Hey! I'm Annalise. I haven't been writing for long but I hope to get better. I only have one story up so far, but soon that number will grow. I am working on many stories, but which ones will actually be finished, I am not entirely sure... haha.
I hope you like Returning and Silent Thanks it would be wonderful if you left a review..
~ Annalise x :)
Really lovely chapter! I quite like James and Lily's characterization as it is a bit different to those I am used to. I will review every chapter as I finish it! I can't wait to read the rest! :)
~ Annalise x :)
This chapter was very short, so other than I loved it, I don't have anything to say. :( I did love it though. :)
~ Annalise x :)
Again, such a lovely chapter! And I love the final words, mischief managed!
~ Annalis x :)
*sigh* I wish the chapters were longer! :D K
am really liking your story! But it would be amazing if the chapters were longer :)
~ Annalise x :)
Wow. This is definitely my favourite chapter so far. It was very good! Just a note though; don't make remus the 'always knows what's right and how to handle everything' guy too much. I've made the same mistake myself before. Evn though remus is very smart and likes books it doesn't exactly mean he knows everything and every way to help relationships. I don't think how you portrayed him in this chapter was in any way bad, but I would just be a little careful of it. :)
Nevertheless I loved the chapter!
~ Annalis x :)
I really love the tension in this chapter and how you show just how unperfect relationships can be, whilst not making it totally gloomy and adding a bit of romance too! And a cliffhanger?!?!? :D
(sorry for my scarse reviews, I really do love your story!)
~ Annalise x :)
It seems as though each chapter keeps gettingbetter and better! :)
~ Annalise x :)
:D I loved it, as usual! It seems it is permanently like that now! Hehe.
~ Annalise x :)
Wow, this chapter was terribly sad. I feel so sorry for sarah, which basically means your doing an amazing job and you are definitely improving! I always say that if the author can make their readers feel any emotion towards their character, be it love, sympathy, hate etc. They are doing a good job with their characters, givng them life,/ Your chapters have become much longer, as well to top it off! So well done!
~ Annalise x :)
P.S. I wouldn't worry too much about the swearing, though it was good to warn those who would mind. :) I think it was perfectly in character so it's fine. :)
Well, you have done it, oh amazing one! You have officially made Annalise cry. :D and now I am incredibly sad that I have to wait for the next chapter. *sigh* I am quite impatient :p
I wish you luck on your new chapters, and hope profusely that they come soon :D thank you for writing this story; I have greatly enjoyed it and I absolutely can't wait to ear the rest! :)
~ Annalise x :)
Wow, this chapter was terribly sad. I feel so sorry for sarah, which basically means your doing an amazing job and you are definitely improving! I always say that if the author can make their readers feel any emotion towards their character, be it love, sympathy, hate etc. They are doing a good job with their characters, givng them life,/ Your chapters have become much longer, as well to top it off! So well done!
~ Annalise x :)
P.S. I wouldn't worry too much about the swearing, though it was good to warn those who would mind. :) I think it was perfectly in character so it's fine. :)
Wow. Honestly, that was very amazing. It was so incredibly heart-warming, while heart-wrenching all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!
~ Annalise x :)
Wow. Honestly, that was very amazing. It was so incredibly heart-warming, while heart-wrenching all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!
~ Annalise x :)
WOW. This story is amazing. It is so filled with heart and compassion and love and emotion. It is really amazing how you could express how much love they felt for each other without making it corny, over or underdone. I am really speechless. This is my favourite fic. When you ship Harry/Ginny, you really feel happy that they can live their lives together. Everyone has problems in a relationship but the way this story is written makes it so that it doesn't seem unlikely. There were a few mistakes but one could hardly take that into account when reading this fic. Both Harry and Ginny were in character throughout the whole story, which is something that is hard to accomplish. Well, to finish this awfully long review, this story is filled with captivating emotion and love that will engross any reader that loves both HP and Harry/Ginny.
PLEASE READ!
~ Annalise x :)
*totally in awe at the amazingness of this fic.
It is a very thoughtful and heartfelt one shot. I never really get tired of reading these same sort of stories again and again. Good job.
5 stars xx
I absolutely love your story! I've been staying up until almost 1:00 in the morning every night to listen to the chapters but I still haven't finished it yet since I only started listening 2 days ago. You are a wonderful writer and I thankyou for doing such a wonderful job!
This is a wonderful story with an amazingly creative plot and storyline. I just listened to it as an audio fiction and had to read the rest. I also registered for the site just so I could tell you how much I loved it! Amazing job! You have great author ability and potential. I will be reading more of your stories soon to see if they are as good as this one which I think may be likely. Thankyou for writing the story as it was very enjoyable and left me simply needing to read the rest. Very discriptive writing. You must have needed to research a lot to check and if you didn't, you must be a true Harry potter fan as I am!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so so glad you liked it enough to register and leave a review :) I did do quite a bit of research, of the books and of law in the real world. I haven't written anything else like this fic, really, as I prefer emotionally-driven stories rather than ones with strong plot-lines, but hopefully you enjoy my others too! I actually didn't know they'd made an audiofic of my story until this review, so thank you very much! I really appreciate it. - Cassie
This is a very simple and beautiful poem. I like the effect of the lack of grammar. This makes me feel like the poem is very unofficial and unplanned, the way Severus would have written it - even if it was not intended that way. I also find the way it has been written - almost messy and defying the commonalities of poems - to be almost enchanting, and a great testament to Severus and the way he was feeling.
However as much as I enjoy this format in the poem, and believe that it was done with the character's personality in mind, it is a touch difficult to read. This could be taken as both good and bad critique, I suppose, as it shows how much you have thought about the characterisation within the poem. But I also feel that it could have been done better so that it flowed slightly, while still encompassing Severus' character.
I really enjoyed this poem. Well done!
Incredibly lovely story, Cassie. You have never let me down to this day with your incredibly amazing writing capabilities! :)
~ Annalise x :)
Very lovely fic, Rachel :) You are an amazing writer!
~ Annalise x :)
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you, Annalise! :D