HIIII!!!!
My Name - Sophie
My age - 13
My birthday - 26th September 1992
Looks - long brown hair (now with blonde streaks!!), blue-green eyes
Fav books - Soooooo many!! Love soooo many lol some Im addicted to atm would be the secret diary series :P:P Romance AND mystery AND drama!! plus theyre teenagers!! yay!!
I am totally in lust with - Ooooh wouldn't you all like to know :P:P
Fav colour - purple
I Live - Australia
Fav HP Book - Half Blood Prince
Least Favorite HP Book- Order of the Pheonix... admit it, we were all thinking it...It sucked to the bone. Like Harry needed to take a chill pill, Ron didnt do anything to deserve the Head Boy badge, and he shouldn't have started playing Quidditch if he had stage fright... Cho and Harry win the worst couple of the year award, I mean could they have BEEN any frostier with each other? Luna scared me... Sirius died weirdly.
Favourite FF Ships -
Lily and James (but only when the info is right, I am not very tolerant of stories that include Voldemort hunting them down because of the profecy when they are only 17)
James Potter is my absolute favourite character, and I refuse to hear anything bad about him. So there, Snape.
I luv harry potter, thats all there is 2 it!! Please Read my first fan fic; Forever Yours, about Lily and James!! Also, when you get bored with that ( by the way.... PLEASE DONT!!!) I strongly advse youto look in my favourite stories section,and read A Very Harry Christmas : One of my All time favourite stories!!
By the way, MY STORY IS OPEN TO PUBLIC!!!!
I've never felt happier!!!
that was a pretty good story, there were a few mistakes that I picked up though. (please dont hate me for pointing these out!)
number 1 waaay back in the beginning, wen james and Lily were going through the whole switcharoo thing, In one charms lesson, Professor Flitwick's name changes to professor Salsa out of nowhere.
Number two- Sirius explained how after James had been missing for a week, everyone decided to alert Profesor Dumbledore. Okay, with that, if you were in the middle of a dark and scary forest, and the most powerful and dangerous wizard of all time with a rep for killing people showed up and kidnapped your bbf, would you wait a week before finally telling one of the teachers that he'd gone missing?
Number three- You said that he was found in the chamber of secrets, but in harry potter and the chamber of secrets, it was said that dumbledore had had the school searched many times and was sure that no such place existed!
Now, please don't get me wrong, I loved the story, adn your writing style, and i especially loved the first section, I just thought I'd let you know about the mistakes.
keep writing!
~Sophie~
Author's Response: thanks, yeah i noticed i did the salsa thing too lol
Follow the two through each year at Hogwarts as hearts are wrenched, twisted, and finally touched as the two struggle to find the love they were destined for…
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This is a really good story, straight on my favourites list!! The writings really good, you could give several good writers a run for their money!! The most original Lily/James story I've read yet, though I dont know exactly why...it just is!! One hint though, see if you can put more spaces in the paragraphs, coz it hurts alot of people's eyes reading chunks of writing on the computer!! 10/10
Yo, anyone there?? considering there is only one chapter left...I think we would consider it...If only if you would....not to push or anything... UPDATE SOMETIME IN THE NEXT CENTURY? Thankyou for your time :D
*sobs*FINALLY! You updated, I read the last chapter simply mothes ago omg im soo glad you did that was the best chapter out of all of them, i am feeling so emotional...of course, that my be because its ten to two in the morning, but who cares? lol omg i loved it sooo much it was so cute and sad (coz they like die in a few years :S) and I just loved it loved it loved it i would say update but well for obvious reasons im not going to. I saw NEW STORY!! lol :)
omg wrong story i am too tired ignore all of that sorry
Author's Response: no problem!
wow, really really really really good. I luv this story!! :)
I think that was a fantastic story, It was absolutely great, it made me cry...but i you dont have to worry about that siriusgirlthru_n_thru (or something like that) Because i think she was just kidding. She didnt want to hurt yor feelings. It really was a great story!!
This is a really interesting and coolstory, I think that it deserves to be updated! If you are having trouble etting it accepted, than maybe you would like to send the second chapter to me to check it over for spelling mistakes and such; I'd be more than willing to do so, i'm alsways checking over my classmates work. if you want to, then just email me the chapter. if not, good luck! i really hope to see an update soon! 10/10
Author's Response: Why thank you for your praise!!! I love people who are so encouraging!!!
This is a really interesting and coolstory, I think that it deserves to be updated! If you are having trouble etting it accepted, than maybe you would like to send the second chapter to me to check it over for spelling mistakes and such; I'd be more than willing to do so, i'm alsways checking over my classmates work. if you want to, then just email me the chapter. if not, good luck! i really hope to see an update soon! 10/10
Author's Response: Another double review? I like those things... no reason why. I'm a little insane...
Oh cute as this story is sooo cute and cool! definitely dont leave it as a oneshot, I think you could really build on this, you could explain how Lily and Stacey becoe friends again, even better, you could turn that into a prologue and continue with next chapter being chapter 1 and starting before Lily and her friend got into a fight, do you know what i mean? definitely a ten!! :)
Cool cool cool, really good chapter, the first story on my favs list in quite a while! keep up the good work! Still, I don't like Audrey, call me predudiced, but I don't. :) Don't mind me, I am weird like that! update soon!
Author's Response: Hey! Heheh, no worries about not liking Audrey, she's one of those characters that I thought would create some mixed reviews. Thanks for reviewing, adn I'll be sure to update very soon! =)
I think this is a very good and promising story at the moment, so far I can see just one thing wrong with it...In the latest chapter, they come out of the tree and criso hair fills their nostrils...Am i right in thinking that was supposed to be air? Anyway, great story!!
Author's Response: XD OMG! "crisp hair" LOL! *Clutching sides laughing* Thanks for your great review! Yes, it was supposed to be "crisp air" not hair. Your comment has just literally made my day. I have fixed it. Thanks for catching that and I'll be sure to update sometime soon!
*crisp*
Author's Response: HAHAHA! *Still can't stop laughing* Thanks again!
Wow, excellent chapter!! Sirius was a little bit cranky..I think someone needs a nap! lol, anyway, great chapter, very unexpected, I'm still against the whole James and Audrey thing, but that's just me... lol! Keep updating!!
Author's Response: Sirius WAS cranky, hehehe. Thanks for reviewing! It's really appreciated!
This is a wicked story. i feel a little wierd about the thought of James liking Audrey, but I may just be prejudiced about the age difference, from watching me bestie going pout with 16 year olds at 12....anyway, brill story! 10/10
Author's Response: Heheh, I'm glad you liked my story! Audrey and James are only two years apart. She is in fourth year (14) and he is in sixth year (16), so I hope it's not too much of a gap, lol! I'll be sure to update soon! Thanks for the review!
For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
hi well yer I'm getting restless I haven't had a review in two days lol I'm spoiled review-wise I think lol anywhoo um this will give me something to respond to luv me
Author's Response: HI ME!!! good to hear from ya!!! Luv ya lots *~*me*~*
Ok, I'd just like to quickly apologise, I have absolutely no idea why the last one posted three times!!!
Ok, I'd just like to quickly apologise, I have absolutely no idea why the last one posted three times!!!
Yay, I'm the first one to review!! This is an excellent story, I like how you really make your characters seem human, and I think that I am going to like the character Roslyn! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much! It's my first story and i was so worried no one would read it! :) You've made my day!
Yay, I'm the first one to review!! This is an excellent story, I like how you really make your characters seem human, and I think that I am going to like the character Roslyn! Update soon!!