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03/30/06

Reviews by JC_Cainstone

I Dreamed a Dream by grangergurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Merope's life with Tom. The first one-shot songfic in my Les Mis Series.

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: I Dreamed a Dream

That was good, if a little hurried! I can't believe, being a massive Les Mis fan, that I never saw the connection between Merope and Tom and Fantine and her life!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I know, it went a little fast, but I\'m really impatient when it comes to stories. *hehe* I never noticed the amazing connection, either, until I was thinking up a plot for the song. Then I was like, \"Oh, wow, why not do Merope?\" Then for On My Own, it was like, \"Well, maybe Ginny?\" I loved the song so much I couldn\'t think of an appropriate plot, so I just settled for Ginny. Thanks again!!

On My Own by grangergurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: How does Ginny feel when Harry leaves Hogwarts?

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: On My Own

That was powerful and sad! I think you did do that amazing song justice, as this fic has an interesting perspective and connections to the song and the writing. I, however, have written my own fic to the very same song! Entitled...On My One! Lol, anyway, great piece of literature, two thumbs way way up (to quote Hercules!)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I really appreciate it. I\'ll have to go read your fic!! Thanks again!!

After by Aelan Greenleaf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When the Final Battle has past, when the war of all wars has come to an end, what then? What happens after for the Boy, the Man, who lived?

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: After

God, that was sad! I love your style of writing as it is so emotional and thought out. And, although I don't necessarily think that Harry would ever think or act exactly as you have portrayed him, this was a beautiful and well-written fic!

At Last by MaraudersAffair

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Remus has always admired Lily from afar, but who would have known they were destined to be together? Follow Remus and Lily through their wedding.

I am MaraudersAffair of Gryffindor and this is for the August challenge, number one - wedding day.

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lovely

Wow that's really good! I completely caught the tension between James and Remus and I loved the description you gave of James. The characters were perfectly in character and I love this pairing! If I had a hat, I would take it off to you!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! You know, I really like this pairing as well. I sort of felt bad for James in this fic, didn\'t you? :D Thanks for the comment!

James's Sketchbook by Houlestar

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Lily placed the violin on the floor, the sorrowful song only added to her misery. She could still feel Snape’s kiss on her mouth, and wondered why she had done such a thing. Looking up at the doorway she saw James standing there, and a new emotion filled her, something she hadn’t felt before...

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 09/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really good! Some parts were slightly confusing and needed re-reading, but on the whole, a great fic, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

The Perfect Cliché by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Here's the story of awkward situations. The story of a stubborn girl and a determined boy. The story of broom closets, bra straps and declarations of affection. Here's the fairy-tale story of how Lily Evans finally fell for the bullying toerag James Potter. *one-shot*

Edited 10/26/08.

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really good! I loved the personality of James, the whole storyline was not filled with the usual Marauder cliches, and Sirius' reaction at the end was hilarious! Well done!

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: First detention...87 more to go...

Well, I finally got myself over here to check this out on the website - I am impressed! During all my critisms in editing, I believe I forgot to mention how utterly brilliant this is. You have an original style and a huge vocabulary and this is something to be truly proud of. Thank you for sharing your skills with us!

J.C Cainstone

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You are the greatest beta! Lol, it is entirely MY pleasure to share it. I am proud of it too, not meaning to boast or anything. Thanks again!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: First detention...87 more to go...

Wow, this is really excellent! I love the style that Lily writes in and many parts were very funny - I can't wait to beta the rest!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Can\'t wait to have the rest beat-d!;-)

Cutting Down His Shadow by patelnotpatil

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Meera Rupali Chanduramani has had the media in her face since the day she was born, seeing as she is the daughter of the most feared wizard of the century. However, her values are not the same as her fathers and she wants the world to know. Follow her journey through Hogwarts - classes, Quidditch, romance - and see how she manages to break away from the image as "the princess of evil" - how she manages to cut down the shadow her father cast over her life.

Higher rating for some issues mentioned in later chapters.

DEAR FAITHFUL READERS:
I swear I have not abandoned this fic. It's hard to write because I have so much work to do in college, but I'm writing the chapter little by little as time goes on. I may not be able to upload it until after the hacker problems with MNFF are fixed, but know that this story is still alive and kicking. I am NOT leaving Meera. No way.
Love you all!
Ishita

Categories: Post-Hogwarts
Characters: None
Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Words: 34383 | Hits: 1617 | Published: 01/29/07 | Updated: 01/22/08
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Reviewer: JC_Cainstone Signed
Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Excellent chapter! Despite all my critisms whilst editing, I don't think I ever told you how good this chapter really is. It's full of originality and fantastic characters. Congratulations on getting it submitted!

J.C Cainstone

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It definitely would not have been as good without your help though. Yay for awesome beta readers! heehee

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