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04/12/06

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Sheets of Wisdom by grape_2010

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter and Sirius Black have some final words they'd like to share with Harry, and the only way they can do that is by writing him letters. Harry finds them, and is changed forevermore.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sheets of Wisdom

Like always, you have written a wonderful story. I think you portrayed Sirius and James very well. This has a great plot; it's something I definitely wouldn't have thought of. Great job!
~JBV

You Tell Her by SnorkackCatcher

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: As the Trio begin their quest, Hermione has an uneasy feeling that there's something very important Harry and Ron aren't telling her. And as it happens, she's absolutely right. But some things just aren't easy to tell when you're sure your friend won't want to hear them ... [Set shortly post-HBP. Gen + the canon ships.]

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 07/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Story Text

This is a great story! I really like the idea; it's very creative. Good job!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Girl Meets Werewolf by Aly Delacour

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin is committed to doing all he can for the Order, all he can do to protect Harry, all he can do to rid the world of Voldemort. But something is distracting him from his duty and he is not used to his heart ruling his head. Nymphadora Tonks is young, eager and naive. As she tries to prove that she is a capable witch and find a place for herself in the Order of the Phoenix, she finds herself falling for the last person she expected to.

Categories: Remus/Tonks
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Words: 14041 | Hits: 1385 | Published: 07/21/06 | Updated: 09/03/06
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Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/03/06 Title: Chapter 2: A New Recruit

This is a good story. You are undoubtably a talented writer. Great job!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thanks very much :)

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: A New War

I agree that this is a great beginning. You have very good descriptions. Keep updating!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you! Updates on their way :)

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/11/06 Title: Chapter 3: A Meeting

Great story! I like how you give us all the background information. You also have some good details. Keep writing!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you, I was aiming to try and fill in a lot of the blanks that Harry doesn\'t see, without contradicting the books. Hope you\'ll keep reading it, the next chapter has been submitted for validation so will be up soon.

Faithful by malko050987

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Post-OotP one-shot. Written from Hedwig's POV, as she tries to help Harry deal with Sirius' death. Harry/Ginny

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Faithful

This is very well-written. You took an idea that most people (including me) would've never thought of and turned it into a great story. I think you captured Harry, Ginny, and Hedwig's feelings very well. I especially liked the ending, where he eventually signs it "Love, Harry". Great job!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I\'m glad you like the story :D Chris

Winning More than the Cup by Fading

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: How many times had Hermione wanted to be a Mrs. Ronald Weasley? She’d lost count over the years.

A Ron/Hermione & Harry/Ginny fanfic that takes place at the Quidditch World Cup.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good story! Like everyone else says, it's really sweet. I don't think it's too short, though. Keep writing!
~JBV

Author's Response: I feel so unoriginal in my responses...thank you for the kind words and encouragement, JBV =) & I really like your name, too.

Love Is by smiley10792

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Tonks never wanted to fall in love with him. Remus never wanted to fall in love with her. But there's nothing they can do to change it. Through mishaps and mistakes, attacks and rescues, Tonks and Remus learn exactly what love truly is.

She felt some sort of strange and scary electricity rush through her body as she looked up at him. His face was confused, but there was something else in his expression. Was it fear? Or was it some kind of hope?

“I have to go,” Tonks said. She felt like her internal organs were exploding.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1- Scary Electricity

*Does first reviewer dance* Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
~JBV

Author's Response: I just finished writing it!

Waiting for Spring by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Contrary to what Sirius thought, Remus had never been concerned with propriety. He’d been determined to keep strict command over his mind and body...until Nymphadora.

*Remus pov outtake to Promise of a Spring Moon.*

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting for Spring

Good story! I enjoyed reading it from Remus's point of view. He is so sweet!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you! He is sweet, in a good, not cavity inducing, way. ^_^ Lucky Tonks!

Madame Puddifoot’s by GoldenTigress

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When in Hogsmeade to get a few things for Bill and Fleur’s wedding, yet another row sends Ron and Hermione in different directions. How does a certain tea shop help them make up?

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: The one and only chapter

I like this! It's a really cute story. I love Mrs. Weasley's reaction at the end: riprimanding them, but secretly pleased. Great job!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thanks! I had alot of fun with writing the ending.

Fire and Ice by he he helupin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin sits by a fire and ponders over his life, wife, and child.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 11/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful story! I really like the line "The fire dies just like everything else." All the metaphors with the fire are amazing. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

From the Mods by MNFF Staff

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A collection of one-shots centered around celebration, happiness, family, or love. Each chapter is a different one-shot from a different mod-- a gift from us to you. Happy birthday, MNFF! *Bows to Authors*

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Friends in Strange Places

This is a great idea. I can't wait for more chapters. I really liked Dumbledore's characterization; it was perfect. Great story, Anasuya!
~JBV

'Twas The Night Before The Yule Ball by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry receives some solid advice from a friend on the eve of the Yule Ball.

This poem was written by Gmariam of Ravenclaw for the December Challenge. It is for the third prompt, a parody of a Christmas Carol.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Visit from Hagrid

This is a great poem! I loved the hippogriffs' names, too. Poetry's never really been my thing, but I really like this one. Great job and good luck in the challenge, Gina!
~JBV

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for stopping to read this poem! I\'m so glad you liked it. Poetry\'s not really mine thing either, except around Ravenclaw. ;) But I had such a good model to work with on this one and a fun story to tell so I thought I\'d go for it. I\'m glad you enjoyed the hippogriff\'s names as well, that was fun! Thanks again for reading and leaving such a lovely review!! ~Gina :)

Conversation With An Angel by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James needs a miracle to get Lily to give him a chance. Luckily, Christmas is the time of miracles. From a simple conversation with a mysterious woman in Hogsmeade, James finds the courage to tell Lily how he feels.

Winner of the the Winter Tales challenge 'A Winter Miracle'.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Conversation With An Angel

Wow! This is a wonderful story! It is so well written and perfect. It's really sweet and magical. There isn't a single thing I would change about it. Great job and good luck in the challenge!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thanks!

Pain Can Lead to Laughter by lily_writes

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This one-shot was made as a sequel/follow up to Before They Died. It follows the tragic tale of the day that led to an innocent man to be falsely imprisoned for twelve long, hard years. This fic also offers an explanation as to why he was laughing when the Ministry picked him up.

(Violence warning is just a precaution)

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 01/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Day After A Worse Night

Great story! I've never seen one about what happened that day. It was very interesting to read your take on Sirius and Peter's encounter and their feelings. I liked the way you tied in Peter's cowardice with some cleverness, because I truly believe that Peter was not as clumsy and stupid as most authors make him out to be. Great job!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you. I remember reading something about how some writers make Peter into this meek and off-to-the-side type of character, and that is wrong because he was a Marauder, so I figured that he must have some brains. Plus, aren\'t rats typically symbolic of sneakiness?

Worth Having by stelladarcy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The steady thrum of her heart sustains her as all the words she wishes she were brave enough to say crowd about on the tip of her tongue. All left unspoken. She is a charlatan, a liar, and most of all, a coward. Oh yes, she is a very clever girl, too clever by far. But afraid by more. Ron/Hermione

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so sweet! I love how you tie in the grandmother with the same name at the end. All of your characters were very in-character and the Familius Charm was really neat. This is a great story! You are obviously a very talented writer. Good job!
~JBV

Lily Did You Know? by Madame Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: For the Winter's Tale "A Christmas Carol: Parody" by Madame Marauder of Gryffindor House. A parody to the song "Mary Did You Know?"

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lily Did You Know?

You did a great job with this! It really made me think about how much Harry has already gone through and how much more he has to do. It was perfect! Good luck in the challenge!
~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad it made you think. Everyone assumes that parodies are meant to be funny, but you can take the challenge seriously and write something else. Thanks for your review and well-wishing!

Anorexia by StepUpTimneh

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ginny battles with Anorexia Nervosa after who true love deserts her.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 01/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Anorexia

Wow! This is extremely well-written and very true to the effects of anorexia. Although I have never suffered from an eating disorder, I have read many accounts by girls who have, and your story is spot-on. Your characterization of Ginny as she struggles with her disease is very accurate and believeable. I really can't find nitpicks or anything at all to give you, even any grammatical errors. Great job!
~JBV

Author's Response: Your review meant a lot. Thank you so much, I tried my best to make it real.

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Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: None

Great story! You are a very talented author. I can't wait to see what happens next! I just received chapter two, so I guess I'll know pretty soon. =)
~JBV

Author's Response: And you are an excellent Beta! Sorry if the second chapter is difficult...The story in the middle was a mess as it was and so writing it was difficult. Thank you again! Eskimo

'Too' Times Three by Subversa

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Remus has the same objections every time the subject is discussed.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil Signed
Date: 02/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so sweet! I love Remus/Tonks, but I don't usually read them anymore because it seems like all the plots are the same. Yours was different, and I really liked it. Your descriptions and all the little details are wonderful. Great job with this!
~JBV

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