Hi, I'm Sam. I'm fifteen, and pretty (unfortunately) painfully shy. I like music and books. My favorite ship is Lily/James. I hope to have something up soon, but in the meantime, I'm enjoying going through everyone else's wonderful works!
Oh, wow, that was pretty epic. You're great at keeping it original and TOTALLY hysterical. I was sooo happy when I saw the update. Great story :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry for taking so long to update/reply
“Sorry, mate. Here, I’ll do it to myself too,” -- hahahhahahhahaha :)
I love how you portray Sirius... very funny. My only comment would be that you used parenthesis an awful lot... but we all have our habits :) Continue? Please? I love this!
I like the rhythm, and I like that at the end you take out the "kill the snake" bit. The titles intriguing. My favorite is probably the first three lines, esp "Why bother? Soon we'll all be dead." Neville is so brave :) Great job
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much. It means so much to have reviews saying they liked my poem. I agree Neville is brave, and I hope to write more of him. Thanks again for the review!!
~M_W