Great story. I'm submitting if to the Quick Quills contest!
Great story. I'm submitting it to the Quick Quills contest.
Wow, this is very strong work. It's very deep and emotionally powerful. It really touches me. You excellently captured the essences of the character. Congratulations on your first 3 chapters, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: once again, thank you for the praise. im just happy to be here, writing about what i love to write about. (hp of course.) im glad that it touched you, though. in terms of the characters, i just wrote them how i think they should be, (entirely grounded in canon of course.) but ill be sure to send out some more chapters as soon as i find the time to do that. :)
I think this is well written so far. Hermione and Ron's character are accurate and easy to believe. I eagerly await your next chapter!