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10/08/05






"Tell me one last thing," said Harry. "Is this real? Or has this been happening inside my head?"
"Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?"

That's the way I feel about fanfiction... Sigh. It's my favorite line of DH; I was so happy to hear it in the final movie.



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Big, huge, gargantuan, colossal, magnanimous, gigantic, wonderful, squeeze-worthy, giant.... I've run out of adjectives....big thank you to babekitty_92 for the beautiful banner! I nearly was in tears when I saw it. I don't know why I was, because it's so simple, but I love it sooo much! Thank you! *squeeze*


So, I'm no longer in high school, which means my penname is rather outdated. Nevertheless, freshman year will always be a special time for me because that's when I started here at MNFF. ;D I now attend the American Academy of Art in downtown Chicago, and I major in illustration.

I love Harry Potter and decided in freshman year of high school (hence the penname) to start a story. I'm incredibly flattered that the story has been accepted the way it has, and it warms my heart to read the reviews. (And yes- I know that sounded chessy. :D) I also have an account at Fanfiction.com, under the penname: Io.sono.Emilia., on which I've posted this story also. So before you accuse me of stealing a story....


Read the stories; maybe you'll get something about me out of them.


Thanks to all of you for sticking around! Maybe one day in the future I'll start working on a brief epilogue, or even a few sequels and one-shots based on other characters. Life's been a bit hectic, but I'll return to it one day... I had fun while it lasted. :D Thanks again!


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Canis Majoris by trinsy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 28: Going After

*whimpers* It's over? That chapter is over? NOO! I love this story, soooo wonderful! Gosh, keep these excuisite chapters coming!



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/21/05 Title: Chapter 27: Restless Abandon

Jeez, sometimes you want to strangle Sirius, and then others you want to hug him...well, right now, I want strangle him while I am hugging him! *grr* THough I applaud Jocelyn for being so understanding! Love this story!



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 25: Enough

I Love it! *bounces up and down waiting, itching for more* I was hoping they would kiss...ahhh. Lovely! It's an amazing story thanks sooo much for the read!



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 31: The Legend

Meep! That first half was quite...well...it made me feel sad for poor Jamsiekins. I think James's (Or James' , whatever) confession was kinda ackward. Oh well. The second half makes me anxious to find out what in the world happens to Sirius and Jocelyn. You're right. This isn't English class, and thank God it's not.



'Mione My Only by Kalars

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Eight years after Hogwarts, Hermione's last chance to open up her heart -- PLS R&R, that means Read and Review...Pulease....flutter flutter....pout..
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 07/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: One: Heal my heart

it's wasn't too bad. You don't need a space before an exclamtion point or a period after one either. Theredore !. That is wrong. The last few sentences should be strung together, not left seperate. Other then that, it was a good idea.



The Caves of Concealment by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: While Ginny tries to get Harry to notice her and Hermione tries to get Ron to admit he's noticed her, Ginny and Hermione come across a very special place at Hogwarts. Not just anyone can get into the Caves of Concealment, for within lie some of the most powerful items in the wizarding world. Can Ginny and Hermione discover the secrets of the caves while at the same time getting their favorite guys to notice them? Well, the final chapter is up! I hope you all enjoy it!!!! Please remember to read and review and tell me what you think :) The sequel to this story is called Harry Potter and The Year of the Dragon.
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: Surprises at The Burrow

wow! i shoulda found this story earlier! Very well written and interesting! Thanks for the great read! Keep up writing *goes to read sequel* :-)



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 15: While You Were Sleeping

I just reread this last chapter...and I love that movie. Sandra Bullock and that other guy..."While You Were Sleeping"...Great movie. Set in Chicago which makes it all the better. HEhe.



The Last Chapter by Hallie Black

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I guess I should write AU… Anyway, this is how I would like the last chapter of Book Seven to be… What do you say?
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Chapter

Yeah, that is one long, crazy, topsy-turvy, rollercoaster-like ride. I would be falling out of my bed if something like that happened to me. That is crazy. It's a really creative way to look at the last chapter. I never would've guessed that it would be a dream, I guess because there was so much body as I read the books. But it was very creative!

Author's Response: You think? Thanks! I had fun writing it, so I\'m happy if ppl have fun reading it!



A Dragon Tamer by The Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I wrote this for a challenge: One night Ginny and Harry recall a special train-ride so many years before, and the heartache and joy that memory carries with it.
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

That was so gosh darn cute! I definetly agree that if Harry and Ginny were to have a kid, her name would be "Lily". I gotta develop a story about that....Anyway. Great story. I don't know if I already mentioned this, but you are on my favorites list!



A Marauder's Tale: Rebel by SiriuslyPadfoot12

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One-Shot written to "She's a Rebel" by Green Day



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James' P.O.V.







My name is James Potter. Yeah, that's right. The James Potter. See, there's this girl I've been after since I was eleven. Her name is Lily Evans. She refuses to date me. I don't know why; I'm talented, good-looking, athletic, smart, and modest. But this is the year. She won't be able to resist me this year. Ready or not, Evans, here I come!







Verse 7 is here!
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 05/02/06 Title: Chapter 4: Verse 6

Heheh. Those are great. Sirius and orange and blue hair....mauahaha. Great job, and keep updating! I think I'd prefer "Midnight Ride". It's sounds....Siriusly funny. Haha



Much Ado Caused by the Weasleys by the nutty imp

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Shakespearean Parody written in a style akin to the original (well almost) featuring Fred and George Weasley
This crazy author was bored ^_^ This is my laughable attempts to massacre some the famous play-wright's most notable lines. ^_^

Act 1 Scene 3 - Validated!


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 05/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Act One Scene One

"No you wayward dizzy-eyed moron," *cracks up* that's great. Oh I love it. I have a feeling this'll be a cross between Much Ado About Nothing, A Midsummer's Night Dream and a whoooollle lot o' other ones. Great start. I love Shakespeare! *goes to finish act*

Author's Response: Yep. Can\'t have have things too predictable. So far I\'ve massacred plenty of Macbeth. The weird sister\'s triple talk just screams Weasley Twins :)



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 05/10/06 Title: Chapter 2: Act One Scene Two

I figured that was Macbeth- I recognized the witch's. Hehe.

Author's Response: Yes. One of my favourite scenes. \"Double Double Toil and Trouble\" ^_^



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 05/10/06 Title: Chapter 3: Act One Scene Three

Hehe. Great start I really wonder where this is going to go...Hmm..

Author's Response: With the Weasley Twins? There\'s only one destination: \'Trouble\'



First by Hallie Black

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter is an obnoxious, arrogant prat. Lily Evans is stubborn and a bit arrogant herself. James loves Lily. Lily hates James. Will James ever conquer the love of his life when his each and every attempt always fails spectacularly? Humor is guaranteed thanks to the one and only, Sirius Black!
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/04/06 Title: Chapter 7: EPILOGUE

Gotta love Sirius don't ya? I thought the romance between Liy and James went kinda fast, but oh well, It was good. The epilogue was sas but the story before that was very good. You kept James in his character throughout the entire thing, very good!

Author's Response: Thanks!! And I don\'t love sirius... I am OBSESSED!!



The Forget Me Do Chew by Elizabeth90

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: At the end of the summer before her 5th year, the twins offer Ginny one of their new products: a Forget Me Do Chew, a troublesome little sweet that she's all too tempted to use on Harry...H/G one-shot with some R/H!
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/23/10 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I don't know how many times I've read and reviewed this, but I still adore it. ;D So funny and creative. Well done. ;D



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 02/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I agree with IckleGinnyKins. That was brilliant. I loved it! Such a good idea. I really like this line, "Sure, Ginny, riding invisible monsters hundreds of miles in the air, rushing head-on into the Department of Mysteries after-hours, diving right into a situation where you know Voldemort is involved—oh all in a day’s work, nothing to fear. But a small thing like kissing a boy, and you turn into jelly." HEhe. I can't say that I've ever experienced either of those, but hehehe, it was still a great quote. There were other ones, but that one was the first. Great Job!



Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

AWWWW!! Just reread this. What a complete ball of mush! I LOVE IT! *laugh*
Thanks for the laughs! And the sighs... and the warm fuzzies. Great story. Very clever. The only thing I can suggest- if you ever start writing again, which, I KNOW, is not that easy- limit the amount of words between dialogue in intense or funny or just emotional scenes... Too many words slow things down and that's not cool. So, cut back on some words. But, just a little suggestion.

Again, thanks for the story- made my day. ;D



Toxic by Therinian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: NOTE: CHAPTER 19 IS COMPLETE; CHAPTER 20 HAS BEEN STARTED!



It is Hermione Granger's seventh and final year at Hogwarts. When she and Draco Malfoy are together more often than either would like, Hermione asks herself: "Can a leopard change its spots?", as Draco wonders: "Will any sort of relationship with Granger be bad for my health...?"

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Please note: this story, while having some humor and mystery, really is a romance...!

**BE SURE TO READ MY OTHER FAN FIC, IN THE 'GENERAL FICS' SECTION!**

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Distracted

"Oh, Snape's always grumpy, Ginevra; haven't you noticed? Perhaps his coffin is too small.” Haha. Silly Luna. "I'm a little teapot, short and stout, here is my handle here is my spout-" I'm stopping there. Haha. So, is Krum a Death Eater? and is Draco one too? Or was that just in the vivid terrible dream? Whoa. I can't beleive he kissed her! Though I'm very happy. Haha. I hope they kiss agian everything's all good- though I doubt it'll all be good so soon. Oh my. Good story. Question: You have this posted on harrypotterfanfiction. Is this the story you'd prefer for us to read? Or is it the other one, because there are a few differences?

Author's Response: I love Luna; I try to make her as canon as possible, but of course I have to add a bit more to her at times! :) As for your questions... Krum a Death Eater? Hmm. Draco too? Hmmmmm. No comments...lol. Thank you for the lovely review! Yes, I do have this same story over at HPFF, but I have always had trouble loading up the story, soooo, THIS is the one I\'d prefer everyone to read; THANK YOU for bringing that to my attention! :)



Harry Potter & the Year of the Dragon by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: They say that true love conquers all. Harry and Ginny, and Ron and Hermione will be able to put this to the test during the new term to come. With a deranged killer on the loose, new friends, a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, and Voldemort planning his final attack, it will be a year of trials and tribulations. And what exactly is the Year of the Dragon? You'll just have to read to find out!

CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 9: Love Bites

NOOOOOOO!!! NOOONNONONONONONO! Update soon! Please! This story is very good, just as CoC was. Thanks for the read, but if you dont give me more....*scowls* 50/10! I love the Draco/Luna bit! And Gred and Forge are just fabulous, as is Hermione's p.j. shirt!



I Surrender by MartiOwlsten

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One-Shot. She can't stop thinking about him, but she has refused to give in... will she surrender to love, despite the dangers and despite her own fears? Based on the song, I surrender by Celine Dion, this is a rather fluffy, kind of intense, Ron/Hermione fic.
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 08/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: I Surrender

I've reviewed this before, but I had to read it once more with the musi behind. It's a very good song. A good story too. :-) Hey, are you going to update "You Smell?" sometime soon? hey, I thought I had reveiwed this before...Hmm....That's strange. Oh well, I like it and the song. Very nice.