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01/23/06

Reviews by LadyLuna

Tarrying Hope by IsisBlack

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: He doesn’t know, he hasn’t realized it yet; his closest friend was always there for him. She was always there for him.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/28/06 Title: Chapter 3: Tarrying Hope

Wow... that was extraordinarily depressing. but well-written. but too sad!

Torn by Beth Brown

Rated: Professors •
Summary: “You have no right Hermione,” he said in a broken whisper. “No right at all.” he repeated. “I know,” she said. “I’m sorry.” Harry shook his head. “No.” He ignored the silent question in her eyes. “I am.” And he kissed her. NOTICE: Further chapters of this story are no longer going to be posted on this site. If any of you are interested go to (portkey.org). My thanks to everyone who has reviewed on this site. You're all wonderful. Here's the link: http://fanfiction.portkey.org/index.php?act=read&storyid=3436

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Stolen Kiss

This was SUCH a good story! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! And by soon I mean five minutes ago!!!

Author's Response: As you wish. http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/3436/11

Mind Games by painterchica

Rated: •
Summary: Companion piece to "Kiss Me". Wherein rumors are started, Sirius is manipulative, and Remus is not a coward...

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mind Games

The Poncy Pricks thought that was an absolutely spiffing idea.

Ohhhh, dear!

*wipes tears of laughter from eyes*

Too bloody funny for words, really.

From the Notebooks of Hermione by SpellBound05

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Draco is so ooc- love it!!! but the beginning is so sad...

April Rain by Kimberley

Rated: Professors •
Summary: ***COMPLETED!***Five years ago, half way through her third year at Hogwarts, Regan Jayden was expelled for reasons only she and a very select few know. But now that she's been allowed to return-- under certain terms-- in what would have been her graduating year, will she be able to regain the trust of her fellow Hogwarts students, and of herself?

Excerpt from story: Merlin, he was going soft, Draco thought as he tried not to grimace. He'd start spouting off poetry in a minute if he wasn't careful. This whole love thing was sending him round the twist.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 06/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Homecoming

Yep, TUoBD and AR definitely need a crossover.

REALLY.

*giggles*

~Aubrey

Hold Me Once by Inspireroflove9191

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! Remeber the spell Dolohov put on Hermione in the Department of Mysteries. Well, see how it effects Harry. Will love conquer evil? Read or I'll tell Voldy!

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 6: Defensa de Amor

Er, the night RON surprised him on his birthday??? Sorry hon, but you really really need a beta! It was Hermione, not Ron! but other than that it was really good

Author's Response: i have a beta, he's doing fine, i guess either ron's name magically came up or me and my beta missed it

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 9: So Long and Goodnight

Hah- I knew I recognized Helena! But still- so sad...

The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?

Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 7: Weekend At Draco's

You have now caused me to get in trouble with the librarian. I waas simply not doing what I was assigned to be doing on the computer, and reading this instead, when you soooo cruelly forced me to burst out laughing in the middle of the library for no apparent reason! Well, it wasn't apparent to them. But if they would have read it, then it would have been quite apparent that this is totally hilarious! And by the way, how do penguins write lines? they haven't got fingers! but aaaanywaaaay....I love Malfoy's lines! and I must know how that spell goes- I can think of quite a few people that ought to do exactly as I suggest and drop dead. But not in the middle of the hallway, I suppose. See? I have learned my lines well! Utterly 20/10.

Author's Response: You know, I've almost blown an eye out of my head from having to stifle laughter in the library after reading fanfics. Or randomly snorted and looked around real fast to make sure no one heard me. So I know where you're coming from. But to answer your question: Harry was magically turned into a penguin, so he can write despite having no fingers. And it's good to know the lesson is sinking in that dying in the halls is bad. Sorry though, few know how the spell for The Power Of Suggestion works. Not even I know. But some one in the story does....

Hermione Granger and the Love Potion by hermione4harry

Rated: •
Summary: Parvati makes a love potion, but who is she planning on giving it to? Hermione finds out, but will it be too late? Please read and review, I like to hear how I'm doing!

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/28/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

That was so good! I loved ron's little hand-sticking spell...I could use one of those!

Hogwarts, Meet the Marauders! by Kelsid

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In this sequel to Harry's Our What???, James and Lily have time-travelled to the past and finally found out the truth about who their son is. Meanwhile, in their true time-frame, the Marauders have concocted a plan to rescue James and Lily. But when they arrive in Harry's time, they realize they can't get back and must seek the aid of their older counterparts.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: In Which the Plot Actually Progresses

Oh dear... I am soooo confused! although I love the truth or dare scene. But I must know what she had to do! uuuupdaaate!

The Upside of Being Down by Kimberley

Rated: Professors •
Summary: *COMPLETED!*What happens when you put a hopelessly "romantic" man-hussy and a girl with a soft spot for bedtime activities (not THOSE activities, silly!) together in a dark bedroom? Well, I don't happen to know either, so I suppose we'll find out together, won't we? Come with me, Tia C. Spencer, on a lovely ride through the countryside... er, lakeside... okay, so we won't actually be riding NEXT to anything, but it will be lovely, I promise you that. How can it not be, with me as your illustrious (and quite possibly mad) companion?

And no, contrary to beliefs very likely impressed upon you by this summary, I'm not a gormless prat.

Well... not entirely.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 04/04/07 Title: Chapter 25: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

*sighs* I miss Tia! Both the adult Tia and the school Tia... can't believe they're really both dead. I forget that, then I reread this, then I remember it, and it's like it hits me all over again. And a favorite character's death is JUST AS TRAUMATIC as any other persons.

fdskfl. Author cruelty.

~Faith

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/25/06 Title: Chapter 19: Bigger Than Two Quaffles

You are absolutely the most bloody fabulous writer i have read here. And I believe that you will owe me ten percent of an algebra grade, since i stayed up the entire night reading this, and will very likely fall asleep in my test tomorrow! But it was sooo worth it.

Dear Dumby by Oppungo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What happens when Dumbledore has his latest "brilliant" idea, to start an advice column, and call it 'Dear Dumby'? Letters from some of our favourite Hogwarts students, some of our not so favourite Hogwarts students, some not even Hogwarts students at all, and, of course, lots of madness!

Pre-HBP for obvious reasons!
Nominee for the Best Humour Award in the Quicksilver Quill Awards! Many thanks to all who voted for it!

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 5: Ah, The High Road

I love Dumby- he is sooo cliche agony aunt! but- er- how can one be jealous of dress robes? just curious. Poor Snape- no defense against the dark arts job for him! mwahaha...Highly amusing altogether.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you thought it amusing!! Well, you see, (I think) Parvati is quite shallow, so when Dean doesn't comment on her dress robes, she's upset, and doesn't think he likes her any more. So she decides to make him jealous, by dating someone else, as it says that jealousy will force out true feelings. In this case, Dean's true feelings on her dress robes. I hope that makes (some sort of!) sense, sorry if I confused you!! But I'm glad you liked it nevertheless!!

Misguided Hero by DayDreamer45

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry returns for his yearly Christmas visit, ten years after Voldemorts death. (P.S. Okay, so my second chapter was too short, but www.harrypotterfanfiction.com accepted it. So if you have been waiting forever, go there and read the next chapter!)

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Another Christmas at the Burrow

absobloodylutely fabulous! but I do fully agree with livingbreathingdream... more soon, please? prreeettyyyyy pleeaaasseee?? aaany minute now. waiting away. being veeryyyy patient. Gaaahhh! now!!! must... know... what happens... must...know...what happens...

The best present of all by Nieriel Phoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Answer to challenge #5 by Nieriel Phoenix of Hufflepuff house. Christmas eve is aproaching, and Tonks and Lupin are getting ready. Parties are arranged, presents bought and made...but which is the best present of all????? Takes place during HBP. Tonks and Lupin's relationship and the Weasleys' Christmas party are altered.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

They are adorable... and well-written, too! I love the present that Tonks gave Lupin.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!! I'm really happy you liked the story and the writing.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

and I also think that if you ever run out of ideas for a story, you should write tonks' book that she gave him!

Author's Response: That's a great idea!!! I think I'll give it a try - no promises, though, because it would be quite difficult.

Accidentally in Love by Alessa

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fred and Geroge's new sweets bring unexpected surprises to the consumers! This fic is definatley AU, and I in no way support this ship. It was a challenge that I was up for taking. I hope you all enjoy!

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: none

I am a totally dedicated Harry/Hermione shipper, so I now officially love Fred and George!! (yeah, yeah, I know Harry and Hermione aren't going to get together, but I don't really care what you say, so shush!) I hope you write another chapter soon!

Of Love and Destiny by Geekchic

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Exerpt: "Harry walked to Hermione and hugged her. She kissed him on the cheek and they stood holding one another for a few minutes, taking each other in. It had been a long time since they had been able to relax and they both were glad for the moment." *Chapter 2 is finally up! Please read and review! I would love to hear how I'm doing!*

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Old Friends and New Meanings

Story was good, but ahem. HERMS!!!! gaahh. so not hermione. Love the hermione apparating in on G and H. And please. Don't call her Herms in the next chapter.

Light of Sunrise by rivers of gold

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Many questions remain unanswered about Lily and James. Was James always an arrogant bully? Did Lily really hate James, or was there something more behind her angry reply at the lake? And whoever said Lily was a bossy bookworm? Join the marauders and their friends as they go through Hogwarts, and experience pain and joy, tears and laughter...as they realize that no matter how dark the night may get, the Light of Sunrise will always follow.

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 06/10/06 Title: Chapter 2: Bright Horizons

It's a bit...Mary-Sue -ish plotwise so far... too idyllic. But we shall see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Ah. I wondered when someone would say that. ;) I totally agree with you...I think it\'s even a bit boring, right now. But maybe you could give the poor kids a break? It\'s their first year, you know. And Remus and Sirius don\'t strike me as being completely happy all the time...~rog :D

Late Night Chat by fawkes_07

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Sirius Black discovers that being a godfather isn't always easy, but it can certainly be rewarding...

Reviewer: LadyLuna Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Late

That's... well, really confusing.

*frowns perplexedly*

But good- yes, definitely good.

*nods*

Author's Response: Hmmm...can you be a little more specific? Hard to fix a problem if I\'m not sure exactly what it is... :)