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07/17/05

Reviews by Ravensgryff

Mission Accomplished by GwendolynJames

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Fred and George decide to help ickle Ronniekins get a girl, much chaos and hilarity ensues.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: Mission Accomplished

Very funny! I laughed out loud!

Defining a Hero by Deia

Rated: •
Summary: Ron overhears a conversation and Hermione helps him deal with it.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Defining a Hero

Loved it! I actually got a bit misty when she said she was proud of him. You captured them very nicely.

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Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/04/05 Title: None

Just read the entire story and Wow! Just perfect - the characterizations, the pacing of the story, the romance, the humor, everything. Just wonderful!

Foundation by Deia

Rated: •
Summary: What is Ron and Hermione's friendship all about?

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Foundation

Bravo!! Well done!!

In Each Other by fiskehandler

Rated: •
Summary: A body-swap between Ron and Hermione might bring them closer together, than they think. A humorous story for all of you who like movies such as Freaky Friday and Vice Versa.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 4: Freya Altera

Very cute! I quite enjoyed reading this. Sweet.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 4: Freya Altera

Very cute! I quite enjoyed reading this. Sweet.

The Beginning of Forever by Ronsbiggestfan09

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This takes place in the trio's fouth year during and after the Yule Ball. Harry is taking Hermione, but wants to be with someone else. Hermione and Ron both have secret feelings for each other that are about to be uncovered.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 3: Valentines Day

I really liked this. It was very sweet and to the point. I liked the fact that when they first got together they just admitted to liking each other - that felt more true to their characters. Not overdone at all. Great job.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 3: Valentines Day

The Mystery Letter by the_bartender713

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry receives a mysterious letter from ‘a friend’ confessing their kept secret feelings for him. Harry thinks he knows who sent the letter, but complications arise when he returns to Grimmauld place, the summer after 5th year. Will Harry finally get the woman of his dreams? Only if he is quick enough to figure out who she really is!

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 07/31/05 Title: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Great job! I really enjoyed it & will begin on the sequel :)

Author's Response: I\'ll see you there!

Aetas nam mutatio by H Cooper

Rated: •
Summary: Bearing in mind the events of book 6, this story now no longer fits into the overall plot of Harry Potter. However, I shall continue to write it regardless, keeping it as a separate story. Therefore, please remember that it will not be influenced by book 6. It's the beginning of Harry, Ron and Hermione's seventh year at Hogwarts and change is in the air. Unfortunately, Ron seems to be the only one who doesn't sense it.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/05/05 Title: Chapter 13: A lot can happen in a day

I've just read this through for the second time & I love the story. Please add some more soon!!

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/05/05 Title: Chapter 13: A lot can happen in a day

I've just read this through for the second time & I love the story. Please add some more soon!!

Ginny's Love by The Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After Sirius' death Harry is in his own private world of misery, but with Ginny's love and a plan to bring together his best friends, he is brought back to reality with much more than he expected...

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

Read the entire story and really loved it. I'm all misty eyed!!

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Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: None

This is an interesting and intriguing start to your story. I particulary liked your vivid descriptions. You set the atmosphere of the seedy Knockturn Alley bar very well. I'm very curious about this dancer sho is so serpentine and has eyes like molten gold - lovely image. I noticed a couple of places where you forgot to add periods: where Snape is wondering if Voldemort still believed in him and also where the dancer is pulling Snape to safety. In addition I think that in keeping with the canon treatment of casting spells, you may want to italicize "Frendo Laesio." I was initially concerned about how you were going to keep Snape in character in this environment, but I think you accomplished it rather well. He was not overly interested in the happenings around him, but you still gave him a bit of humanity by allowing him a moment of pleasure when she kissed him. Well done.

Phases of the Moon by BlackClaude

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In Remus Lupin's fifth year at Hogwarts, his devoted friends finally master the complex Animagus spell, beginning the adventures they will remember for the rest of their lives. But Remus must also face prejudice in the rising war, a test of loyalty versus love, and the danger of his dark secret being revealed.

Pet Peeve Disclaimer: Peter is not worthless, Lily does not have three friends who fall for the Marauders, and no one calls Remus "Remy."

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: A Cry in the Dark

So I've read 2 chapters now and I'm very impressed with your prtrayal of the Marauders. I'm not typically a fan of Marauder fics, but you've managed to give each of them, including Peter, lovely nuances and dimensions. I'm very intrigued and feel a great deal of empathy for your Remus, so I shall herd my kids to bed so I can continue reading.

One brief thing to think about. When Peter and Sirius are playing chess, Peter would have likely informed Sirius that his king was in check and I could be wrong, but I don't think that there can be another move if the king is in check. He would have had to get the king out of jeopardy. I'm just being anal - please feel free to completely ignore me, especially since I'm no master chess player.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing; I\'m glad you enjoyed it! As for the chess game, you\'re totally right. You can\'t move your king into check.... crap. Hmmm, can I just say that Wizard\'s Chess has different rules? :) Nah, I\'ll go back and fix that. Thanks for pointing that out!

Icy Blue Eyes by Kate Mari

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's done! Thank you everyone who has helped. Keep reading and writing! Ron and Hermione are starting their sixth year, but something just doesn't seem right between them. Sure, they are still fighting like mad and some accidents happen between the two that may trigger something in their brain about each other, but....well....I don't want to give away the story! Read and Review please!

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 3: Comforting Butterbeer

I'm really into the story! I'm a little unclear as to time frames, though. In ch.2 you indicate that everyone is going to Hogsmeade so I'm thinking it's a weekend. But then Hermione runs from Ron saying they're late for class. Is that just her flustered response? Then in this chapter Ginny & Hermione are in Hogsmeade (is it the same day?) but in class soon after. I'm just a bit confused as to how much time is passing, etc. Otherwise, I love it! Keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for your response! As for the 'unclear time frames', you pretty much hit them on the ball. Hermione is just flustered (although, she's usually not), and when Ginny and Hermione are in Hogsmeade it is the same day. Classes start later. I'll try and help you stay a little more aware of the time from now on. The next chapter is in queue! -Kate Mari

The Caves of Concealment by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: While Ginny tries to get Harry to notice her and Hermione tries to get Ron to admit he's noticed her, Ginny and Hermione come across a very special place at Hogwarts. Not just anyone can get into the Caves of Concealment, for within lie some of the most powerful items in the wizarding world. Can Ginny and Hermione discover the secrets of the caves while at the same time getting their favorite guys to notice them? Well, the final chapter is up! I hope you all enjoy it!!!! Please remember to read and review and tell me what you think :) The sequel to this story is called Harry Potter and The Year of the Dragon.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 07/28/05 Title: Chapter 2: The Secret Artist

I'm 2 chapters in and quite enjoying this piece. I think some of the dialog has me thrown off a bit, but overall a great read. I love the sketchbook and especially the inscription in it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the sketchbook, sorry if some of the dialogue threw you off. This was the very first chapters of my very first fanfic, and I believe my writing has improved.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 15: While You Were Sleeping

Wonderfully woven tale! I loved it!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had fun weaving it!

Harry Potter & the Year of the Dragon by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: They say that true love conquers all. Harry and Ginny, and Ron and Hermione will be able to put this to the test during the new term to come. With a deranged killer on the loose, new friends, a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, and Voldemort planning his final attack, it will be a year of trials and tribulations. And what exactly is the Year of the Dragon? You'll just have to read to find out!

CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/04/05 Title: Chapter 8: Morgan's Tale

Awesome! So glad you updated. Love the Draco/Luna line. Also, the underlying theme of the mean kids turning over new leaves is a nice touch. Is there also a bit of foreshadowing going on there? Go on - you can tell me ;-) Great addition!

Author's Response: Yes I did! And yes, there is a bit of foreshadowing going on :)

Reviewer: Ravensgryff Signed
Date: 08/02/05 Title: Chapter 7: Lurking in the Forest

So well done!! I really love the direction you're taking Draco in this story (I just read all 7 chapters together & this pertains to the entire thing). I don't think you're going too far out of character with him, just exploring different aspects of him. Especially if you consider how he's evolved in HBP, I think it works beautifully. I can't wait to read the rest! You've won a new fan!

Author's Response: YAY! A new fan! I'm SO pleased you like my Draco!

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