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04/09/11

Reviews by Auror Freya

A Weasley Wedding by willow_wand

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Bill and Fleur are getting married and love is in the air. But will an old flame drive a wedge between Ron and Hermione? Will Harry change his mind about Ginny?

Reviewer: Auror Freya Signed
Date: 06/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: A Weasley Wedding

I love this story it's so sweet and romantic. I especially like the end but what happens? Who catches the bouquet? I think you should make a sequel if you aren't too busy.

Six Flowers for a Wedding by Purplemage

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When you marry someone, you marry their family too. This is something that Fleur Delacour and Bill Weasley didn't consider. The two families couldn't be more different, especially the women. The day before the wedding, Fred and George came up with a plan to make the women stop arguing amongst each other. That was, of course, if they didn’t kill each other first.

Runner up for Challenge #1 of the Spring Challenge

Reviewer: Auror Freya Signed
Date: 06/29/11 Title: Chapter 4: One Wedding

This story is so amazing! The plot line is so interesting and made me want to read more. I thought the end was the best! Fred and George deserved it even if it was rather effective their plan.

The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my ~~bonkers~~ beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my ~~evil and malicious~~ extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I ~~make a fool out of myself at every opportunity~~ am unique?

Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of ~~cliquey~~ lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the ~~sarcastic cynic~~ also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? ~~Of course not~~ Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. ~~I have no idea how it happens~~ It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!

~~Read this or I’ll curse you~~ Read this and I’ll love you!

Reviewer: Auror Freya Signed
Date: 06/04/11 Title: Chapter 15: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

I LOVE this story i think it is the BEST fanfic on this entire site. My favorite character is Iola she became my favorite when she helped Lily overcome her fear of horses.
My favorite quote is "He just grins, takes a deep breath, and yells out, “Oh pretty baby, don’t bring me down, I pray, oh pretty baby!" I love the song and i think you made this chapter so romantic. Thats why i think that "There’s A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E" is my favorite chapter. It made me cry tear of happiness when reading it.:'). My favorite scene has to be the last one were Lily and James kissed. :D :) Amber

Author's Response: Thank you again, so much! I'm really glad you liked it, and took the time to review - these all feel so old now, but it's always nice to think that people can still enjoy them! :)

Little Lions by SexY_LydZ

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

On a stormy October evening, a letter, a late night trip to the library and a secret conversation lead Lily Evans to discover that there are several mysteries in her life that only she has the capability and the inclination to solve. The first mystery is James Potter – what could turn him from the arrogant, could-care-less boy that she had previously known to someone withdrawn and far away? Then, perhaps more troubling, there is Esther Collins, the fifth year who has vanished without a trace. Furthermore, one of Lily’s best friends, Izza, is seeing a mystery boy and Lily is determined to know who.

Then there is the threat of war, backstabbing friends and NEWT’s. A disinherited and emotionally battered Sirius Black is the source of heartache for his friends, except perhaps Izza, who, with her own terrifying family, might just understand him. Lily’s closest male friend, Remus Lupin, is hiding a dangerous secret from her. Peter’s girlfriend is screwing him over, and the whole time Lily is struggling to stop the people she loves from coming apart at the seams.

Categories: Marauder Era
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 | Completed: No | Words: 100303 | Hits: 20516 | Published: 02/06/10 | Updated: 11/21/14
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Reviewer: Auror Freya Signed
Date: 04/10/11 Title: Chapter 19: Night of the Hunter

I really liked the end part were she realises that something is up with James siince he and all the Maruders knnow that Izza and Lily aren't on speaking terms. I can't wait for you to update this story as it is amazing!

Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The sequel to â€œTricksterâ€: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Maraudersâ€™ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battleâ€¦

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D

Reviewer: Auror Freya Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 18: Schisms

First of all, I do think Mcgonagall is AWESOME. Secondly this chapter is really cool, I liked the Egyptian Curse stones. Although I wasn't to sure how Wormtail was affected by the stone?

Author's Response: ahh that was my favorite part of the movie..."i've always wanted to do that spell!" and oh, he'll get there, no worries ;) thanks so much!

Fool Me Twice by Dawnie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

Lily Evans is pretty, intelligent, vivacious… and accused of murder. James Potter is privileged, arrogant, and conceited… and her best chance at avoiding Azkaban. If only he wasn’t convinced of her guilt.

With a war looming in the background and evil slowly seeping into the wizarding world, seven years of secrets unravel, and two very different people find themselves caught up in a battle against privilege, intolerance, and greed.

But even in the darkness, and even in the despair, there is still friendship, and love, and hope.

Reviewer: Auror Freya Signed
Date: 07/17/11 Title: Chapter 19: Closing Arguments

This chapter was amasing! James' speech was inspiring. This has to be my favorite chapter of the whole story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I spent a lot of time writing James' speech, so I'm glad you found it inspiring. The next chapter is in the queue and will hopefully be approved soon.