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A Child's Gift by WinkeeJR

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Draco wanted to get away. He needed to get away from all the things that reminded him everyday of the mistakes he had made and the one he had lost. He found the perfect spot too, a small town in Wyoming, USA, a place called Nowhere. A perfect name as far as he was concerned. Magic, fate has a way of finding you no matter where you go though.
Reviewer: Slyffindorluvr Signed
Date: 11/10/09 Title: Chapter 19: The Heart Knows the Words Unspoken

Ok so I feel horrible for not reviewing until now, I can't possibly tell you what I think of this fic in one sitting. That's how much I love it. ;) I really love your original characters, mostly Abby and Aria, and also your takes on JKR's characters.
Now don't think I'm being rude because I do love this fic but this is just some fellow fic-writer critisism. Have you ever thought about getting your fic's edited and/or Beta'd? Because I have noticed a couple mistakes, mostly typos, spelling and grammar errors. And also name mixups like when you said 'he took Hermione and Aria's cloaks' you meant Hermione and Abby's. But that's okay because you make up for it with beautiful character personalities and a wonderful story plot!! :)
As for who this Spooky/Justice person is I have a guess though I'm sure I'm wrong. Is it Ron? I know you said he's dead but there is a part of me screaming that it would be logical if it were him. He could have been in love with Hermione and found out about her and Draco, then pretended to die and is now back as this Justice character. But I'm almost sure that I'm wrong. Also I'm a bit confused about the time periods about when they were together opposed to when Ron died so I don't know if it is around the right time for my theory to be correct.
Anyway I love this fic, when I started it I didn't think it was going to be great but I kept reading just to see, what really drew me in was Abby. I remember saying "OMG I know who this girl is! She's probably Hermione's daughter!" and my sister looked at me really weird for shreiking at my iPod screen where I've Bern reading this. LOL when I found out I was right about Abby I HAD to read more! Thnx for writing this! It's definetly one of the most intriuging fics I've ever read! :D



Reviewer: Slyffindorluvr Signed
Date: 11/17/09 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

This IS THE BEST fic I have ever read EVER!!! I soooooooo wasn't suspecting Lavender!!! I love all the kids! All of them! And just ...everything about this fic is WOW just WOW!!!



Torn Between Ice and Emeralds by CrystalM

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: COMPLETED -- A broken-hearted Ginny Weasley lets go of Harry Potter to let him fight the good fight and starts her sixth year at Hogwarts. Draco Malfoy follows Snape back to Death Eater headquarters after Dumbledore's death to even more danger than he had just left, realising too late that he has made his greatest mistake yet. Is anyone likely to forgive him? Finding himself a refugee within the walls he had conspired against, he witnesses a scene that alters his perception of a concept he had previously found to be a waste of time: Love. This change allows him to grow away from the model Death Eater his father had been sculpting him into in an effort to find out what he really believes in with the help of his new friendship found in the youngest Weasley. Meanwhile, Ginny struggles with her harboured feelings for the man destined to save the Wizarding world, unknowingly losing her affections with every passing day to his childhood enemy.

Compliant with HBP and below.

25,000 reads!!! ::claps for readers:: Please, please leave me a review!!
Reviewer: Slyffindorluvr Signed
Date: 11/06/09 Title: Chapter 20: A New Start

All I can say is... Wow! Wow wow WOW! This was your first fic!?! That was AMAZING! One of.. No, THE BEST fics I've ever read EVER! I absolutely love Draco/Ginny and I love what you've done to them! I love your inside look of their individual personalities and of Harry's, Voldemort's, McGonogall's and Snape's. I really love the chapter about Snape and how Harry lives. I love the whole, "I love you but I love him more" thing, it's very sexy and romantic. I could sit here and type all day about how much I loved this fic so I'm gunna stop now, but WOW! Never stop writing that was AMAZING! :D :D :D



Seen In a Different Light by TCole

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione and Ron are having relationship trouble. The two of them take a trip to Diagon Alley in order to see Harry, but this leads to Hermione getting frustrated with the two, and so she goes to the bookstore.

What happens before she enters the store will shock not only her, but everyone she holds close to her heart. One drink in the Leaky Cauldron will end up changing her life forever, but . . . is it for the better or the worse?

This story is dedicated to Sammy because I love her to death, and I know she loves Dramiones. She has been the one that I have bounced ideas off of throughout writing this entire story, and without her, I probably wouldn't have ever finished it! *hugs* I love you Sammy!
Reviewer: Slyffindorluvr Signed
Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 6: The First Meeting

I really liked that story. I'm a huge Draco/ Hermione fan. That was a really sweet take on the pair.



On Any Day by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Ron . . . it was never Harry. It was always you. It was ever only you. Just you."

It's been two months since Ron and Hermione shared their first kiss. Now they're facing another first: their first date. *one-shot*
Reviewer: Slyffindorluvr Signed
Date: 11/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww that was sooo sweet.
LOL I love the "let's go skinny dipping!" then "If you ... want to.."
"I want to!"
Lmao!!!
They are so cute together =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :) Thanks for the review.



Details by afterglow745

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
James Potter fails to notice the details about a certain red-haired Gryffindor, but Remus takes note.


Remus/Lily.

Reviewer: Slyffindorluvr Signed
Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: --- --- --- ---

AAAWWWWW!!!!! That was so beautiful!! I love your take on Remus' personality! There is really very little anyone really knows about what he was like in his school days and Lily is just as hard to create a personality for just based on what we know from the books but that was amazing! Keep writing!