As I Lay In Your Arms recently got deleted when they rejected the second chapter, but it's back up now and i'm about to submit the second chapter now it's been sent to a BETA, so it shouldn't be rejected! Yay!
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slightly confusing, but just made me want to know what the hell they're on about even more, i.e. can't wait till the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, thsi chapter was confusion, wasn't it? Hmm...
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, typo central. Where had my mind gone....?
another brilliant chapter! poor ron, that was one nasty dream he had! was completely in shock when reading it, as i didnt exactly realise it was a dream until the chickens started talking :$ oooops *goes extremely red* he's not a happy bunny tho is he, ron? i hope things shall be lookin up in the next chapter *hinthint* lol :D
Author's Response: No, not a nice dream at all--at least I didn't think so, and neither did Ron. Hence the not-a-happy-bunny part! As for things looking up in the next chapter(s), umm..... maybe. You'll just have to wait and see.
oh my god! noooo! Please tell me Ron didn't die!! Tell me he lived because of something to do with love! oh god, i can't cope *weeps* u better get this next chapter up soon! u can't leave us hanging off this cliff like this! it's just not fair!
oooooh omg is that a dark mark on krum's arm?! amazing twist on your part if it is! excellent chapter once again, and i cant wait for the next! (one question though: who's elma?)
Author's Response: Elma is the kindly old broad from the Jewelry store, beckz4ron. Indeed, indeed. And, you\'ll have to wait and see.
man this chapter was ace! reeeealy funny too! loved it! update as soon as u can pleeeaaaase!
Author's Response: Well, I could update now, but I think I'll wait about a week, eh? Sorry. Thanks ever so much, though!
another brilliant chapter! it's about time there was an update! been dying to know what happens! i liked the slight humour Ginny brought to the story, but i also liked the slight angsty scene between remus, harry, dumbledore and the weasleys - very well written! and oo i think that the mystery woman is Narcissa Malfoy! :D am i right? go on! tell me i'm right! i'm always right :D update asap please! :D
Author's Response: sorry, it's definitely not narcissa, after all, she's a "ferret person". Thanks for the detailed review, my favorite! Let's just say that the mystery woman is not an OC, but hasn't been mentioned by JKR for awhile... hint hint.
u have to update!!! im dying to knw!!! im loving this story!!
Author's Response: I'm in the process of writing the next chapter, look for it in the new year! Thanks for the review!
hey i loved this story! it' so unbelievably ace! i love your writing style and the originality of your ideas too. the whole thing with the ring is just awesome, how u came up with it i dont know! i'd NEVER be able to think up such a thing as the whole gringotts and the ring thing. bloody brilliant, keep on writing and update asap please!
Author's Response: The whole ring thing came to me as I was typing that paragraph. Try writing your own, I never thought I would be submitting chapter 13 and have people still reading my fic. Glad you love and Thanks.
wow! lovin this story!! sooo funny! cant wait until the next chapter!!! keep em comin! and quick!
n can i just say to songbook99, that u reeeaaaly need to get a life, so what if they made a few typos, who doesnt?? u took waaay to long pointin em all out!
Author's Response: The next chapter with my beta. Hopefully we can get it done before the cutoff date for the holidays.
woah! i love this story! and this chapter was just awesome! i love your characterisation, it's almost perfect!! you've done it really well, and you have the right balance of all the genre's too! it has everything! it's just bludy amazing! tis the only way to describe it!! please write more asap!
Author's Response: Well thanks. My beta helps alot and keeps things right. Thanks mugglemomjackson.
another excellent chapter, the bit with Fawkes and Hedwig was very funny, and the two scenes between the two couples was very sweet too. i checked my favourites everyday for this chapter to see if had been updated, so was very happy when i saw it, and i can't wait for chapter 16 either, this final battle you've got lined up sounds like it's going to be incredibly good! well done 10/10
p.s. a few typos here and there, u called Ginny 'he' somewhere near the beginning i think, there were a few others but i can't remember them off the top of my head im afraid!
Author's Response: I always have typos, even after my beta has looked at the chapter. I'm just too rushed to get it posted.
wow i love this story, your style of writing is just brilliant, and your ideas are so cool too! i think you have the right balance of all the genre's too: romance, humour, action/adventure etc. its really well written, and i hope you write some more soon! i.e. update pleeeeeeeeeeaaase!
Author's Response: What a great review. Thanks. Truefully, I didn't realize I was covering all the bases.
yeah i love this story, n i realy want to know how it finishes to! please update!
hehe am lovin this chapter, and especially the reference to fawlty towers! i love tht show! keep the updates comin! u know we all love em!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm surprised some people noticed the reference, but it is really popular, so I should have known. lol, next chapter is in the works right now. No more agonizing periods of waiting, promise.
chapter was a lil short :( but it was really good too! cnt wait to find out who the fathers are! gd job again, keep em comin and asap!
wow, i loved the last 3 chapters, so happy for harry, yet so sad for ron!! in response to your authors note at the end of the last chapter, i think i'd prefer it if the chapters were shorter and therefore updated more often, im soooo impatient, im not good at waiting lol
oh my god i am loving this story! in response to your author's note at the end of chapter 19, DO MORE ON THIS ONE!! im sure your other story will be just as good, but you gotta finish this one too! dont listen to the people tht say they dnt like it or whatever it is they're saying, that's their problem!! what about the ones who want u to finish it!! finish it for us!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am SO glad to know that you like it. Because of the responses I have been getting on my author's note, I have decided to focus most of my attention on this story. Thanks for reviewing.
wooo u updated, loved this chapter, so mysterious with the already growing bump, can't wait to find out what happens! try and review as soon as u can! we'll love ya forever!
this chapter was really good, its good to see you've finally updated!! i think draco was a bit OOC, course i spose if everything you've ever known about life is falling around about your ears u r going to be a lil upset, just seemed a strange transition really, thats all. i absoloutly LOVED the "The Boy Who Lived To Be A Right Pain In Voldemort's Ass" thing aaaah that was brill! so so so funny, couldn't stop laughin! the mood swings are funny too! but realistically i dno whether they'd happen so quickly, i think it'd take a bit of time to go from one mood to the other... but its stil really ace, and the story is fab!! so keep writing!
wow, this story is ace! i like the whole american order thing too, and what a great way to bring em in! nice entrance i gotta say! keep up the good work! and pleeaaase update asap!
Author's Response: thanks, I'm trying not to go too over board with those two.