Okie for all those who want to read my Marauders Map fic (4th chappie - Albus Dumbledore is almost done + 3rd chappie - Harry Potter is up) you can find it here :
www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=200283
Moderators wont accept it here *cries*
Another fic is also up :)
Good! I think the witch is Bellatrix? I'm late I know but there's no harm in guessing, is there?!!
Author's Response: You\'re right. Yeah, a little late, though.
Hehe! Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks!
*Gasp* Such a nice poem! I'm adding this to my favourites! I love it! You have described the whole thing in a single poem, hats off to you for that! My fav line were too many to tell, however i liked this best:He is the most evil wizard,
A man with no heart.
Tom Marvolo Riddle:
Lord Voldemort.
100/10
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I love getting grest reviews like this! Thanks again!
I really liked it! Does it tell us about Hogwarts after Voldemort's victory? Or Harry won, but the castle was destroyed in the fight?
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. It doesn\'t tell of either victory. I wasn\'t really thinking of that while I wrote this. I wasn\'t really sure what I was writing when I did this poem, but, yes, Hogwarts was destroyed during the Final Battle. Again, thanks for reviewing!
Nice rhyming!
Author's Response: thank you :)
I really enjoyed it. I'm adding it to my faves!
I really like your style of writing. You've described everything perfectly, like the first paragraph- it's so nicely written, the description of how the people were sitting , it really impressed me!
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter :)
~Bookwormy
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words of encouragement! Unfortunetly you\'re going to have to wait a little while for the next chapter, I was unale to work on it for a while when I broke my forearm, but I started again yesterday. I\'ll probably be able send it in in 2-3 days!
Lolz...that was so funny....I loved the last line...and Draco's insult was so clever hehe...awesome story.
Hahaha...nice...
Nice! Though I can't see Draco to be confused...he knows what he has to do...taunt!!!!!!!
;)
I didn;'t know cinakwins (?) were written like this, i mean, first the name, then the qualities of the character, and then the sur name. Nice style!
Author's Response: thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate it! As for being confused, that was just sort of my opinion. i\'m still trying to believe he has a good side... thanks again! :D
I really liked the subject you've written the story on-- a squib convicted of witchcraft. I mean, I was so sad when I read that. People can be so unjust sometimes.
But I hope you understand that critiscim will always be there. Though the subject of your fic is excellent, I didn't quite like the plot. You should've made the circumstances such, that it seemed she did do witchcraft, and was blamed. Here it's so obvious she didn't do it. The doctor had no reason at all to blame her. And also, she had, as you have told, lived with the family for 8 years. Naturally, some attachment and trust must have been present between her and Alice. So Alice couldn't have believed the doctor so easily, she MUST have said something, protecting Ann.
The reader knows that Ann is going to be blamed for witchcraft, and tries to satisfy his/her curiosity by finding out what the raeson is, and all he gets as a reason is a lame misunderstanding of the doctor.
Moreover, the reader would have been even more sympathetic with Ann if she hadn't rattled about her own sadness and grief and how dreadful her life was and all that.
I hope you aren't much offended. This is all for the betterment of your story, after all! Again, as I have already said, I do love the subject of your story, and wish you all the best for more of your lovely stories!
Author's Response: No, I\'m not offended at all! I love critisism, noramlly you just get told if the stroy is bad or good instead of a lenghty \'report\'. Thanks alot!
yippeeee an update!! OMG Draco Hermione don't look like they're going to fall for each other after this chap...I suggest u improve the format of chapters and arrange them in paragraphs so that it's easy 2 read...plzzz update soon with a longer chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, they still have some major differences to sort out, don\'t they? But, you\'ll see where everything goes eventually.
And I don\'t know why the submissions do that. When I submit them, they\'re double spaced and pretty. But when they get okayed, I don\'t know what happens...I\'m going to try something different. Hopefully that\'ll work next time.
Thanks for your thoughts!
Oh, please please x infinity update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha, I\'ll try! It all depends on the mods, though. Cross your fingers for me!
Yay!!!!! An update!!!!! I am sooo glad Drcao reached hermione in time....and that edgar's memory was wiped off..mwhahahaa....anyaways plz update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was a close one though!
Thanks for your review!
Hi...well that was a very beautifully-written story! You know it's the first time I'm reading a romantic story here, I'm usually into humourous ones, but I'm glad I read this!
I appreciate your style of writing; it's very artistic, kind of, like a poet's. You know, like describing Ginny's blue eyes and the whole rose-affair. It was very nicely described, as I've already said.
I do hope I'm correct in understanding this, but doesn't this story tell us that Ron and Hermione did get together, but not Harry and Ginny? I mean, I'm not entirely sure, but the way you've written that their hands dropped and it was over and that it is better to love and lose than to not love at all, made me think.
Anyways, enough of my randomness...lol.....great story and I think you should definitely submit some of the stories you've got written down (yeah I saw ur profile!)
Author's Response: I love long reviews! So I give them long responses. ;)
Thanks for giving my story a chance even though it was outside of your usual genre. I\'m glad you liked it; I would hate to give romance a bad name! I used to read only romances, but then I read one comedy and I\'ve been reading them ever since.
I was experimenting with a new style when I wrote this one; it is very more a romantic, poetry-like style than my usual way of writing. I was really trying to focus on description and setting.
You\'re right, Ron and Hermione did get together, but Harry and Ginny did not. I do think they\'ll eventually get back together, but Harry\'s got a job to do, and they won\'t re-start their relationship until he does it. Hopefully he\'ll hurry up, and she\'ll be there waiting for him. :)
Don\'t worry, I\'m random all the time! ;) Oh, my pointless, boring profile...if only you\'d seen the original, you\'d think better of me! :D
Author's Response: I love long reviews! So I give them long responses. ;)
Thanks for giving my story a chance even though it was outside of your usual genre. I\'m glad you liked it; I would hate to give romance a bad name! I used to read only romances, but then I read one comedy and I\'ve been reading them ever since.
I was experimenting with a new style when I wrote this one; it is very more a romantic, poetry-like style than my usual way of writing. I was really trying to focus on description and setting.
You\'re right, Ron and Hermione did get together, but Harry and Ginny did not. I do think they\'ll eventually get back together, but Harry\'s got a job to do, and they won\'t re-start their relationship until he does it. Hopefully he\'ll hurry up, and she\'ll be there waiting for him. :)
Don\'t worry, I\'m random all the time! ;) Oh, my pointless, boring profile...if only you\'d seen the original, you\'d think better of me! :D
Author's Response: I love long reviews! So I give them long responses. ;)
Thanks for giving my story a chance even though it wasn\'t your usual genre. I\'m glad you liked it; I would hate to give romance a bad name! I used to only read romances, but then I read one comedy and now I read them all the time!
You\'re right, Ron and Hermione did get together, but Harry and Ginny did not. I do think they\'ll eventually get back together, but Harry has a job to do, and they won\'t re-start their relationship \'till he\'s done it. Hopefully he\'ll hurry up and she\'ll be there waiting for him. :)
Don\'t worry, I\'m random all the time. ;) Oh, my pointless, boring profile...if only you\'d seen the original, you might think better of me. :D
Author's Response: Grr, my stupid, stupid computer! *kicks computer* Sorry.
Very very nice! I really enjoyed it, almost ALL the lines were funny! This story was very unbad. Wait...that's not a word...but you get the idea!!!!!
10/10 AND a place on my faves.
Author's Response: Unbad, ha! That will be my new favorite non-word. Thank you so much! You rock!
Nice! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Actually, I did picturise Hermione as stumbling her goblets of juice, and I've used this in a story of mine. It's not posted, though.
Another thing, in your summary, you've used the word -- "definately". That's not the correct spelling. It's definitely, and almost all people write it as you've .
Author's Response: Oops! Thank you for telling me! I\'ll go fix it!!! I hope to have the next chapter up pretty soon! Thanks for reading!!!
I loved it! I like most of your poems, they're so creative! :)
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked it! I was afraid it wouldn\'t be any good since I haven\'t written a poem in a while. I\'m taking a creative writing class, yet I never thought of my poetry as creative writing. It’s always been just something I do. Thankyou!
Wow, I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!! And I'm also sad it's going to be the last :( I love it how frequently you update...you get a hint, don't you?
Author's Response: Thanks, Bookwormy! Although I could update faster if the mods weren\'t so cotton-pickin\' slow!
Hi Schmergo,
Congrats on being runner up! You're an amazing author as I always say. =D
Bookwormy
♥
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! How nice!