Age: 21
Lives: Minnesota, U.S.A. Utah when I'm at school, which is most of the time.
House: Ravenclaw
Hair: Long, wavy, brown
Eyes: Gray
Patronus: Fwooper
Boggart: Scissors
Animagus Form: octopus
Favorite Harry Quote: "There's no need to call me 'sir,' Professor."
Favorite non-central character: Helena Ravenclaw, aka The Grey Lady. She's the greatest!
You scored as Hermione Granger. You're one intelligent witch, but you have a hard time believing it and require constant reassurance. You are a very supportive friend who would do anything and everything to help her friends out.
Hermione Granger...95%
Ginny Weasley...90%
Albus Dumbledore...90%
Remus Lupin...85%
Harry Potter...80%
Sirius Black...65%
Ron Weasley...60%
Draco Malfoy...35%
Severus Snape...30%
Lord Voldemort...10%
Your Harry Potter Alter Ego Is...?
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So far I am very much enjoying your story; you are managing an AU fic very convincingly, and I positively adore Ellie!
However, I would like to express my fury at reading the part where you said that Harry couldn't fight Voldemort's Imperius curse. When Voldemort made him bow to him in the graveyard it was not through the Imperius Curse- he used a spell that put a sort of physical pressure on him and forced him to bow down. However, when Voldemort DID use Imperio on Harry to make him answer him, Harry was able to resist and fight off the curse completely within seconds.
Otherwise, very well done, especially in your developement of a brand-new, very lovable character and in making your Potter plot-warps believable and make sense; and I'm looking forward to finishing the story!
I really liked this! It's so refreshing to see Harry/Ginny shippings that aren't OOC or just angsty the whole time. Loved it!
Oooohhh... me likes. This is very interesting. Can't wait to read more... tomorrow. I'm way tired.
Nice. Short, sweet, and sincere.
Author's Response: Thank you!
AHHHH!!!! I need ANSWERS, dangit!! Although you're getting remarkably good at leaving us wanting more... we want more! Something needs to HAPPEN! But I still love your idea and hope this story turns out as well as I have hoped from the beginning!
Author's Response: Ask questions, and you\'ll get answers. :) Something will happen now... we\'re getting close to the climax of the story folks!
AHHHHH!!! THESE CLIFFHANGERS ARE SO UNBEARABLE!! You just keep getting better and better at that!! I'm so happy with the frequent updates, and I can't wait for the next one!!
Mallory
Thank you for the great story. I'll admit I was a little disappointed with these last two chapters- they were kind of anti-climactic and sort of a let-down after all that has been going on with the rest of the story. I didn't like that Harry was pretty much turning over to Voldemort's mindset of fearing death and wanting to avoid it no matter what and all that. But other than that, I've really enjoyed the story and I can't wait to see more from you!
Author's Response: Aww, I\'m sad these last two chapters didn\'t meet the standards you were hoping to see. :( I agree, it was quite anti-cliamtic but I was hoping for that effect - Harry didn\'t really TURN to Voldemort\'s mindset - there was a temptation to do so... the last lines when the snake was asking him to join it and he just lay down and slept - those were supposed to be symbolic - Harry might have a fear, but he won\'t succumb that easily. I\'m glad you liked the story in general though!
Very good story so far... this is a creative take. Just wanted to let you know, though, that just before Harry and Hermione realized where they were you wrote that they had learned about Salem, Oregon instead of Salem, Massachussetts. Otherwise, I'm very much enjoying your story!
Whoa man. I can't take this. Thanks again for another great chapter! Can't WAIT for the next one!
Author's Response: Yay for liking the chapter. Like I said, I couldn\'t see it getting many reviews. It was difficult to write. Next chapter is going in the queue soon. This recent update took a while - the chappie had been in the queue for ten days.
I'm really liking this so far! You better keep Douglas in the story, and I definitely think that Harry and Ron should walk in on him doing magic or something and have it come out that they're all wizards. Then maybe they can figure out some way to get back.
Gahhh!!! What did the amulet say!! I MUST know, I hope we get to find out eventually! And man, this was a good chapter. Very well-thought-out and written. Thank you!!
AHHH!!!! This had BETTER turn out okay in the end! Of course, we all know it will because of that one interlude-like chapter, but GEEZ!! This alternate-reality thing has got me going wild! But I love it! But I HATE IT!! Man, that chapter took a lot out of me. I think I need some chocolate. Thanks for the great read, and keep 'em coming! You've got a fan in me!!
Author's Response: Hopefully it will turn out all okay... hopefully. The end is near guys, very near. I think I\'ve got three or four more chapters coming before it all finally ends. Seems impossible that it is almost over. Thanks for the great review!
Well, you definitely get the "longest explaination chapter" award for this one! I've enjoyed the story... I hope there will be at least one more chapter!
"My opinion has always been that if you lose something from your pocket, even after taking all necessary precautions against such a loss, then the object in question has probably left your pocket for a very good reason."
This was my favorite part of the chapter- it sounds JUST like something Dumbledore would say!
Great story!
Author's Response: Well, I can tell you now that there IS one more chapter and that it will go into the queue today! Glad you liked the chapter - it was indeed a lengthy explanation!
Excellent! Hurry up with the next chapter!! The wait is killing me already!!
Okay, so Rebecca... is she going to come into the story? Because she should. She should be a regular muggle who was just TRYING to do witchcraft but couldn't, you know because she was curious. That's how it was with a lot of the people in Salem: the huge uproar about witchcraft made them curious, so some of them tried it, and sometimes they'd use these spices or whatever that were drugs that would make them hallucinate... and then of course they would get caught. And who the heck are those people at the end?!? GAHH!
So anyhoo... yeah, Rebecca should be in Lynn on her way back to Salem, and they run into her. And what's all this business with "why twice?" I'm just dying of curiosity!
And also- I'm getting pretty tired of Ron not facing up to the facts. Give him a good, swift kick in the... nevermind.
WAUGH!!! How could you DO this to me? After all we've been through?!? Post a chapter like this with that sort of cliff?! Man, you really know how to make me nuts. Really, really fantastic chapter, though I'm super confused and I hope there'll be MUCH more info soon.
Ack! Who's in Salem!? What's with their need to kill some random dog? What's going to happen to Harry? This is killing me! I'm liking the fast updates, though, keep 'em coming!
HUH? Thoroughly confused. Excellent cliff-hanger, and thanks much for updating so quickly, it was thoroughly satisfying!
By the way, you chapters are a mite short. Couldn't you make them longer so that we don't have to wait so long for such a tiny bit of plot?
Thanks, I'm still much enjoying the story!
OH MY GOODNESS!! This was absolutely FANTASTIC, and I am completely and utterly satisfied at last. It's sort of like the last HP book will be- bittersweet. There's no more to look forward to, but it's what I've been wanting for a very long time. Thank you for a fantastic and moving story that genuinely deserves the name of Harry Potter.
Your fan,
Mallory
Gahh! That was so... VERY... well done. I applaude your creativity and originality, not to mention your talent for creating tear-jerkers! I absolutely CANNOT WAIT for Chapter 12! Hurry! By the way, I was thrilled when I got the email that you had updated. You without a doubt earned your spot on my favorites list!
HURRY! I'm dying of curiosity!
You know you're a dedicated Harry Potter fan when you write fan fiction about it, and especially if you can write that good of a poem about a single part of it! Very well done!