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03/17/09

Hello! I'm Alyssa. I joined this site just after I turned thirteen and I'm still here. Well, I'm here off and on.

Mugglenet is where I read my first fanfic, and it's where I tried submitting my first story. I met some of my best friends here.

This is just a great place.

I don't write very often, and when I do it's short. That'll never change, so never expect anything more than a one shot from me.

To anyone who has given me a review, thank you very much!

My first ever one-shot is Home, and my second is Talking in the Ministry. I don't think they are very good, so read at your own caution.

My stories:

Two is Better Than One - Harry/Hermione
Regret - Dark/Angsty (Molly's POV)
Home - Harry/Ginny
That One Detention - Other Pairing (Rosmerta/OC)
Your Time - Marauder Era (Lily's POV)
True Happiness - Dark/Angsty
Love Reign O're Me - Marauder Era (Remus's POV)
I Get By - Same-Sex Pairing (Crabbe/Goyle)
On my Own - Dark/Angsty (Sirius's POV)
Birthday Surprises - General
What Would You Do? - James/Lily ~ Won QSQ for best Canon Romance
Over and Over - Dark/Angsty (James's POV)
Talking in the Ministry - General

My poems:

Awaiting - A poem about the Final Battle.
Light My Fire - A Dolores/Fudge poem.
Character Haikus - Haikus about HP characters.
The One for Me - James's POV about Lily.
Father - A peom about Harry dying.
Madness - A poem about Azkaban.

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Forty Days a Charm by Russia Snow

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In Hannah Abbott’s life plan, when she is twenty-nine, she is married and has two children. But of course, life doesn’t always go according to plan. On her twenty-ninth birthday, Hannah receives a shock that will change her life forever, and will maybe just set her back on the track of her life plan.

This is Russia Snow of Gryffindor submitting for “Life Begins at Forty” Bookbasilisk Summer challenge.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/19/09 Title: Chapter 1: Forty Days a Charm

I really like this story. It's very cute. It was a lot of fun to read. You did a great job on this!

Author's Response: Alyssa, you are seriously awesome! You must have written this reveiw... like two minutes after is had ben validated! I was checking my inbox every two minutes and I leave for an hour, come back and look! THREE reveiws already! *hugs* thankyou so much! Russia xxxxx

The Marauder's Map - A Beginning by Karaley Dargen

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On a lazy Saturday afternoon in their fifth year, two of the Marauders are staying inside talking – while the other two are outside and get an idea. Why not make a map of Hogwarts? It would certainly make their nightly wanderings easier, and who knows what could be done with a piece of parchment...

This is Karaley Dargen of Gryffindor writing for the final in the MWPP class on the beta boards.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story. Great job Kara! It would be cool if you continued it sometime. I hope you do!

Beyond The Portal by Pallas

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Remus and Tonks have been told to simply live. But what will that life be? Some short stories of the Lupin Family set in the Post Epilogue Portalverse established for A Little More Time.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 09/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Counting Legs Part One

Wow, that was very unexpected. My favorite line is Where’s Hagrid when you need him? It made me spit out my hot chocolate because I laughed for a second. I love lines like that. I love Remus's emotions when he finds out that he is haveing a girl. I think you did a great job on that. I also lke Dora's replies to Remus when he tells her to leave. They were also good. I hope I find out what happens next soon because I like this story so far.

Love Is by inspirations

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Tonks questions what she truly means to Remus.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Love Is

I really love this poem. It's great.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)

The Difference You Made by Padfoot Patronus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: All accomplished men like Dad share something in common – they are looked down, degraded, criticised for everything they say or do, right or wrong, and they take all of that in, patiently, uncharacteristically. Somewhere in those decades, the same society gives up on them, awards them with a pedestal of hero-ship and an immunity from all things used to roughen them up in a past life. People like Dad never again stand on the common ground like the rest of us.

Albus Potter reflects over past and present upon his father’s death. My impression of Harry Potter in later years – a hero of sort and so much more.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this story. The ending is amazing. I love what Luna said in he speech. It made me a bit sad.

Author's Response: Thank you, ron lover. I feel I had the space to make the ending better but I was out of ideas. I'm glad you liked Luna's quote, it was something that came to mind as soon as I thought she was going to make a speech. Thanks for reading!

That Awful Boy by TheBlackSister

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The night the Dementors show up on Privet Drive, Harry is not the only one tortured by his thoughts. Mention of death.

Many thanks to WeirdoGoddess for her sperb beta work!

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: That Awful Boy

I really love this story. It really is great.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Dream On by eternalangel

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James and Lily are dead and a traitor on the loose, but did you ever wonder what was going on with the rest of those that had known and loved them? This is a story and a song that tells their story of that horrible night.

The song used is Dream On by Aerosmith.

I am eternalangel and this is my final for the MWPP class.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this story. It's amazing. I really love your characterazation in this. Everyone was perfect.

Author's Response: thank you for my first review. I'm really glad you liked it because I had quite a hard time getting all the parts written. I really appreciate the feedback.

Still Waters, Troubled Waters by Sainyn Swiftfoot

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

At the bottom of the lake

Where the sun doesn't shine,

Among the many weeds

And between the slime,

You can find... someone.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/19/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this poem. It flows nicely.

The Beginning of the End by Radcliffefan07

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: October 31st, 1981. That was the night that Sirius Black lost everything. James and Lily were dead, and Harry's fate, undermined, and Sirius wanted only one thing: revenge against the traitor that took it all from him.

This is my take on Sirius and his reaction the night the Potters were killed.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

I really like this story. It kind of makes me sad at the end how he couldn't keep his promice. You did a great job on this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

To Follow the Dark Lord by hestiajones

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Regulus is respected and feared by the Slytherins, but his disenchantment has already begun. Along comes a young Barty Crouch Junior, who is every bit the embodiment of Regulus’ own doubts about the Dark Lord and the Death Eaters…

This story won second place in the Gift of Gab Challenge.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1To Follow the Dark Lord

I really like this story. It is very good.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Forged in Flames by Magical Maeve

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In times of unease, only the hardest of hearts will give protection.

Inspired by a heart made of iron I bought from a blacksmith. It's heavy and cold and unbreakable.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Forged in Flames

I really love this poem. It's really good.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It is much appreciated. :-)

Divination by Magical Maeve

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Herbert Reed wrote this, I just played with it. For the original please Google "The Naming of the Parts". Naturally, Herbert's is a much better poem.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this poem.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Cain and Abel by Sainyn Swiftfoot

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Two friends, close enough to be brothers.

What does it take to destroy their friendship?

Very little.

[one-shot, featuring Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs.]

This is Sainyn Swiftfoot of Hufflepuff writing for the final of the MWPP class.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Cain and Abel

I really like this story. It was really great.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

Rain by mahogany_wand

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Teddy met them the summer it rained.

Teddy, Rianne, and Skye had been best friends since the first day they got to Hogwarts. Now entering their sixth year, will things like romance, grades, and the possibly impending war bring them together, or tear them apart?

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 09/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this a great begining to a story. I really like how everything starts out. I really like Andromeda in this also Teddy. I'm really excited to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the characters, because I believe stories are character driven. If everything goes well, I'll have the next chapter up soon!

When Worlds Die by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In any man who dies there dies with him,
his first snow and kiss and fight . . .
Not people die but worlds die in them
~Yevgeny Yevtushenko, "People"

His twin is dead, and as far as George can see, the whole world might as well have died, too. In other words, this is the story of how George Weasley grieved in seven steps. *one-shot*

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the wrong story to read before the first day of school. You had me crying for George. I really love this story. I really love your George. He is really great. I also like the fights between Harry, Ginny and George. I just love this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've never really written much of George, so it good to know you think I did it well! I'm glad you liked the story, even if it had you crying ;)

To Win his Heart by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What happened between Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks after they left Bill’s bedside after he was attacked by Greyback? What made Remus see the light in his relationship with Tonks?

They went down by the lake and Tonks wouldn’t take no for an answer. This is their conversation.

I am mudbloodproud of Hufflepuff writing for the Gift of Gab competition on the beta forums.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: A War of Words

I really love this story. It's my favorite for the Gift of Gab prompt thing. I really love what they said. Some of it was funny and some of it was cute. I really hope this one wins. You did a great job on it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Unfortunately, as a mod I can't win. But, it was so much fun to write. Thanks again, Terri

When Moody's Eyeball Popped Out by DragonDi

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Remus tries to make sense of a mission gone wrong by asking Sirius about it. Bad idea. Very, very bad idea.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 09/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this made me laugh. I love this pillow fight part. That was funny. The ending was great. I just love this whole story.

Author's Response: I love knowing which parts people like the best! And, oh, Sirius and James having a pillow fight while on an Order mission...? Tsk, tsk. I'm glad you found this funny and that you liked the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Something Called Home by A H

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Not even a week after the final Battle, the downfall of the Dark Lord, the Wizarding's World hero disappears. Harry Potter has been missing for four months, and not even the best of the Aurors, nor his own best friends can find him. For Ron, Hermione, Ginny, the Weasley family and the whole of the Wizarding World, hope to find him is lost, and very few still persist in his search.

What seems to us as bitter trials are often blessings in disguise.

Oscar Wilde

Rated UP for profanity. Otherwise clean. :]

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 03/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: "Follow that lonesome dead-end road sign south"

Thr begining to this, to me, was confusing, but I knew what was going on in the end.

I think that the end was great. I knew what was going on without you giving tons of details. The way you have this writen at the end is beautiful.

As they watched him fade into the distance, they had no idea it was the last time they'd be seeing him.

I think that is written amazingly well, and it ends the chapter in a great way. It's a nice cliff hanger. I love to leave my stories off like this, and I like reading stories that end like this. It makes me want to read the next chapter right away. I think you did great with that.

I really like this story so far, and I'm excited to read the next chaper.

Author's Response: Ohh, very opposite from the other opinion on the last line, hehe. I'm glad you liked it, and enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

The Stars and the Moon by inspirations

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:

Sometimes the night calls to me. Sometimes the stars shine bright...

Severus reflects on himself, and what the night means to him.

My only friend will watch the stars... But is she seeing the same stars as me?

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Stars and the Moon

I really like this poem. I really love the ending to it. The whole poem is good.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! xx

Rainbow by Magical Maeve

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Depends on the angle.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this poem. It's really good. I like the last two lines the most.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and I am so pleased you liked the poem. :-)

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