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03/17/09

Hello! I'm Alyssa. I joined this site just after I turned thirteen and I'm still here. Well, I'm here off and on.

Mugglenet is where I read my first fanfic, and it's where I tried submitting my first story. I met some of my best friends here.

This is just a great place.

I don't write very often, and when I do it's short. That'll never change, so never expect anything more than a one shot from me.

To anyone who has given me a review, thank you very much!

My first ever one-shot is Home, and my second is Talking in the Ministry. I don't think they are very good, so read at your own caution.

My stories:

Two is Better Than One - Harry/Hermione
Regret - Dark/Angsty (Molly's POV)
Home - Harry/Ginny
That One Detention - Other Pairing (Rosmerta/OC)
Your Time - Marauder Era (Lily's POV)
True Happiness - Dark/Angsty
Love Reign O're Me - Marauder Era (Remus's POV)
I Get By - Same-Sex Pairing (Crabbe/Goyle)
On my Own - Dark/Angsty (Sirius's POV)
Birthday Surprises - General
What Would You Do? - James/Lily ~ Won QSQ for best Canon Romance
Over and Over - Dark/Angsty (James's POV)
Talking in the Ministry - General

My poems:

Awaiting - A poem about the Final Battle.
Light My Fire - A Dolores/Fudge poem.
Character Haikus - Haikus about HP characters.
The One for Me - James's POV about Lily.
Father - A peom about Harry dying.
Madness - A poem about Azkaban.

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I Think This Love is Altering my Brain by MadEyeMaddy

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ron and Hermione have always had a special connection. But mix in a fake French girl, a handful of dares, a cup of Hogsmeade trips, half a pound of Malfoy, and a pinch of detentions, there is definitely some trouble to be anticipated.

A look into Ron and Hermione's fifth-year minds to experience the spazzness and crazyism in first person.

Disclaimer: Sadly, I am not J. K. Rowling. I'm not even famous. Heck, I only have one story up on Mugglenet. But I'm still glad I can walk into J. K.'s world. And tap-dance back out again.

Additional warnings: May contain fluff, excessive randomness (AU), and minor plot twists!

I would also appreciate if NikkiSue/Nicole could mod this for me :]

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 7: Almost-Kisses and Angry Villains

I can't believe I waited this long to read this chapter. Shame on me. I absolutly love this line here: And, as all mean girls do when their plans are foiled, she stomped her foot and shrieked. It made me laugh so hard I started caughing. It's just great. It's funny and true at the same time which is the reason that it's great.

I like what happened in this chapter. It's very good. I wasn't expecting Ginny crying at the end of it. I loved reading Ron and Hermione together. It was cute and funny at the same time which is good too.

I'm going to guess what happens next. I'm not good at guessing. More than half my life I've watched crime shows and I've only guessed the right bad guy before half of the show is over once. Here it goes:

They go on their date and they are nurvus and Avril shows up and does some bad stuff. Ron and Hermione will either have a cute ending or something bad happens and in the next next chapter they get better.

Bad, right? Anyways, now I'm very excited to see what happens. I want to know how far off I am. I think that this is a great story and I'm sad that it's going to end soon.

Author's Response: Awww! Saying that you laughed that hard really made my day(: Yeah, Ginny crying at the end....I thought she and Hermione needed a little "female bonding" haha. I'm not going to say anything to whether your guess is right or wrong, though.... But I am sorry to say that the next chapter IS the last besides the epilogue....Sorry for the short response though, I have to get in the shower.... --Maddy(:

Every Foolish Dream by electronicquillster

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Curiosity can be a painful thing. Lily Evans learns that lesson well during her years at Hogwarts as she battles between curiosity and indifference where one Black is concerned.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Every Foolish Dream

I like how you madde Regulas not there for most of the story, but then he talks to her. Its a very good story and I like it.

Redemption by pheonixfeather94

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Sin, Blood, Faith, Forgiveness, Growth, Life. Redemption.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Redemption

I like this story and how you have brighter colors with better things. Its a very good story.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The Marauder's Map to a Gryffindor's Heart by The_Dream_Team

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Follow the famous Marauders through their years at Hogwarts as they deal with school, friendship, love, betrayal, and what it really means to be a true Gryffindor.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Journey to Hogwarts

I really like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/22/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Breakfast

I really like this chapter. It's really good. My favorite part is the last paragraph.

But James would not give up. He would prove to her that Snape was a no-good Slytherin and that he was the heroic one, worthy to be in the house of Godric Gryffindor.

That explains why he makes fun of him all the time. It's great. I really like this storyand I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate the feedback! Hopefully I will be able to update soon(and I personally enjoy chapter 3...)! Thanks again! :)

Fire & Ice by PlonkerOnDaLoose

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: “But if I’m fire,” I protested, “and you’re ice, what do we have in common?” Tom smirked, reaching up and twisting a strand of my hair around his finger. “Destruction.” I pressed my knife to his throat, drawing blood. “My feelings exactly.” TR/GW

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I can't wait to see what happens next! I really want to know how Ginny doesn't kill Tom. I have no idea what your asking or I would tell you.

Rabbit Test by indigo_mouse

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Draco wipes the memory of his girlfriend of when she tells him she is actually a Muggle. What he doesn't know is that she is pregnant with his child.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Rabbit Test

I like this one shot. It's cool. ou did a good job on it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

For Better Or Worse? by GinnyGinervaWeasley

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ginny finds herself becoming the success she has always dreamed of being. She finds herself having to make choices she has never been faced with and a fight could lead her into Draco's open arms.
Will Ginny's situation work out for better or worse?

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/15/09 Title: Chapter 2: The Unexpected Turn

I like this chapter. I'm glad Ginny went to live with him. I really really like the last sentence of this chapter. It says that she isn't just doing that because she has dirnks that night but because she wanted to. It also sounds cool. I really want to see what happens next. Especially with what her family thinks about them together.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am glad to know you liked it. Thats what i was trying to go for with the last second, as for the family the next chapter will have a some confrontation. I hope to have the thrid chapter up shortly. Thanks again!

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: The New Beginning

I can't wait to see what happens next. It's a good story so far. I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am just coming to the end of the second chapter and will be submitting it soon. Thanks for letting me know what you think!

One of Those Days by Pogonotrophy

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: He’d learned enough from hindsight that on days like today, it seemed like Lily Evans didn’t mind a little bit of conversation.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: One of Those Days

I really like this story. It made me laugh.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Who Would Have Thought by Karaley Dargen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When the War is over and Voldemort defeated, Lily Evans suddenly finds herself with no plans left. She decides to go to a dragon reservation for a year to find some distraction and maybe finally make a decision for her future. But who would have thought that Lily might find something precious there?

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dragons

I really like this story. It's definentally my favorite out of all of the dragon storys that I've read. It also told me why there were lots of dragon storys. I just thought that everybody got like a dragon fever and had to write about dragons or else that would grow chicken feet. But back to the story, I think it's really good. I like how you have the ending with Lily protecting the Norwegian Ridgeback. I could see her protecting it. The only thing I don't see is Lily working at a dragon reservation thing. She would have to for the kind of story you did, but I don't imagine her working there. Once again, I really like the story. It was fun to read.

P.S. I can't spell to save my life.
P.P.S. This is the longest review I have ever written. It took like five minutes.

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for that review, I thought no one read that story :D It was my first Gauntlet, and I didn't know how to write for the prompts yet, so I think at some points it sounds a bit.. forced, and unnatural. But I grew to like it, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it too! :) And yea, I picked Lily, and the first prompt was "your character works with dragons" – I really couldn't come up with anything more explainable or believable >.< stupid time pressure :P So I'm really glad to hear that someone read and enjoyed my story, and that I didn't write it for nothing. Thank you for your review – and I love long reviews :D

Hydrophobia by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Bold and brazen, Gryffindors are expected not to fear anything, and James Potter does everything he can to live up to this image.

But everyone fears something, and what it is that James truely fears is something that even the most cowardly seem able to face without a single fret.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Hydrophobia

This is a cool story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!

Bludgers and Meteors by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: No candlelit dinner, no getting down on one knee.

This was how it happened instead. During Sunday brunch.

Surrounded by Weasleys and babies, instead of violin notes and posies.

With sniping and bellowing, along with the embraces and kissing.

But it was no less perfect.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Bludgers and Meteors

It's a very cute story.

Tainted Purity by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sirius always thought of James as a brother, as his best friend. But when his feelings grow into something more, will he act upon them? Or will he forever hide them?

Written for SPEW Lovenotes 2009. Prompt: "Love is what the trouble is."

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Tainted Purity

This is an amazing story. I like it alot. I can see Sirius likeing James, but then getting over him.

The Kindling of the Fire by padfootsgirl1981

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
Dead? Ha! Fools!

Evan Rosier is alive and kicking. After faking his own death and escaping from Voldemort's clutches, he starts a new life as a dragon keeper. He soon discovers, however, that feelings, like flames, are not easily extinguished.

Evan Rosier/Marlene McKinnon.

This is padfootsgirl1981 of Hufflepuff writing for the Third Task of the Triwizard Tournament

Categories: Other Pairing
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Words: 3628 | Hits: 1646 | Published: 06/12/09 | Updated: 06/13/09
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Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story. It's the first that I've read that have to do with dragons and it's really good. You did a good job on it.

Good Night, Albus by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A series of drabbles written for the Ravenclaw Almost-Gauntlet, this story includes nine scenes from Albus Severus Potter's time at Hogwarts, beginning with his surprise sorting and following him through Quidditch, O.W.L.s, and a very important relationship. It concludes with a touching reflection on so many memories from over the years.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Good Night, Albus

I really love this story. I love all the different years that Albus was there. You put alot of stuff in only one chapter and it was great. I'm sad that there is only one chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you liked it. I've written a bit more about this Albus and Marcum in my story called "Lost" if you are interested. I really appreciate you reading this piece and leaving such a nice comment - thank you! ~Gina :)

Involuntary Volunteer by Racing Co

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Gilderoy Lockhart devises the perfect plan to help boost morale after a young Gryffindor student is Petrified by the “horror within” the Chamber of Secrets. Despite his best attempts at rudeness, Severus Snape unwillingly becomes a part of Lockhart’s scheme.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 11/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Involuntary Volunteer

I love this oneshot. the characterization of the characters is amazing. The differences between Lockhart and Snape is really pronounced in this onesjot. It's cool to read about them and how many differences they have. Lockhart is bubbly and cheerful and Snape is a bit more... sarcastic. They make an interesting pair. This is just an mamzing oneshot. You did a great job with this.

Author's Response: A belated thank-you! Glad you enjoyed the story. I have always enjoyed writing Lockhart stories, and hope to get another one up in the future.

Eventual Embrace by Afifa

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: If a girl you love likes you, it doesn't necessarily mean that she wants to go a step ahead with the relationship. Or that she wants you to be something more than just friends.

But, if the girl you love hated you and then started liking you and became your friend, it is possible that she may also learn to love you back. All you have to do is wait for the right time.

This is a sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell, but it can be read as a stand alone, too.

A/N: Warning is there just in case, there is seriously, nothing major going on.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: One shot- Eventual Embrace

I like this story and how they were friends before they got togther. I can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had fun writing it. :D Thanks for the review. :)

Invisible Magic by laurskii

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The note fluttered up through the air, arcing gracefully over the windowsill to her lap. Her eyes found the photograph attached to her vanity mirror as she unfolded it – his eyes smiled out at her. I love you, Lils. I always will.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Invisible Magic

This is a cute story and one of the only only ones that make me feel bad for Severus.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

But I'm A Gryffindor by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James always put being a Gryffindor above all else...

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: But I'm A Gryffindor

I like this story. It's cool how it's in different years.

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