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Don't Cry Harry by laurazstar
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A little thing about HArry losing his godfather, Sirius Black.
Date: 05/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Cry Harry
That's really sad but really good! Keep on writing and good job! ~HStarRunner23
Date: 05/20/06 Title: None
Oh gosh it's already good! Keep writing! It's awesome. I've always liked stories about Neville and I've never really found one that's super good. I have a feeling this will be one of the few. :) ~HStarRunner23
Date: 05/20/06 Title: None
Oh my gosh.... What a scary chapter! I actually had to hold on to something and I looked over my shoulder twice in fear! Very very very very well written and keep writing! I would love another chapter! This is going up into favorites for sure! I really got the feel of how nervous and clumsy Neville would be and how evil Bellatrix and Narcissa would also be. Gran was really good. It's exactly how I pictured her and she got the exact amount of anger. You've portrayed her character very well. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I have one little nitpick though... Wizards don't have lightbulbs, do they? I thought they only used their wands for light and you said Neville flipped a switch so I wasn't quite sure really. But otherwise, good writing! ~HStarRunner23
Date: 05/20/06 Title: None
Oh my gosh.... What a scary chapter! I actually had to hold on to something and I looked over my shoulder twice in fear! Very very very very well written and keep writing! I would love another chapter! This is going up into favorites for sure! I really got the feel of how nervous and clumsy Neville would be and how evil Bellatrix and Narcissa would also be. Gran was really good. It's exactly how I pictured her and she got the exact amount of anger. You've portrayed her character very well. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I have one little nitpick though... Wizards don't have lightbulbs, do they? I thought they only used their wands for light and you said Neville flipped a switch so I wasn't quite sure really. But otherwise, good writing! ~HStarRunner23
Feathers by Kestrel
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Fawkes has died, and Dumbledore resorts to his Pensieve for some happier memories of the bird's life. One-shot.
Date: 05/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Feathers
Oh gosh I'm going to cry now. That is so sad and I need to go cry. Very well written and I would be devestated if a pet like Fawkes died. Good one-shot, I loved it. ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thanks! Isn\'t Fawkes brilliant?
Ladies' Man by Berylla Chubb
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Post-Hogwarts--Harry is meeting Ginny in Hogsmeade for a date, but not before he encounters a young fan...
Date: 05/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
AWWWW! That was sooooo cute!!!! AHHHH! I can't write anymore except for great job! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thank you!
Some Seasons Are Better Than Others by JessicaH
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione had always liked the autumn. Now, when spending it at the Burrow in the aftermath of the war she realises why it is her favorite.
Date: 05/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
This was a really good story! No dialogue, just thoughts. A really serene and peaceful story, which is a break from all of that nagging and yelling they do at each other and in other stories. Great way to portray their current state/relationship with each other. Well done and keep up the good story writing!~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it. Thank you.
Date: 05/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
This was a really good story! No dialogue, just thoughts. A really serene and peaceful story, which is a break from all of that nagging and yelling they do at each other and in other stories. Great way to portray their current state/relationship with each other. Well done and keep up the good story writing!~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m so glad you liked the story and that you liked the tone of the story. :D
"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Date: 05/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
Oh how sad... I don't think I can type anymore it was so sad.............. ~HStarRunner23
3 A. M. Confessions by msbigbad
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Over 3500 reads and counting!!! _____Okay so I had said this was to become my version of book seven but I just don't like that they are already together I want to develop that over a series if I'm going to write one, not smack dab at the beggining so I will post the sequel to this story and that will be it. I will write a book seven but I want it to be better than what this story allows!! So look for Harry Potter and the Final Riddle later!! The sequel to this story (5 A.M. Revelations) has been validated sp please go read!
Summary:
It's late at the Burrow the night after Bill and Fleur's wedding and Hermione has alot of things on her mind that she needs to get out. Will a certain redhead be able to help her or will he be as cluless as ever? Please Review!! this is my first HP fic!
Please look at the banner I made for this story!! it's on my author profile!!
Date: 05/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: 3 A. M. Confessions
Very good story... I loved it! Good job and I think it was very well written. Keep up the good work!~HStarRunner23
Rediscovered by MysticFay
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry's sixth year has just ended, and his life couldn't be worse. The fate of Voldemort is entirely in his hands, and no one else can help him, or so he thinks... The loss of a loved one leaves behind a special gift for Harry and brings a stranger into Hogwarts' midst.
Date: 03/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Stranger
Oh my gosh! I thought it was very surprising and super good! Although, when I think of how Harry was after Sirius died, I would've thought that he might have acted angrier than he did, but I still loved the story and everything! It was a good twist at the end. I give it a 10! Keep up the good work!
~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I glad you enjoyed the story. :D Well, I have Harry kind of acting like that because he\'s surrounded by Ron and Hermione, and they\'re kind of blocking out the depressing thoughts about Dumbledore. I guess you could kind of say they\'re like a drug for Harry, blocking out his pain. Plus, I think Harry\'s trying to control his emotions a little more... Anyway, thanks for the compliment on my writing. ^_~
Why Do I Love You? by thepatronus_n_thecharm
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: We know James fell for Lily, but why? Lily doesn't want to know either. But she has to know. Join the Marauders and Lily's friends in a series of events that begins the ups and downs of loathing, loving, and life.
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Hey, should I keep this story going? I'm thinking of doing a series of one shots. Review and vote yes or no to keep this story alive. Thanks!
Date: 03/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prongs' Prank
Hey! This is a really nice story! Some of it could have been described a little better, but still, this is one of the better stories I've read! Keep up the awesome work and I'll keep on reading your fun stories!
~HStarRunner23~
Author's Response: AWESOME!!! Do you really watch Homestar Runner cartoons??? I love Strongbad emails. This is so cool. Anyway thanks for the review. The next chapter (which is in queue) is much more detailed (though not alot longer). I bet you'll love it.
Date: 03/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prongs' Prank
Hey! This is a really nice story! Some of it could have been described a little better, but still, this is one of the better stories I've read! Keep up the awesome work and I'll keep on reading your fun stories! ~HStarRunner23~
Deceptive Appearances by JessicaH
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Historic AU, set a few years before the American civil war
Charles Weasley is a man with many talents and one that could easily find a wife far more beautiful than Miss Granger. Yet she is the one he wants, the only question is – does she want him?
Date: 05/22/06 Title: Chapter 8: Revelations
How sad... Very well written, of course, but so very sad. I had hoped he would tell her before she found out. I hope he can explain it to her before she runs away from him. I'm very nervous now. Oh well... I'll have to wait. Very good chapter and I have no constructive criticism. Such a unique story is hard to find! Keep me posted! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m so glad you like the story so much. I\'ve updated now, so hopefully it won\'t be too long.
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 5: Third Time’s the Charm
This story is still super good! Still not rushed at all, which I like a lot, and I love the plot so far. Although I do miss the magic and Hogwarts, I am glad there is a creative and fun twist to the story. I like how it's in the 1800s. Great job again!
~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m so happy you like the story.
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 10: Confrontation
Aww, that's it? I want more! I'm still hungry for your story!!! Boo Hoo, I'm sad it's over... But, it was really good, and that satisfies me. I think you should write a sequel. Oh, please do! It would make me oh so happy! Keep me updated please and let me know if there WILL be a sequel. ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m so glad you enjoyed the story so much, and I might very well write a sequel one day. I know there is a lot to pick up if I choose to do so. For now, however, I\'m on to new projects.
Date: 04/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions
I think this is a super story! I can't wait to see what else you have in store! It's really great and you should keep up the good work! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 04/03/06 Title: Chapter 2: At Second Glance
Still a good story! Nice job on keeping it slow. It doesn't feel rushed at all, which is usually something I notice in peoples' writing. Good job on it!!! Keep up the awesome work and please keep me posted! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you think it's good. And I'll keep posting, don't worry :)
Date: 04/20/06 Title: Chapter 4: Surprises
Wow there were a lot of surprises in this chapter! I had no idea some of those things were coming! Good writing (of course) and still keeping it slow. I'm still finding it hard to find any constructive criticism, so I'll keep reading to see if I find any at all. Great job and keep it up!! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m so glad you like the story so much. I just hope you like the rest of it as well :)
Date: 05/18/06 Title: Chapter 7: Changes
Oh gosh... Such a surprising chapter! He almost told her and even I got annoyed when she wouldn't listen and insisted on seeing the fields. At least she hasn't seen the workers yet. Very well written and great story so far. I love it! ~HStarRunner23
Author's Response: Thank you :D I\'m so glad you do.