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Temporary by Queen of Serpents

Rated: Professors •
Summary:

Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.

RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.



~COMPLETED STORY~

I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!




Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 10/24/10 Title: Chapter 30: Permanent

Wow.....*repeatedly bangs head on wall in jealousy*
Love your style!



Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents

Rated: Professors •
Summary:
Hermione gets a visitor at night that delights in her pain. Before she used to dread the nights but lately... she has begun to look forward to meet her nocturnal vistor... and rapist?

Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.

Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.

~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 10/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Really nice intro!



Black Rose by Black Pearl

Rated: Professors •
Summary: He saw her letters and became jealous. Passion turned to obsession, then he did something horrible to her. But if she was his, would she stay for sunrise to pass over her face, just so he'd know it wasn't a dream? Rated 'R'.

The sequel, Black Rose: The Lost Chapters, is now up!
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 02/23/12 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Very nice twist of plot in the end. Very nice.



A Conversation Between Lovers by Canis Contentis

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Three days after the final battle, two lovers share news, laughs, feelings, and more. Rated R for some language and sexual situations.
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 12/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

It is pretty nice! I love the ending.



Trickster by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: After the disastrous events of the end of the Marauder's fifth year, a fuming Lily Evans decides that that arrogant James Potter and his friends need a taste of their own medicine. The straight-laced Prefect suddenly finds herself pranking her class's trickiest boys--and maybe even enjoying it. Coupled with a series of mysterious apology letters that Lily has begun receiving, it's bound to be an interesting year.

Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!

Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/05/10 Title: Chapter 8: Things Fall Apart

love your style

Author's Response: thanks! i have fun :)



Lavender, blue - A Gryffindor true by Equinox Chick

Rated: Professors • Past Featured Story
Summary: When Lavender Brown returns to Hogwarts for her seventh year, she knows things will be hard. Professor Dumbledore’s death has scared everybody, and with her Muggle-born mother in hiding, she makes a promise to her father to stay safe.

But to stay safe she must ignore her instincts and turn her back on her friends.

This is a Lavender Brown/Blaise Zabini story, but also concerns that last year at Hogwarts when the Trio were a'hunting Horcruxes.

Thank you to Laura (bookofsecrets) and Terri (mudbloodproud) for beta'ing the first chapter, Alyssa (Harry4lif) for the second and Emma (Amortentia x) for taking over the reins. And Natalie for the last chapter.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I doubt that surprises anyone.

This story won the 2010 QSQ for Best Chaptered Non-Canon Romance. Thank you to everyone who nominated, appreciated and judged.

ATTENTION: Because of prissy glitch on the archive, stories with a rating about 3rd-5th cannot be read. I have lowered the rating to enable access, but the content remains the same. This is a PROFESSORS rated fic. Read at your own discretion - the sexual situations warning is there for a reason.
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/10/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Between the Woods and the Frozen Lake

Love the way you structured this

Author's Response: Thank you. ~Carole~



A Popped Bubble by youngrowling

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After having suffered years of torment from working in one of the lowest possible positions in the Ministry of Magic, Hermione’s dreams were finally coming true. She had been assigned to train side-by-side with one of the leading heads in the Ministry. Nothing could have burst her bubble of happiness, well, at least until she discovered the name of her new “boss”.
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/08/10 Title: Chapter 8: Final Pop

I love this story.honestly.



What Would You Do? by ron lover

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary:

WINNER! in the 2010 QSQ for best Canon Romance story. Thank you so much!

I take a deep breath so my voice won’t shake.

“What would you do if we died tomorrow?”

He takes a step away from me, but still keeps me in his arms. “What?”

“What would you do if you knew that we died tomorrow?”

“What kind of question is that?”

“Don’t give me that, James. You know that we are going to die soon. There is no point in pretending that we aren’t.”

James and Lily have a conversation two days before Halloween.


Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: What Would You Do?

nice. thats all i have to say. nice

Author's Response: Thanks!



The Dance We Do by Equinox Chick

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Amelia Bones is a diligent student. Head Girl, with a handsome and well-connected boyfriend, she has her whole future mapped out for her.

She does not expect to fall in love quite so hard, and quite so fast with someone totally unsuitable.

I am Equinox Chick from Hufflepuff and this is my entry fot the February Love Challenge - category Forbidden Love - in the Great Hall on the MNFF beta boards.

I am indebted to Natalie (hestiajones) for beta'ing this fic and for all her support whilst I was writing it.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I doubt that surprises anyone.

The Dance We Do won the QSQ in 2010 for Best Same Sex Pairing. Thank you.


Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Dance We Do

Hmmm...interesting

Author's Response: Interesting?



Fred and George's Busy Day by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
WINNER of the BEST GENERAL story – Quicksilver Quills Awards 2010.
In the weeks and months after their eldest brother’s wedding Fred and George Weasley continued to run their business. Two decent honest and respectable businessmen, they had no involvement at all in any illicit conduct. They certainly didn’t get involved in any anti-Voldemort activities. Definitely not. No. Not them. Never. They wouldn’t. Honestly.
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: A Call to Arms

hmm...very interesting. it could be a bit more clear, but in general i think the plot is very well thought out.

Author's Response: Thanks, what bits could be more vclear? I was being a little cryptic on places, But i hope that things got clear later. -N-



Veils by Equinox Chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It is the night before Petunia Evans' wedding. As she stares at herself in the mirror, she is satisfied with her appearance. The dress is perfect, cleverly cut to give her curves, and she looks like a dream. Yes, the dress is perfection ... but what of the veil?

She has promised Vernon and his formidable mother that she will wear the Dursley veil. It is an antique. A family heirloom.

It is hideous.

What she needs is a miracle to rid her of the ugly thing ... or perhaps a touch of magic.

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the Weddings Challenge - prompt Big Weddings - in the Great Hall Challenge over at the MNFF beta boards.

Thank you to Samarie (Hopeful_Song) and Kara (Karaley Dargen) for beta'ing this.

Disclaimer: I'm not JK Rowling. I doubt anyone is surprised by that.

Holy Moroley and all things Padfoot! This won the QSQ for Best Marauder Era story. Thank you!
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Veils

nice, although i think petunia would be that soft to magic

Author's Response: Thank you



Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Veils

nice, although i think petunia wouldnt be that soft to magic

Author's Response: She was only soft at the end. And JKR did say she wanted to tell Harry she knew what a tough job he had ahead of her. There was some remorse there, certainly. Thanks for reading. ~Carole~



Waking by the opaleye

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary:

He cannot bring himself to think the name. There is a glimpse of red. A laugh. A fumbled apology. A friendship.

How a death may change a life or two.

Winner of Best Non-Canon Romance in the Quick Silver Quill Awards 2010


Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Waking.

Its really nice, but i think you should reveal the characters a little earlier as i did not know how to picture the story in my head. Other than that, it is a wonderful story

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I didn't want to name the two characters too early on for a reason. I wanted a feeling of anonymity, the numbness of grief. It's as if their identity has come into question after Ron's death. Again, thanks for the read and review :)



Shrouds by Equinox Chick

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Not all Voldemort’s victims were on the side of right.

Over a year has passed since the Battle of Hogwarts. Families grieve, but their dead are remembered with honour.

For Draco Malfoy it has been a year of nothing. Merely existing, he is bound tightly to his past as if enveloped in a shroud, unwilling to accept help. It takes a chance encounter on a cobbled street to jerk him into the realisation that he cannot go on like this. A chance encounter with the one person who has most cause to hate him.

But shrouds, however tightly bound, unravel.

A huge thank you to Natalie (hestiajones) who put her laminated canon card in jeopardy by beta'ing this fic and being very supportive all the way through.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. Her lawyers agree, so please don't mistake us. I just like taking the odd liberty (ahem) with her characters (and pairings)

Nominated for two QSQ's in Best Non-Canon Romance and also Best Post Hogwarts story for 2011. Thank you.


Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 11/07/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - My Talisman

Nice story. The ending could have been more satisfying, though

Author's Response: Hmmm, leave them begging for more - ha ha. Satisfying for whom? I don;t think Draco/hermione could ever truly work in the big wide world unless all their past associates are dead. Ron's happy - ha ha. ~Carole~



The Longest Walk of Her Life by charlottetrips

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Today is my wedding day. It should have been the happiest day of my life. It would have been, if only I was getting married to the right man. A Dramione story. Sequel now up "One Second Can Be A Lifetime"
Reviewer: hjpenguin_fred Signed
Date: 12/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Longest Walk of Her Life

Awesome. I love how you didnt reveal Ron until towards the end

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Yes, it was more exciting that way, wasn't it?