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08/19/13

Reviews by srhittson

Hey, You! I Don't Like Your Girlfriend by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

He was Muggle-born, a Hufflepuff, and a slob. Andromeda Black could not understand why a boy with messy hair and untidy ways was so popular until she realised no one enjoyed life like Ted Tonks. It wasn't a secret that he liked her...and she didn't like his girlfriend.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 10/22/13 Title: Chapter 1: Hey, you!

Love the story. Really cute

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my stories! I wish I'd seen your reviews when you gave them, but better late than never, I hope. :)

Sweet Anger by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

When Snape catches her in a compromising position and revokes Hogsmeade privileges, Tonks sees red. She plans payback and discovers that while revenge is supposedly a dish best served cold, it tastes even better hot.

*Not the usual 'Don't Stand so Close to Me' variety romance.*

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Anger

I thought I wouldn't like this but it was really good

Author's Response: That is a wonderful compliment. Thanks! :)

Too Much is Never Enough by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Severus wasn't a white knight content to be ennobled by the purity of his affection. He felt more like a black knight, greedy to possess his lady fair. Although he was willing to terrorise peasants and burn villages to complete his quest, could he slay the dragon of pride to make a romantic gesture?

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the story. So good

Author's Response: Hope it's never too late to say thank you. :)

A Different Past by potterfan89

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: An alternative first year fic that contemplates what Harry's life could have been like if James and Lily had survived. Starts from when they have to elect a Secret Keeper to the end of Harry's first year of Hogwarts.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/23/13 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good story. Please update more

Better Together by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Dunderhead students. A clumsily-handled Auror assignment. Snape and Tonks each have a bad day that gets better once they're together.

* Follows Sweet Anger and Too Much is Never Enough*

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: Better Together

Love the story. I know think that they make a really good couple and would love to read more

Author's Response: Aw, that's so nice of you to say.

Baby Mine by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Precious to me, cute as can be.... Tonks was supposed to be with Teddy at her mother's. Why couldn't she stand waiting? What caused her to look 'anguished'? Not a deathfic, just a possible explanation of why Tonks 'sped off' to find Remus.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 10/21/13 Title: Chapter 1: Baby Mine

Cute story but I could feel the darkness behind it

Author's Response: Thank you! Those were dark times lightened by bright moments. :)

The Knick Knack by SeverusSempra

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It’s not impossible for a Slytherin to marry a Gryffindor. They just might not agree on how to decorate the house.

A very fluffy AU one-shot about what might have happened if Lily Evans had wound up with Severus Snape.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/25/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the story! It is so cute. I want more like it

Apparently Asleep by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Nymphadora Tonks lives under a shadow. Both her cousin and her aunt are in Azkaban believed to be in league with Voldemort. She knows Bellatrix deserves to be there- but Sirius?
Remus Lupin is an outsider. Heâ€™d once had three good friends- now two are dead and the third has been locked up for murder and betrayal.
They had met once before, when she was a child, but as Tonks grows up they find themselves thrown together- far too closely for Remusâ€™ comfort. Heâ€™s always yearned for a normal life but knows that is impossible. Can Tonks convince him that he deserves happiness?

Nominated for a 2009 QSQ award in the Best canon Romance category. Thank you.

Categories: Remus/Tonks
Characters: None
Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity
Series: None
Chapters: 21 | Completed: No | Words: 121429 | Hits: 114302 | Published: 10/20/08 | Updated: 03/18/11
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Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/11/13 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Work, Rest and Play

Love the story. It is so good. I cannot wait for you to update again. I really want tonks and Remus to get together. They are perfect for each other.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry, I will try to get around to updating, but I'm trying to finish up something else and then I'm going to concentrate on original fiction. Having said that, this was my second ever story and I love this couple very much so I might well come back to it. Thank you for reviewing ~Carole~

Love in an Elevator by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Ron knows Hermione said they'd take the lift to allow Scorpius and Rose to walk downstairs without him dogging their heels, but he still kinda hopes to get stuck.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 10/21/13 Title: Chapter 1: Lifts

Love this so cute

Author's Response: Thank you! I've always thought they had great chemistry. :)

Dark Angel by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Survival. Separation. Reunion. Death cannot stop true love; all it can do is delay it for a while.

*A DH alternate ending story.*

Categories: Remus/Tonks
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: Yes | Words: 27871 | Hits: 13047 | Published: 09/04/09 | Updated: 04/17/10
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Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 10/21/13 Title: Chapter 12: Dark Light

Love the story. I love your chapter stories I am going to find the other tonks Remus ones noe

Author's Response: I officially heart you. <3

Daughter of the Prince by lydiacsnape

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Lydia Snape embarks upon a journey to put the past right in order to have a better future.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Student/Teacher Romance, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Words: 1208 | Hits: 88 | Published: 03/17/10 | Updated: 03/21/10
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Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/23/13 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Lydia Christine

Cute story

Interfering Grandfather by Kerichi

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:

Narcissa has called him an interfering grandfather. Lucius is not sure he deserves that.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 10/14/13 Title: Chapter 1: The meaning of words

Love this poem

Author's Response: Thank you! Lucius can't help having his dreams. :D

Beauty and the Beast, or the Metamorphmagus and the Werewolf by hogwartsbookworm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Little Teddy gets a bedtime story from his parents. It is a story that we know parts of from the Harry Potter series. It is the story of Remus and Dora, and how they fell in love.

I don't own Beauty and the Beast or Harry Potter.

Chapter 2 is here!

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/12/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the story. Really cute. Cannot wait for more

Beneath the Cloth by siberianhuskypatronus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Snape stumbles upon a secret room while absentmindedly wandering through Hogwarts. Inside, he discovers a treasure that he believes with bring him true happiness.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 08/28/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I tried hard not to cry because I am in study hall right now and this is a sad sweet story.

Snowball Fights by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Christmas Day for Teddy Lupin is not shaping up well this year. After a row with Victoire, two weeks before, he now has to face her over the dinner table.He wants to apologise (although he's not sure what for) but then Victoire turns up with a new boyfriend, (or is he an ex?) and it becomes clear that she's moved on.

Will Teddy get through Christmas Dinner unscathed?

Disclaimer: I'm not JK Rowling. Her lawyers agree, so please don't confuse us.

Thank you Lea (mugglegirlmarauder) for beta'ing the original 1000 word drabble. Any errors are my fault and not hers.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/16/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the story. So cute

Author's Response: Thank you very much. ~Carole~

The Other Potter by georgeisholey

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: My name is Rose Evans. My parents were Lily and James Potter, and Harry Potter is my twin brother, though he didn't know. I was raised by Severus Snape. This is my story.

RECENTLY NOMINATED FOR 2011 QSQ BEST ALTERNATE UNIVERSE!! Thank you, grangergirl35!!

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 17 | Completed: Yes | Words: 40897 | Hits: 76535 | Published: 01/09/11 | Updated: 06/21/11
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Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 08/30/13 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue: Spinner's End

The ending was sad and I was trying hard not to cry because I am in class. Loved the story. It inspired me to write one where snaps is actually the father of my character Avery.

Out of the Darkness by phoenix_song197

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The battle is over, but Remus and Tonks are trapped in the darkness. Trapped between life and death. Trapped among their memories. Will they find the strength to wake up and find each other or will they be trapped in the darkness forever?

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/05/13 Title: Chapter 5: Waking

I love the story. It was so sweet and cute and sad and happy

For Always and Ever by Equinox Chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I'm coming to find you if it takes all night.
Can't stand here like this anymore.
For always and ever is always for you. ***

He'd left at the worst possible time, but he's returned determined to prove his worth.

Will she take him back?

This story is dedicated to Lea (muggle girl marauder) who shares my love of Remus Lupin and The Cure. Happy Birthday, mate.

Thanks must be sent to Gina (gmariam) for beta'ing this story.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling or Robert Smith (although my lipstick is a bit dodgy this morning).

*** Indicates lyrics from A Night Like This by The Cure.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/06/13 Title: Chapter 1: Always and Ever

Love the story. It is so cute

Author's Response: Thank you very much. ~Carole~

Timing by Equinox Chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: For Remus Lupin, Easter has always been his favourite time of year. It has nothing to do with chocolate, he tells his friends, and everything to do with timing...

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling or the Easter Bunny, but here's a little Easter gift for everyone at MNFF.

Thank you Natalie (hestiajones) for beta'ing this story and for being all round a ... a ... amazing.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 09/16/13 Title: Chapter 1: Timing

Love the story. So cute

Author's Response: Thank you very much. ~Carole~

Spark by panda_patronus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley absolutely despise each other. It seems as though the rivalry between the two families has passed down to the next generation, and it looked like that it wasn't going to stop anytime soon.

Into O.W.L. year our story starts, when suddenly both Rose and Scorpius notice there is something going on between them. Like a "spark" in their relationship. Including trying to figure out their feelings and a lot of dueling, fifth year is going to be one wild ride. For them at least.

Filled with plenty of action, romance, betrayl, and secrets, find out exactly how an entire relationship can change just because of a feeble spark.

Reviewer: srhittson Signed
Date: 08/20/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Overprotective James

Love the story. Please update again soon. This is a really good story.

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