HIIII!!!!
My Name - Sophie
My age - 13
My birthday - 26th September 1992
Looks - long brown hair (now with blonde streaks!!), blue-green eyes
Fav books - Soooooo many!! Love soooo many lol some Im addicted to atm would be the secret diary series :P:P Romance AND mystery AND drama!! plus theyre teenagers!! yay!!
I am totally in lust with - Ooooh wouldn't you all like to know :P:P
Fav colour - purple
I Live - Australia
Fav HP Book - Half Blood Prince
Least Favorite HP Book- Order of the Pheonix... admit it, we were all thinking it...It sucked to the bone. Like Harry needed to take a chill pill, Ron didnt do anything to deserve the Head Boy badge, and he shouldn't have started playing Quidditch if he had stage fright... Cho and Harry win the worst couple of the year award, I mean could they have BEEN any frostier with each other? Luna scared me... Sirius died weirdly.
Favourite FF Ships -
Lily and James (but only when the info is right, I am not very tolerant of stories that include Voldemort hunting them down because of the profecy when they are only 17)
James Potter is my absolute favourite character, and I refuse to hear anything bad about him. So there, Snape.
I luv harry potter, thats all there is 2 it!! Please Read my first fan fic; Forever Yours, about Lily and James!! Also, when you get bored with that ( by the way.... PLEASE DONT!!!) I strongly advse youto look in my favourite stories section,and read A Very Harry Christmas : One of my All time favourite stories!!
By the way, MY STORY IS OPEN TO PUBLIC!!!!
I've never felt happier!!!
Yay, I'm the first one to review!! This is an excellent story, I like how you really make your characters seem human, and I think that I am going to like the character Roslyn! Update soon!!
Yes, I am kind, and do try to see the beauty in everyone, but I am a little wrapped up in myself. I have too many thoughts.
WARNINGS: Angsty, upsetting, some mild language and fighting later on. Not an average teen James/Lily fic.
This is a really good story, and for me, that is starting to be saying something. Lately, I have been getting either disgusted or bored with most of the Lily/James stories that are coming out, but this one definitely has the makings of a truly good story. I'm interested in Sirius hating lily, I don't think that I've seen that happen before. Keep up the good work, and good luck!
~Sophie~
Author's Response: wow, that is a really nice complement! I'll keep updating, but after the 5th chapter updating might be a bit slower because I havn't written past there. Thanks for the review, please keep reading!
Hi, you reviewed my story, so I shall review yours. It's really good, I really like it! Update soon!
Author's Response: cool, thanks! havn't gotten many reviews lately... ANY, actually! (cuz I havn't updated my story, it got moved to one of the later pages.... lol. I was working on my new one shot, A thoroughfare of woe. It's harry/ginny and hermione/ron/last battle. under dark/angsty fics. can't wait till it gets admitted. i'm so proud of it, i hope it's not rejected!!!!!! anyway, thanks for your review!!!!!!!! i should update within the week (thanksgiving)!!!!
This is a really god story, I like the plot so far, The only thing is, just so that I know, did JK Rowling actually say that Lily was short, because it seems that in every story I read she is....Good story, update!!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing! I think she may have said that at some time or another, but it's just how I see her- small with a huge personality.
May I just say that I really like this story, It is showing great promise, and without sounding too rude may I ask WHO THE HELL IS MARLENE MCKINNON?! I just neeed to know what harry potter book she is mentioned in, because I haven't noticed her being mentioned once, yet this is the 50th or so Lily/James story that includes her!!! Anyway, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And Marlene McKinnon was never a huge role in the HP books, but she was mentioned in OotP when Moody was showing Harry the old Order picture. So she was definately alive when James and Lily were, and I just made her and Lily friends! Hoped that helped. Thanks again!
May I just say that I really like this story, It is showing great promise, and without sounding too rude may I ask WHO THE HELL IS MARLENE MCKINNON?! I just neeed to know what harry potter book she is mentioned in, because I haven't noticed her being mentioned once, yet this is the 50th or so Lily/James story that includes her!!! Anyway, update soon!
This is a really good story, you obviously have a talent for writing!! ~ten~
Author's Response: thank u so much! Im glad you like it!
Messrs. Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs -- These names are known by every person in Hogwarts. These names, and an envelope with a scarlet wax seal bearing the letters: MWPP.
The teachers dread it, the students revel in it...but who are these 'Marauders,' as they are called? That's just it. Nobody knows. Most every prank Hogwarts sees is at the hands of these mysterious Marauders, and the perpetrators always walk free. They could never be caught. You can’t catch phantoms.
Lily Evans is just as curious as the next student as to who these Marauders are, but her curiosity is transformed into a hungry need, when she receives a letter herself from a certain Mr. Prongs.
[This story is slightly AU, but more on that in the author's note at the end.]
You are soo bloody EVIL!! How can you leeeaaaavvveee it like that???? Is the next chapter the last one? I hope not, please update ASAP!!!
You are soo bloody EVIL!! How can you leeeaaaavvveee it like that???? Is the next chapter the last one? I hope not, please update ASAP!!!
OMG, this is a fantastic story, and I don't really care if it doesn't follow the plot of the original information we got from the Harry Potters, it's still very good. I think Dear Lily is a better name, The other name is a bit long, and Dear Lily is much more catchy!!! So totally a ~ten~
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I think I am sticking with Dear Lily. :)
wow, I love stories with drama, and yours is perfect!!! I also like stories that make Lily look like shes not just a weak, helpless little brat who hates James for no reason. You really hit the nail on the head!! Excellebt work, 10/10
Author's Response: wow...*swells with pride* thanks!!!
Cool just one problem...James was not a seeker as it said in the movies; He was a chaser. :)
Author's Response: Where did I put Chaser?! It was picked up when it got betad...hmm I'll go change it now!
Author's Response: Aha! That was very clever of you - it was in chapter three that it got picked up not in chapter two! Thnak you for that - it has been changed :)
Wow, what a fantastic prologi\ue, I don't think that you could possibly have done it better, It's a little short, but I suppose that's what prologues are supposed to be like!! Update soon, I really want to read more!!
Author's Response: thanks!!! <3 yeah i know it's short. sorry lol i'm posting right now.
thanks again!
Hi!! This is definitely different, and it's nice to sometimes find some new stuff on this site!! :) oh goody, free ideas time. oohh ohh how 'bout- oh, no wait, that's for my story. you could always- oh no, wait, i'm using that one as well. hmmm.... anything dramatic, dangerous, dark and dreary is cool with me!! I love life or death situations, especialoly ones that have little or nothing to do with Voldemort, as they are, in my opinion, the ones that take up the most thought. Most Voldemort chappies are too similar; like he attacks them, one defends the other, they escape tada the end. wow, how original ya know? lol, anyway, so yeah, think outside the lines, and i will love it!! :) ~*~ Sophie~*~
Author's Response: Hmm... I'll try to come up with something that has originality... I don't think Voldemort action scenes are hard to write, you just have to make it... how do I put this... so that the reader is on the edge of their seats, palms sweating with anxiety to know what will happen next. I actually have a nice Voldemort scene that I wrote just for the heck of it a while back, and I think I'll use that... Anyway, thanks for the review! ;)
Wow oh my god this story is fantastic!!! I am not sure I entirely get what Is with that thing grabbing onto james but that's ione of the things I like about it!!! This is so good, straight onto my favs list!!! Update soon, how could you leave it like that???
Author's Response: Thank you for the review Harry Potter Star! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh! And you'll find out soon about that underwater thing in the next chapter. ^.^
hello? is everyone asleep here? This should be getting a lot more reviews than it is! come on people, wake up! lol
Great chapter, fantastic, only a single problem, and you may not even bother changing this : Madame Pomfrey was at Hogwarts in the days of the Marauders, because Remus mentions in one of the books, Im almost positive it's the third, that Madame Pomfrey escorted him to the Whomping Willow every full moon. It's not a big thing, I just thought I would let you know! :) Congrats on a great chapter, update soon! :)
Author's Response: Madame Pomprey! Duh, why didn't I know that? LOL, for some reason I thought her name was "Madame Fay". Oops...
It's okay, I think you're right about Madame Pomfrey being with the Marauders in their years at Hogwarts. It's okay, it's tinsy, so I don't think I'll change it.
Thanks though for telling me! And I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter^^
I have to say it again! great chapter!! Great story, great everything!! I love drama aqnd death as long as noone dies!! make sense? Update soon, or at least reply soon!!
~*~Sophie~*~
Author's Response: LOL!!! Thanks again! Semester Exams are coming up, so I'll try to work on the third chapter when I get the chance.
great story! a few small cliches, but nothing to drastic! pdate soon! Ps, 4 appelsauce, it's in that song "Mr Brightside" by the killers. I too saw the title and felt total deja vu, so i went onto google to find out. you know the song... jealousy, turning Saints into the sea, Swimming through sick lullabies
Choking on your alibis, lalalalala etc :)
Author's Response: im sorry about the cliches!!! they seemed to just appear since i wanted the good girl, bad boy as well as the mel remus thing, but theres a reason for that!! its just not immediately expressed...