11/07/05
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Hey, I'm Lilypudding AKA LongbottomsLady... I just started writing fanfic a few months ago, but I've been writing all my life!
I'm really sorry I had to delete "A Summer to Remember." I fell of the face of fanfiction Earth for nearly three months and once I rejoined, I had forgotton my plans for chapter two. I solemly swear never to attempt another chaptered story again and I am sticking to one shots. I am sorry for the pain it has caused any of my readers. The regret I put into deleting it is unmeasurable.
Series Status:
The World's A Stage for Lily and James: I'm updating that periodically; however, I'm only going to add a new story when natrual inspiration strikes. I'm thinking about songs from several shows, like RENT, Into the Woods, Guys and Dolls and maybe even Fiddler on the Roof.
IMPORTANT UPDATE: "I'll Cover You," a songfic to the song from RENT, is in a beta's hands as I type this. I'm hoping the nature of this song in the musical won't turn people off, as this fic completely focuses on Lily and James's wedding and has nothing to do with the homosexual relationship of Angel and Collins. "I'll Cover You" is a romantic song, and can fit many couples regardless of sexuality.
Stories Status:
Perfect for Each Other: Completed
How Did It Happen: One shot
Defying Gravity: One shot
A Mother's Love: One shot
Somewhere: One shot
Such Sweet Sorrow: One shot poem
Your Eyes: One shot poem
A Summer To Remember: WIP chaptered L/J
COMING SOON: I'll Cover You- One-shot L/J.
ABOUT ME:
I'm just a HP fan who is obsessed with musical theatre and dogs. I enjoy performing, even though I'm not very good at it, and my love of theatre is second only to my love of writing. I generally try to be a constructive reviewer - don't be insulted if I leave a long and not-so-positive review on your story, as I sometimes will, because my intent is to help. While I usually give long and guiding reviews on barely-reviewed stories, I'm not above the occasional "Great story!" review.
Ok, heres a banner for Defying Gravity, courtesy of Token from HPFF:
Banner by sayiansirius!
Well, I hoped you enjoy reading my bio and you enjoy my stories!
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I Don't Know How to Love Him by MoonysMistress
Rated: •Summary: James Potter has pursued Lily Evans for six years, and for six years she's spurned him. Now, in their seventh year, Lily notices something that's been hiding inside her. When the two are locked in the ever-so-cliched locked room, can she work out her inner turmoil in enough time to speak her mind? One-shot MWPP seventh year, songfic to the song "I Don't Know How to Love Him," with a little creative interpretation and a different ending. W00t for Broadway musicals!
Date: 04/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Locked Room, Stormy Night
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. I'm a huge fan of all your works, but I didn't realize you were such a Broadway fan until now. I think this was an amazing L/J. I write L/Js and I know that it is extremely hard to write L/J one-shot because you don't want to rush it yet you need to keep it in one story. It was a little rushed, but that usually happens in one-shots. I really enjoyed reading this. I really should tell you how much you remind me of my BFF who is extremely obsessed with HP, loves Broadway more than I do, and always ends whatevers she writes with "FIN." You write better fics than she does, though.... Anyway, I know this review is random but I really enjoyed this story.
Date: 01/12/06 Title: None
Amazing! Absolutely brilliant! I am in awe of this wonderful work! I think you portrayed Remus wonderfully. I am a HUGE fan of him and you definitely get my stamp of approval. I don't think Remus would find out about how You-Know-Who fell from a nieghbor, but you portrayed it excellently. It was wonderful, and I'm looking foward to reading companion fics. Great job! 10 million/10, definitely!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! It's nice to hear that you liked my stories. And Mrs Peabody wasn't a neighbor, but rather, she was someone who helped him get on his feet after he left Hogwarts.
A Rude Awakening by CassandraTrelawney
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione's dad becomes gravely ill, so her mum and her leave for the America's to use an experimental drug. When Hermione leaves Ron, Ron becomes heartbroken. He wants to propose to the girl of his dreams; yet, how do you get your love to come home to you?
Three Part Series:
Part I - A Rude Awakening
Part II - Love Is Worth Dying For
Part III - Not yet named
Date: 05/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: An Awakening
This is a really good story and a loud cheer for my favorite canon ship! Usually, I'm afraid to read Ron/Hermione stories even though I love the ship, as they are usually mediocre beyond mention, but I loved this story! Brilliant job!
Harry Potter and the Psychiatrist by d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Rated: •Summary: Attention! You have on your screen an interpretation of the first chapter of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince. But this has absolutely nothing to do with princes and blood. No, this is simply my way of getting Harry to work through his grief of Sirius. Sick of brooding over Sirius, Harry ends up accompanying the Dursleys on a visit to Dudley’s psychiatrist. The results are similar to what you would see in the nuthouse.
Date: 02/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Harry Potter and the Psychiatrist
That was amusing! ;) I really liked the surprise ending. I noticed Harry said, "It's not fait," instead of "fair." Besides that, it was perfect. Random, yes, but in a good way. I don't have much to say but 10!
Excerpts from Nagini's Diary by Scheherazade
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A look into the life of Voldy's pet snake, Nagini.
Date: 01/21/06 Title: Chapter 3: It’s a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad World!!!
Ooh, this one was just as good if not better than the other chapters! Wormtail in a Speedo?? Funny! 10 million out of ten! I almost fell off my chair laughing! Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I know how poor Nagini must feel, seeing Wormtail in a Speedo. We may never be the same again, lol.
Date: 11/22/05 Title: Chapter 2: Say It Ain't So!?
Yay Nagini! I love inside views on Voldy's real life. 2 bad Naginis a horcrux and is gonna hafta die, she is so hilarious. i never thought i'd say this but the Dark Side rox my sox!
i'm in a random mood 2day sorry.
i've never liked voldi portrayed as u know not evil for the amusement of fanfic readers but this is hilarious!!!!!
Author's Response: Nagini=Horcrux? Kinda an interesting theory. :-D Would explain why Voldy's so attached to her. lol Glad youl ike the story. Chapter 3 is still with my Beta, but I'm hoping to get it soon.
Ordinary People by kiyasama
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry is aware of her little quirks and eccentricities, but never would he have imagined she would be so bold as to accept such a challenge from Malfoy. He tells himself she isn’t worth his time and yet can’t seem to stay away from her
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: 1
That was really really good. I personally think Harry and Luna should have had a nice little snog at the end of OotP, safter the you heard them thingie and I loved it. The only thing was you called Luna a blonde and Ginny "the red-head" so much it almost became awkward, and there were a few parts when Luna and Harry were talking and I felt that they should have used contractions because without it the speech was sort of forced. It was still absolutely wonderful- beautiful!
The Clipped Wings of Love by Magical Maeve
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: A little study of what Snape's parents' marriage might have been like.
Date: 12/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Clipped Wings of Love
10 million out of 10 to a great writer and a wonderful mod! You are wonderful at writing- I don't particurally like Snape-childhood stories, especially ones written pre-HBP but your skills made up for it. I feel bad for Verian. I think, though, that you should change her name to Eileen or mention that Verian was her middle name which she liked to be called by and her first name was Eileen, and change Snape's dads name to Tobias or at least something more pronouncable, to fit in with HBP cannon. Its still an excellent story.
Date: 01/09/06 Title: None
Funny! 10/10, definitely! I think Harry could have a little more emotion while talking to his dad, but other than that, it was perfect! I liked the ending of Chapter 1 alot! Great job! Keep up the good work!
Date: 01/09/06 Title: None
Me likee! I thought the Grawp- excuse me, Elizabeth- part was absolutely hilarious! By the way, have you ever seen The Producers? Cuz they'res this Elizabeth thing in it that reminded me of your fic, I was dying of laughter. i think Hermione was a little OOC, but other than that, great job!
Sirius Black . . . Babysitter Extraordinaire?! by Scheherazade
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: If Sirius Black can handle Severus Snape for 7-years at Hogwarts, then watching baby Harry, his godson, for the weekend should be a breeze right? WRONG! Find out what really happens when James and Lily leave Harry in his watch.
**This story was written in collaboration between me and the wonderful author, Crimsonphoenix1.**
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 4: Friendly Assistance
As usual 10 zillion out of ten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Absolutely amazing! I loved it when Sirius was singing! I just don't think Harry would be able to apparate when he was a baby... I mean, he couldn't do it when he was 16... R-E-S-P-E-C-T! Defintely one of my faves!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter. :-)
Re: Harry Apparating - Baby's can Apparate easier than 16 y.o's. ;-)
Date: 11/10/05 Title: Chapter 3: Dogs and Yearbooks
what a great story! its such a great idea, and it is hilarious. my only suggestion... update more often. although i know how hard it is sometimes with the que... my first and only fic has been in there for 2 days... sorry for advertising, but anyway its an awesome story, absolutely hilarious, and definitely one of my favorites.
Author's Response: I know, I need to update, I'll send the next chapter to my Beta soon.
[shamless self plug] Until I get it up, I've got other stories I'm sure you'll enjoy.[end shameless self plug, lol]
I Was A Famous Child Witch or Wizard by Burrowbrat
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is a spin off of the famous child star countdowns. It is the famous child witch or wizard countdown. Where are they now? What made them worthy of the countdown? Fellow witches and wizards are on hand for one-on-one interviews about the famous witches and wizards.(pre-HBP)For those that have been wondering about the sequel, info can be found on my profile page
Date: 11/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot
*sobbing with laughter 2 hard to form words* oh my god that was funny. emotional harry was a little scary though. did u honestly write this pre- HBP cuz u've got some of the general ideas in there... like lavender being a flirt and fluer and bill getting married. just how come luna was outranked by krum and fleur...how do u spell that.... was Ginny even on the list?
still absolutely hilarious, 10 million out of 10
Author's Response: lol, thanks...yeah i really wrote it post hbp...i have another i did about the teachers post hbp but i'm having trouble getting it approved...glad you enjoyed it!
Lilly Green and the Deadly Duo by Lilly_Green
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Wow, I don't really like my summary touched, thanks: Lilly Green is a regualr girl in for a shock when she goes out onto her family's lake with her father: HARRY POTTER BOOKS ARE REAL!! What an adventure she'll have when she arrives.....friends, mystery, and...a little love?
Date: 11/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: The News
Very very interesting... I'm not quite sure I understand the timing and why this is in Historical Fics. You are trying to say it is current times and Lilly is a normal girl who likes the Harry Potter books, and JK Rowling was a Daily Prophet reporter who lived in the future but time-travelled back to write Harry Potter books? I'm very confused. That definitely needs some clarification. Besides from that, though, its great and if Chapter 1 was an indication of how good this story can be, I've gotta go read the other chapters.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I haven't responded quicker. My computor at home is a little disfunctional currently, so I have to obtain a computor from school to respond. The reason my fic is in Historical is for a reason that you'll find out in the sequel to this fic, "Lilly Green and the Majiktan Range", in the second chapter. Thanks for the flattery. I appreciate it. You are correct about the HP book part though. If you have any more questions or comments, and this goes to everyone, please just say so here in your review!!
Date: 04/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss
This is a really good poem for something so short! I noticed only one grammerical mistake- in line five, instead of writing "Slowly drowning," you wrote "SLowly." I should tell you, though, that line was very well written. My favorite line would have to be "As the Shadows swallow me." The fact you capitilized "Shadows" really made a bold yet graceful statement. This poem showed how a short poem with well-chosen words can overpower a long poem with meaningless words! Great job!
Author's Response: When I was typing it on the computer I think I was really excited about it and didn't really pay attention to what I was capitalizing... thus the SLowly and the "Shadows" being capitalized, I fixed the "L" though and I'll keep the Shadows the same. Thanks for the review!!!!
Draco's Reflection by Galadriel8891
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One-shot. Draco Malfoy has made a choice, and there is no turning back. But is it the right decision?
Date: 11/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: Draco's Reflection
That was really good cuz it probably was the reactions of every single death eater. they were the ones who made Harry and his friends go through all of that and though the Order has to endure death and pain, they're not guilty for that death and pain, and dont have to feel guilty like the order does. I doubt Voldy is guilty, but Draco definitely is. I just don't think Draco would kill anyone... well maybe but i think he would have feelings of regret during it not after. If he couldnt kill Dumbledore, what makes him kill innocent people? I liked the story though, it was very good. Made me cry almost.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I believe that the reason Draco could kill innocent people but not Dumbledore is this: he knew Dumbledore for six years, maybe not personally, but he knew his headmaster by name. And it's a lot harder to harm someone you know by name rather than those with whom you are unfamiliar. He wants to make his father proud, wants to prove himself, and is caught in up in the moment while he's doing it. And even if he has regrets, he still has to do it. That was confusing, I know...But at any rate, thanks for the review!
Date: 01/12/06 Title: None
This is the most randomest story I have ever read- hint, thats good! Excellent! I was laughing out loud... especially cuz Ron and Hermione named all thier kids after their exes! Funny! 10/10, definitely!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm glad you liked it!
The Mysterious Life of Severus Snape by marianna_224
Rated: Professors •Summary: Several stories have been told about Severus Snape, but were any of them true? In this story, you will hear the tale of a beautiful and seductive vampire and Severus Snape's darkest secret... one he doesn't even know himself!! Warning: HBP SPOILERS INSIDE!!!!!
Date: 11/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: Horrors of their lives
I liked your cliffhanger beggining but somehow, I can't imagine Snape's mother as being abusive. It always seemed to me that his father was the real mean one, especially considering the scene in the Pensieve in Order of the Pheonix. However, if you really focus in on that theme the idea has the potential to be a really dramatic story.
I also think you should have a little more emotion about the girl being adopted and her feelings about that. However, it was very well written and a great story/
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I appreciate any criticism I can get, even if it is negative! I'm glad you liked the chapter, because I'm working on the next one now. I'm having some problems, so it will be out as soon as I fix up the plot and work around some other details.
S'mores by Crystallic Rain
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: The truth about the fifth Gryffindor boy is revealed (Remus ate him), a comforter not-so-spontaneously combusts twice, James smells funny, and Peter likes chicken. And Natalie Blackwood snogs Sirius in a broom closet (yay inbred purebloods).
Date: 11/11/05 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three
"I crave fresh meat." Sorry i hafta say that, my sister and I can't say that without bursting into hysterical laughter.
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three
omg, that was my favorite fic of all time. the only part i didn't love was the ending. why did it have to end? hilarious! a million out of ten, definitely!