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Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Veil
Good poem! I couldnt have written ONE sentence about the Veil! I am that bad! And you are good. Hope I'll get to write some good and short poems like you!!
Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin by fawkes_07
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is an alternate version of Book Seven. Harry reluctantly returns to Hogwarts to train with a new DADA teacher, one appointed in specifically for Harry in Dumbledore's will. As the rest of the Wizard World reacts to Dumbledore's defeat, Harry develops the skills he needs to fulfill the Prophecy--including mastery of the Kedavra curse.
Mysteries are explored along the way, particularly the "missing 24 hours" from 1981--the span of time between Hagrid taking Baby Harry from the ruins of Godric's Hollow on Halloween Night, and his arrival to hand off Baby Harry on Privet Drive the following night. The Veil Room in the Department of Mysteries is also revisited. A traitor is uncovered, and Dumbledore's wisdom comes into question. And even when all goes as planned, things are not all they seem.
Date: 01/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Calm
um.. i dont know what to say but.. I thought it was good though compared to J.K's works it's a bit you know...
Author's Response: *crosses eyes* No, I don't know. It's nice to get reviews, but I'm not sure what you're trying to say... I guess that you don't think it's quite as good as JKR...? *shrugs* To each his own.
A Letter For Fred by PadfootnPeeves
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: George is feeling depressed after his brother's death. Molly suggests to write out his feelings- but how will that turn out? A rather sentimental poem from George to Fred.
And if you still haven't read DH, well, prepare to be shocked.
Date: 01/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter
Wow!! It's so so sad... I loved it. I dont usually get tears in my eyes while reading sentimental poems but your poem did it. *applauds* It's awfully good!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the kind words!
A Love Poem by Nevilles Girl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry reflects on what gave him his strength - in the form of a sonnet.
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Love Poem
It's an EXELLENT poem. I love the first verse! You did a lovely job and I am sure that you are a born poet! Keep writing! :) [Sonam Tshomo]
Author's Response: Why, thank you! That's so nice of you. Smiles, Luna
What You Mean To Me by Roxy Black
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A short, ambiguous poem. Take from it what you wish.
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: What you mean...
I dont really like reading poetry but.. this caught me !! I can tell you..... I havent read something as nice as this in a long time. Long ago, I felt this way about someone but I think it was just my imagination. I dont feel that way about anyone anymore . But you expressed the way I used to feel about that person in words . Anyway, Your poem rox! Roxy rox!!!
Don't Forget the Mornings by Rhi for HP
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A little yellow poem you might construe as you desire.
Date: 01/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Forget the Mornings
Ooooh.... It's a WONDERFUL poem..... I just dont know what to say cuz this is awesome......... Well..... I became more and more hungry as I read your poem. Keep Writing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! :D Lol about the hungry part, though! ;)