chapter I was like "grr what does a typo matter? There s so much evil in the world...") but here it is:
Lily looked back at the car
it should be back at the cat
(i think :p)
Author's Response: I'll fix that -- thanks for pointing it out!
Date: 11/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
i love it! Although the fight on the train was just a tincy tiny bit cliched. But whatever-a cliche isn't always bad :D
I particularly loved the beginnig, how she would ramble about something and give us more information. That was so cool! And OMG, do you think that's what it would feel like to be stupified? that was really neat too.
Author's Response: It is a bit cliched, but this was my first story for Harry Potter, so like most first stories, cliches are abound! I'm glad you liked it nonetheless :) Thanks for the review.
Things Aren't Always Black and White by padfootsgirl1981
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.
Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.
Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:
Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.
“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”
“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”
Date: 02/20/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 - Patroni
i always thought james' patronus was a stag- but i was probably wrong...
poor sirius :(
cool chapter!
Author's Response: His Animagus form is a stag, but JK never specified what his Patronus was, so I took some creative licence :D. Thanks!
Date: 02/16/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Genius Meet Lunacy
is hogwarts in scotland?
uhhh, i really like Kristy!!!
Author's Response: Yes it is :). And thanks, I'm glad you like her.
Date: 08/23/09 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?
ah, you know, i wanted to be dissapointed in you coz this chappie came so late, but this chappie took all that away. great job! and hurry up w/ the next! siriusly, we thought you had abandoned us ): but i forgive ya. :P
so, to da chapter:
3 marauders + emma down, one too go. *squeels*
The part when Haley runs out.... amazing. You are such a good writer! That's really all i can say. Have you thought about publishing? you realy have got skill, and this story is... well, it's SO good. I'm like,.... ah! I need to read the next chappie!
And poor krithy. now haley is fine again and she'll be all left out ): well, maybe. idk, i have to continue to read! so uptade soon plz!!!
Date: 02/19/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation
why couldnt sirius just sleep in lilys bed?
Author's Response: Because he wanted to sleep in Kirsty's ;) :p
Forbidden Forest? Who Said Forbidden? by Rikku
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
It's Lily’s and the Marauders’ fifth year at Hogwarts. Voldemort is getting stronger, lessons are getting harder and life is getting increasingly more difficult. One thing keeps repeating itself throughout the school year though; the frequent visitors of the Forbidden Forest!
What happens when Lily and her friends accidentally stumble across something in the forest they shouldn’t have?
Date: 05/26/09 Title: Chapter 6: The Dare
it was good! get the next chap up soon!
although the slytherins are not very creativ...
Author's Response: I know, they're not very creative at all... I'll update as soon as I can :D
A Highly Combustible Situation by whatapotter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: When James makes a cocky boast that he knows Hogwarts so well he could make his way around it blindfolded, Lily unexpectedly takes his bet. Now, James has to spend twenty-four hours with a magical blindfold on, fumbling his way around the trickiest areas of the school. If he loses, he must publicly announce his failure, admit he’s not really as cool as he thinks he is, and give a large apology to Severus Snape. If he wins, however, he gains the adulated prize of giving one kiss to Lily Evans.
Suddenly, James is very keen for this bet to take place…
As for Lily… well, at first she thought it would be a grand idea to humiliate Potter, and was looking forward to his embarrassing debut. However, as any student who’s attended Hogwarts for longer than a few hours would know, Hogwarts just isn’t that safe… especially not when you’re blind, have a natural affinity for trouble, and your name is James Potter. Somehow, Lily’s been roped in for Potter-sitting, and it’s starting to look like a very, very long twenty-four hours.
Date: 01/20/09 Title: Chapter 3: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared
thst's such a cool story! c'mon! keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try
To the Future by FlightofthePhoenix
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Andromeda attends the funeral for her husband, daughter and son-in-law with her grandson Teddy Lupin and is visited by someone unexpected later that day.
This is the first one-shot in the Teddy Lupin Files.
Date: 06/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: We Stand in Remembrance
hmmmm i liked it but wouldn'r ted have already been buried? after all, he died months before remus and tonks...
Dursleys, Meet The Wizarding World by Ghoul In Pajamas
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.
Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 10: Answers
OMG, update!!!
Author's Response: in the queue! :)