I am a major Harry Potter fan. I love writing (obviously), especially about Harry Potter. Feel free to ask questions or make comments.
The reason that I have not made attempts at working on my fanfiction is because I was writing ANOTHER STORY, and that took up all of 2007. (That story can be found here: http://www.lulu.com/content/1758424 ) Hopefully, I'll be writing more on my fanfiction, because I am still madly in love with Harry Potter and this concept. :D
It was pretty good. I like the idea of it, but it seemed that everyone ended their sentences with an exclamation mark. I dunno... it just seemed a bit OoC to me. But, whatever. Write on.
You are such a brilliant writer. Please keep this coming, I'm in love with it! 12/10.
Ooh! I love this story! Can't wait for more! However, I noticed that you put "s" instead of "z" in "organized" and in "realized." Just thought I'd let you know. --Winks-- 9.999/10
Hah, that rocked the stripes right out of my socks. Keep it coming! 11/10.
Author's Response: You now have stripeless socks? Such a pity. :D
Yayness! It makes me laugh. Harrdy har har.... Yes. Love it... --Keeps rambling on and on-- 10/10
Author's Response: Rambling... hmmm... sounds like me! :)
Funny funny. I seriously laughed. That, my good friend, is a very marvy twist that you put in there. Since this takes place in 1912, that would make it, what... --starts to ponder-- Draco's great-great-great grandfather or something? Am I right? I have no clue if I'm right or not. Someone please stop me from my insanity...
Author's Response: I will stop you from your insanity! I will... uh... never mind. I'm not so good with stopping insanity, seeing as I'm insane myself. Wow! You laughed? Awesome! I am happy that I have a marvy twist!
I love it!! Fred and George are two of my favourite characters. I would love to have "unkas" like them!!! 10/10 ... Would you mind giving me a review? Thankies!!
Author's Response: I have "unkas" like them, that's why I love them so much! Thanks for the review, look for chapter two soon!
I confused. Who's Verity? Also, I thought that the girls were 4...? Maybe I'm just insane. But, whatever. Really good!! Hair balls... Honestly.... --Walks away laughing and shaking head-- 10/10
Author's Response: Verity is Fred and George's assistant at WWW (HBP)I will have to check their ages, even JKR is allowed to goof up *blushes* If I had some hair balls, I would so give them to my sister *evil grin* thanks for the review! Yay!
I'm laughing my socks off. Hil. Ar. I. Ous. (If you can read that right, I tip my hat to you.) The prank--to funny for words. I am seriously anticipating the next chappie!! Hurry hurry!! 10/10
Yay! I love it. ^^ Very funny. Keep writing! 10/10 (Can't wait for the prank!!!!)
That was fantastic! I loved the way the story takes place from everyone's point of view. Very heart-wrenching. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it =D
I hope you keep reading, the fourth chapter should be up soon. =D
I agree with the last person who put up a comment. They are very deep. Hmm... I like it though. =)
Author's Response: I'm glad so many people have liked the chapter names (okay, only two, but still) I like them, even though I still have problems with the first one. New lives... ah well. Thanks for reviewing!
--Starts jumping up and down in chair from excitment-- That...was... BRILLIANT! I seriously was laughing my head off. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be waiting!
Author's Response: THANKS!!! You are BRILLIANT for reviewing!! I am going to submit chapter 2 soon - sometime within the next week probably. If you have any ideas please let me know because I'd love to hear them! Thank you for reviewing :)
Still brilliant! Waiting for more! 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved your story too, I can\'t wait to read more :)
That was really good. Nicely written. You kind of leave it open... Are you going to make another chapter? That would make it kind of interesting. Yes... I can see it now... Dudley beating Harry to get more information about the wizarding world... Hmm...
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wrote this back in September 2005, and since then have had reviews on various sites and lots of people have suggested I write more, so I am considering it. I just need ideas and inspiration...also if I do, then I think it would be a sequel, a seperate fic rather than a chaptered one.
Thankies :)
Tabby xxx
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wrote this back in September 2005, and since then have had reviews on various sites and lots of people have suggested I write more, so I am considering it. I just need ideas and inspiration...also if I do, then I think it would be a sequel, a seperate fic rather than a chaptered one.
Thankies :)
Tabby xxx
I loved it! I have also kind of wondered about Luna's life; she seems so nice! I love her.... Anyhoodles, I loved that Luna's mom was Fenir Greyback's sister. Nice twist. I'm waiting for more!! 10/10... Also, would you mind putting a review on mine? I'd be very happy...! LOL.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad someone liked it and yes I will definately read and review your stories ;) Thanks again you've made me happy :)
Erm. It was pretty good, for the most part. Like two reviews ago, I thought that it rushed just a tad. Not too much, but kind of straightfoward. Kinda OoC for Ron and Hermione. But, I loved it all the same. =) 8/10!
8O I want moooooore!! Like your Beta said, Ginny naughty, Nettle rocks.... I love it!!! Keep it coming!! You are sooo going on my favourites!! 15/10
Author's Response: More will come, it\'s just about done, then beta, then queue. Yeah, I couldn\'t help but do that with Ginny, I mean if only to be nice for this first bit cause things will soon suck. Nettle has been ratttling around in my head for some time now, I\'m very happy with how he has come out on paper, and yeah you\'ll definately see him again later on. Wow, I\'m already on somebodies favourites, that rocks. And 15/10 damn it\'s so good it\'s a numerical immpossiblity, awesome, but you\'re making me nervous. Thank you so much.