11/27/11
Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is crb809@gmail.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:
DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
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You Want To Make A Memory? by Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Chapter Ninety Six is posted!
This is the story of four boys. This is the story of a boy from a family he wants to escape from. This is the story of a boy who is from a family he loves deeply, but lacks the gift of a best friend. This is the story of a boy who has been living with a curse his entire life, fighting to overcome it. This is the story of a boy who wishes to show people what he can do. This is the story of how these four boys came to know each other, of how they became friends. This is the story of their unbreakable bond, of a bond that could survive any test, any trial. This is a story that will ultimately end in tragedy.
Nominated for a 2007 and 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Marauder's Era Featured Mugglenet Fanfiction, October 2011
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 45: Years in the Making
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is what I have been waiting for!!!(: I'm sooooooooooooooooooooo happpppppppppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for Remus and his friends!!!!!!!!!(:
Author's Response: Yup, it finally happened! Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 46: Hogsmeade Revisited
Haha, I liked this chapter except that forty degrees is not at all cold, haha, thirty degrees below zero is cold.(: How cold does it get where you live?(:
Author's Response: I like the cold, so I agree there. It usually gets into the twenties around here, it's probably gotten lower, but that's what I remember. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 47: Late Arrival
I started to get worried when Remus had his transformation. Nice chapter, can't wait to read the next!(:
Author's Response: Yeah they were a bit late... Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 48: Holidays and Tactlessness
On to the next!(:
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 49: The Whomping Willow Incident
I have been waiting for this chapter for the longest time and I think you did an AMAZING job at writing it!!! GOOD JOB!!!!!(:
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! This was a chapter I was really excited to write. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 50: Stand Off
I know I shouldn't, but I feel so bad for Sirius! That was so good! Moving on to chapter fifty-one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(:
Author's Response: There's nothing wrong with feeling bad for Sirius, he does regret what he did. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 51: Grey Hair, Nicknames and The OWLs
Man, I can't believe that. I also can't believe how Professor Kern left since he was so "boring" ro everyone, haha. I'm surprised they never tried to get rid of Professor Binns... I liked the O.W.L.s portion and an't wait to see their results!(:
Author's Response: Haha yeah Kern left... and Sirius actually won that bet. I mean, they could try to get rid of Binns, but he's a ghost so you really can't send him anywhere. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/12 Title: Chapter 52: The Runaway
This was surely expected, haha. I was going to say something else, but I forgot...(:
Author's Response: Yeah, this was expected, but fun to write all the same. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/20/12 Title: Chapter 1: A Compartment For Four
I understand the fact that this story was written so long ago and that you probably never visit this sight to look at your reviews, but I really enjoyed this chapter. I can't wait to read the other 95.
I really liked how you seperated this story into four, for each character. It was really excellent. I love how you had them met it was just so nice. You really have a knack to writing and yu made me want to write more than I do now. I really enjoyed it and hope to read your other stories and hope that you continue to write more stories.
Author's Response: I look occasionally and email notifications seem to have started again, so now I know when people review :) For the beginning, I did want to give each main character his own separate introduction and lead it into them meeting (which was obviously done differently, but I wrote this part prior to the release of Deathly Hallows) I'm glad this makes you want to write more (it makes me feel incredibly lazy with my lack of writing lately to hear that). Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/20/12 Title: Chapter 2: Gryffindors
I absolutely loved this chapter! I liked the soting because you sorted Allison Abbot and left the remaing ones for the main four characters instead of rambling on about other students. I did like how you added Lily and Severus and I guess Abrac Zabini, but the point is that you didn't go on about it which I like. When it comes to writig about the sorting ceremony for me, I always have a hard time with sorting who. But as J.K. Rowling did, we should sort whoever is going to have an important role in the story. I think you did that really well. I wished I could have seen Frank Longbottom getting sorted, however. I didn't think about him so I was surprised to see him make an entrance in the chapter. We all know he and his wife get tortured to insanity later, so I am glad you added him so we can see what he is like as a normal person. I wonder if Alice will be making an appearance sometime? I absolutely loved this chapter and I am looking forward to the next 94! (:
P.S. I'm sorry if there are any mistakes in this review... My keyboard keeps acting up.
P.P.S. I wonder if James is going to be make fun of Severus and show his love for Lily??? I guess I'll find out...(:
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want there to be an absurdly long Sorting, so I just included the first person, the main characters in between and ended with the last person, though Zabini is mentioned once or twice throughout the story. Wow, I didn't even realize I never put in Frank getting Sorted. He comes up a lot during this, so you'll see more of him, same for Alice. Ha, no problem, my keyboard gets like that too :) And as for James and Lily, their romance is a slow development. Thanks for reading!
Neville Longbottom and the Philosopher's Stone by Sonorus
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "Yes Neville," said Dumbledore, "it was Voldemort who came to your parents’ house that night nearly ten years ago. It was Voldemort who killed them. And it was Voldemort who then turned his wand on you.”
The ultimate 'what if?'. What if Voldemort had chosen Neville rather than Harry as the boy meant by the prophecy? What if Neville was the Boy-Who-Lived and Harry was the "might have been"?
Join Neville as he faces some familiar and less familiar challenges of his first year at Hogwarts in the first of an epic seven story series mirroring the original novels.
Story now complete. Book 2 is on its way!
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: The House on Preston Road
Wow, that was short! I guess I was reading too fast, haha! I don't mean this in any bad way, but what is it with the British and their writing skills?! You did say you were a Brit, right? J.K. Rowling came up with fabulous world and you could be related to her for all I know! I think I read a review in your other story about Dumbledore and Grindlewald, that you were something like J.K. Rowling herself, whatever the compliment was, I agree I every aspect!!! I like your writing skill, keep it up! I expect an actual book from you some day!(:
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 2: Past Scars
I liked that chapter too and I find myself reading very fast which means this is an interesting read! One question, does that mean Harry's parents were the ones tortured to insanity? If it's explained later, don't answer my question, haha.(;
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 3: The Alley of Surprises
I really liked this chapter because it was so different than the actual first book! For example, the scene with Professor Quirell. Though he said the same things to Harry, it was still different. Then his Gran took him away so quickly so it was never the same like the books which is good. Then, you had Hagrid which you portrayed beautifully! His speech and all! Then there's the scene with Malfoy, just bloody brilliant! I can't wait to read more when I get the chance!(:
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 4: On the Hogwarts Express
Nice chapter!(:
Date: 07/11/12 Title: Chapter 5: Advice from a Hat
I like reading sorting ceremonies and this one was really good!!!(:
Courting Death by A Cappella
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A short poem about courting death, from the comprehension of a nineteenth century romancer of the wizarding world.
Underground by Magical Maeve
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A Malfoy is lost in the Muggle world, enjoying its simplicity. But her brother finds her and he's not best pleased. Short fic - just a few chapters.
Date: 07/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Down
Man, that was good!(: I really liked the descriptions you had throughout most of the story. It was written really well and I am glad that I stumbled across it!(:
Lost Souls by A Cappella
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Those sent to Azkaban are condemned to a place that is worse than death.
Date: 06/21/12 Title: Chapter 1: Lost Souls
That was so beautiful!(: