Gosh, Love Sirius:D
Yes yes I'm still here! I'm a great fan of this story- in fact, it's one of my favourites on this site! :D Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll still keep writing it, cause I enjoy it. ~Carole~
It does sound quite like Peter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think my writing is in character. Thank you for taking the time to review!
That was just completely beautiful! Harry and Ginny together in love, transcending time, circumstance and place. Loved it:D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
So I waited for my little gem to bear fruit, to become one of those climactic surprises we should have seen coming, but somehow overlooked. Only it never came to pass. The death count mounted to a staggering high, the epic moments came and went, Snape’s back story was finally revealed, and still nothing.
So it has lain, bereft and unwanted, among the detritus of a Diagon Alley the Death Eaters had turned into a bully’s playground. But in the intervening years, this rough diamond has become the inspiration for this story, spreading its tentacles into new and intriguing territories.
Although Harry mentions Chocolate Frog as the title of Mad-Eye Moody’s autobiography at the end of my previous tale, The Dark Phoenix, this version of the story goes beyond that. Nonetheless, the sections representing Moody’s memoirs are clearly labeled.
This story begins with events recounted in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and continues beyond the end of the series. I have attempted to conform to canon as much as possible, elaborating only where the circumstances are vague or passed over. It is an interpretation of the events that happened behind the scenes, so to speak.
What a wonderful chapter!! I simply love how you portrayed the relationship between Ginny and Harry, especially Ginny's strength and "irreverence" (as you put it). Some tend to depict her as the tender lover right there by Harry's side throughout, comforting him with hugs and kisses; you didn't, though, and I think that's really spot-on! I find that what Ginny provides for Harry is more than just physical affection; her wit and lightheartedness (well, as light as the situation can get) serves as a distraction for Harry, allowing him to engage in normal chatter befitting of someone his age.
Author's Response: So happy you liked my characterization of Ginny. It’s unfortunate that the script writers have relegated Ginny’s character to the back burner in the films so that she comes across as nothing but a two-dimensional love interest. The books give the impression that she’s very like her mother: nurturing, determined, and a bit of a fire brand. This makes her such an ideal foil for Harry who is known to have a temper of his own. I see her as having a more modern outlook on childbearing and women's roles, though. More of Ginny and Harry to come in next chapter.
After it was all said and done, Harry wanted a sandwich. However, Ron knew that what he wanted was far deeper and complex and maddening and insufferable. But could Hermione ever forgive him for leaving her behind? Could he ever forgive himself?
This story was nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Canon Romance.
Ooh, really enjoyed this short story! :D I've always loved the "dysfunctional" relationship (as you said in an earlier reply to one of the reviews) that Ron and Hermione share. Sure, for all their squabbling and differences, their feelings for each other would always triumph in the end, and that's what I find really heartening!
"There had always been a gap between them, some yawning disconnect between the palpable attraction between them and the way they actually acted toward one another."
I particularly find this line extremely spot on with regards to the distance that stemmed from them being unable to articulate that dormant passion they shared for each other!
You're a really emphatic writer! I look forward to more of your stories!
Author's Response:
Oh, wow, what an awesome review! Though I tend to wish that Harry/Hermione had really played out in canon, I do appreciate and believe in the Ron/Hermione dynamic. Ron is almost the prototypical 'boy who pulls pigtails'. He treats Hermione like crap more often that not, usually not realising that he's doing it, but when it comes down to it, he is really there for her.
I'm glad you liked the story, considering it's something I wrote in about an hour after being up for almost 24 hours, lol. Yay for that. :D
~Jess
Hello! :D Interesting pairing you've got there! I'd never have imagined Dean and Hestia actually forming a romantic relationship, but I really like how you engineered their encounter! Rather than a love-at-first-sight kind of thing, they actually bond through tragedy, seeing each other through recovery. The notion of these two unconnected (in the Potter world) people getting together sort of weird-ed me out initially, but you pulled it off wonderfully:D Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the story. I know the pairing is way out in left field, but some of the best ones are pairings you never contemplated. I suppose the idea of a pleasant surprise makes it worth a shot. Post-battle recuperation would probably be dealt with in various ways, such as immersing oneself in family, cutting oneself off from the world, drink, sex, or just pretending everything is all right. The ones who found someone out of all that are truly the lucky ones. I felt like writing a hopeful story. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing. As always, it made my day. :D
~Jess
SPOILER ALERT for anyone who is not aware of the true identity of the Half-Blood Prince.
~~Nominated for 2011 Quicksilver Quills, Best Humor Story~~
Ohh I really like this a lot! :D Quirky and clever!
And of course, "Teaching Lily’s green eyes in James’ smug, specky face."
This line is just genius:D
Author's Response: So pleased you enjoyed it! Couldn’t have Snape encountering Ron and Hermione and not Harry. Can't take complete credit, though; the Weasley twins’ snide remark to Harry just prior to the Battle of the Seven Harrys was my inspiration for the closing line.
Lovely take on friendship! But who are these characters? I'm guessing Dumbledore and Snape, do let me know if I'm right! :D
Author's Response: Dumbledore and Snape? Interesting ... but no, actually, the people I was thinking of was Remus and Sirius. That's why I said it wasn't slash. But I have to admit, the poem does apply to Dumbledore and Snape, Harry and Sirius, even the two Barty Crouches (or Barty Crouch Jr and his mum) so I suppose there's more than one answer. I'm glad you liked this poem ... I hope to see another review from you soon!
~Soraya~
For someone who 'missed the screaming', Argus Filch was in his element the day the Carrows set foot into Hogwarts. Who knew that his kindred spirit had been walking the halls of the school for years already?
And it wasn't even Mrs Norris.
Hello! Nicely written, of course; I love all your stories! :D But wow, this is really something else! Why have you written it such that Filch and Pince don't recognise the line between discipline and torture, and actually relish the latter? Perhaps there is some back-story somewhere? *eager look*
Author's Response:
Well, there's not much in the way of backstory, but it's simple enough to see why they are the way they are. First off, you saw that Filch was ecstatic when Umbridge's disciplinary measures became violent. In his eyes, he is finally getting some form of retribution for years of misbehavior by the students. And Pince... I took liberties there. She's one of those borderline sociopaths who feel like their needs and problems in their own personal universe are more important than other people. And witnessing torture was a new experience for her, so it still retained the newness and thrill, which only someone with the proper predisposition could feel. That's all, really. I don't know if I have it in my to write something like this again. Too shippy for my taste, lol.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Jess
Wow, what a brilliantly chilling piece! Psychosis, now who'd have thought that! Seriously, reading it left me gaping at my screen in utter shock. In a good way, of course! :D Seven books worth of twists and turns and we find out that it's all merely a figment of Harry's imagination?! Ohh, I'm barely coherent now. Poor Harry, though. I certainly can imagine the neglect that he had had to put up with in his formative years pushing him off the edge and in need of an alternate state of mind.
Author's Response: I actually wanted to put in sort of a memory sequence where we see far worse mental stress on Harry ,from the Dursleys, than that depicted in the books. But I thought I should just stick to having this as a story for this particular vision of Harry inside a mental hospital. Thanks for reading and reviewing this and I'm happy you liked it ^_^
Hello! I'd just like to say that reading your brilliant pieces has been a right pleasure! You're definitely one hell of a story-teller! :D Love your sensitivity and how delicately you deal with these Muggles. Balancing your own reality with that of the one you love is never easy. Just one question, though! It seems that Terry Boot is Muggle-born in this story. But if he were, it would not have been possible for him to at Hogwarts during the war, unless he lied about his blood status or something!
Author's Response: Thank you for venturing into my little corner of the Potterdom and for liking my stories so much! Yes, I suppose you could say that each of these is a love story. ~ JKR's notes say that Terry was a Muggle-born. Lavender is also apparently a Muggle-born, so I suppose some of the students did indeed fool their way back into Hogwarts in 1997. Lavender probably exploited her very common surname: there must have been some pure-blooded Browns who were willing to pretend she was their granddaughter. I think Terry would have had the initiative to do some research and find out which pure-blooded witches had disposed of an illegitimate child back in 1980 so that he could claim he had only been adopted by Muggles. Since Terry wouldn't tell a direct lie, I can see him making a very complicated speech explaining how he had been born into perdition and rejection but had been adopted into sonship... and the Death Eaters wouldn’t be the kind of people who would realise he was just stating his theology. Lisa Turpin managed to prove a connection with Thorfinn Rowle, but I think the Snatchers caught Kevin Entwhistle and Sophie Roper. Justin Finch-Fletchley would have been able to fly his private helicopter out of Britain before the situation became too serious, but I like to think he flew it back a few times to rescue some of his friends. I must write that story one day! ~ Best wishes, GhV