I like the way you write - I hope you write more! It would be great to have an update on Dudley's daughter, who his wife's sister is and how the Dursleys deal with having a magically gifted granddaughter ...
Wow, what a cliffhanger! Very creepy, please update soon, can't wait to find out what happens next!!
Author's Response: Thank you :) Sorry the updates are going a little slowly atm.
Great, a new story! I hadn't been on here for a while and now I find this! You are definitely a reason for coming here more often, this story sounds very promising, keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I don't usually like this kind of story much, but this was so well written that I had finished the whole piece before I realised it. Fantastic characterisation, hope you write more!
Author's Response: Oh, I've written about 50 stories, but I'm only putting up the best of mine on Mugglenet, since the standards are so high here. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review, especially on the characterization.
Very promising!! Hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! The story is complete in 28 chapters, and I'm going to try and post them just as fast as they're validated. Chapter 2 has been submitted.
I hope you enjoy the tale as it unfolds, and I very much appreciate any and all feedback.